Improve & Encourage #15: Solcar
From the blog "Gay Stories"
Hope everyone has had a good month so far. We're getting closer to wrapping up the Improve & Encourage feature. This month we have a critique on Carlos Hazday's story Solcar. Let's take a look at Parker Owen's critique!
Critiqued by: Parker Owens
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Solcar, once a High Lord of Star Clusters and a member of the Council engaged in a proscribed act. He made love to a hum