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Hi all. So after missing last month's blog, I got my act together. Thanks @Timothy M. for kicking my butt. So with much ado, enjoy!

 

 

Jay's Loelife
by Mrsgnomie

Reviewer: chris191070
Status: Complete
Word Count: 180,437

This is a truly amazing story from Mrsgnomie, everything is just perfect about it. But before attempting to read this story you really need to read Boss Nanny first. 

We follow Loren as he becomes top of the Social Media industry. Loren didn't have an easy start to life, but he learned to survive. Loren was always missing something in his life to make it complete.

Things get complicated when along comes Jay. Jay a NFL footballer who's life has always been relatively easy for him, until he meets Loren.

Destined to be together, it takes quite a while for them to get together. Because Loren is a hard nut to crack, but once he cracks, things progress from there.

But Loren and Jay do not have a smooth ride, they both have problems and issues to be worked through, individually and as a couple.

You really need to read this story to learn about Jay, Loren and their friends.

Category: Fiction Genres:  Comedy, General Fiction, Romance  Sub-genres: Comedy Modern, Drama, General Romance, Contemporary Romance  Tags: adult, gay, north america, anal, light-hearted, serious, modern, love  Rating: Mature

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raven1

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This is a great story full of fun, adventure and good friends.  I'm not the only one to think it is an awesome tale.  Just look at the number of recommends and reviews it has been given.  

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Mancunian

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6 hours ago, raven1 said:

This is a great story full of fun, adventure and good friends.  I'm not the only one to think it is an awesome tale.  Just look at the number of recommends and reviews it has been given.  

I couldn't agree more, but you forgot to mention that there are also a few assholes written into the story, hey every good story needs an asshole or two they help to bring out the best in other characters. And you forgot the fun of reading all the chapter comments, they are almost like part of the story and definitely part of the fun and enjoyment of it. 

It's fun story to read on it's own, but as part of a series enjoyment is greatly boosted if you read all stories in the series in order. In my opinion you can't go wrong by reading it.

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kbois

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So I totally forgot to look at blogs until today. Sue me. 

I miss Loe and Jay. They were fun to spend so much time with. A lot of time. Oh those last minute changes were a blast!

Honestly though, this is a great story. Well worth a good binge session or two. 

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Mrsgnomie

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5 hours ago, kbois said:

So I totally forgot to look at blogs until today. Sue me. 

I miss Loe and Jay. They were fun to spend so much time with. A lot of time. Oh those last minute changes were a blast!

Honestly though, this is a great story. Well worth a good binge session or two. 

 

You just happen to forget to check out the blogs when one of my stories is featured? Interesting...

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kbois

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46 minutes ago, Mrsgnomie said:

You just happen to forget to check out the blogs when one of my stories is featured? Interesting...

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raven1

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32 minutes ago, kbois said:

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You are both back to your usual hijinks.  I think you both should consider the needs of your readers and get back to writing....now!  Do I need to get Chris after you both?  

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Mancunian

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4 minutes ago, raven1 said:

You are both back to your usual hijinks.  I think you both should consider the needs of your readers and get back to writing....now!  Do I need to get Chris after you both?  

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I did think about threatening to put them both over my knee, but knowing them they would probably like it :rofl::rofl:

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raven1

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15 minutes ago, Mancunian said:

I did think about threatening to put them both over my knee, but knowing them they would probably like it :rofl::rofl:

:rofl::rofl: Maybe you could use it as an enticement to write faster!  Once these two get started trading snarky remarks, it usually fills several pages.  

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kbois

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1 hour ago, raven1 said:

You are both back to your usual hijinks.  I think you both should consider the needs of your readers and get back to writing....now!  Do I need to get Chris after you both?  

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Back to our usual hijinks.... we never stopped. 

We've both been writing. Chill. 

1 hour ago, Mancunian said:

I did think about threatening to put them both over my knee, but knowing them they would probably like it :rofl::rofl:

Ummm..... 

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51 minutes ago, raven1 said:

 

:rofl::rofl: Maybe you could use it as an enticement to write faster!  Once these two get started trading snarky remarks, it usually fills several pages.  

And?

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Mrsgnomie

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1 hour ago, Mancunian said:

I did think about threatening to put them both over my knee, but knowing them they would probably like it :rofl::rofl:

@kbois definitely would!!! 

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kbois

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1 hour ago, Mrsgnomie said:

@kbois definitely would!!! 

Pffttt... like you wouldn't.

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