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  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Another excellent chapter,Sorry for the unintentional spoiler from last chapter.It proves even a blind squirrel can find some nuts sometimes.If that happens again DM me and I'll delete the part.So does a musician drop by to eat at the diner and then asks Tony to sing for his band?Stop,Stop.STOP!!!!!LOL
  3. Mike Mitchell, a founding member of the band that recorded 'Louie Louie,' has died
  4. CLJobe

    Chapter 8

    Thanks Chris. Love is in the air
  5. CLJobe

    Chapter 8

    They are and I think they will stay close
  6. chris191070

    Chapter 8

    Awesome chapter
  7. mikedup

    Chapter 8

    Awesome chapter, I am glad he can carry on singing and can entertain everyone,they are getting really close to each other
  8. Today
  9. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 20

    Oh, dear, how gacious of you, and the old schoolteacher-troll has found nearly zero excuse to nip at your toes (and from me that probably is a statement of high praise). Many, many times in reading stories, probably by youngr authors, I have had to bite my tongue to keep from over-correcting their work. I consider those many grammatical errors I see in some works as the fault of poot instruction. I would blame them on the Covid isolation except that they were preent long before the Covid problem, so there is nothing left to blame them on but lack of education. Sometimes I do have a problem th
  10. CincyKris

    Chapter 23

    In all the timelines, Davey's mom has been selfish and self-absorbed. She seems more vindictive and unhinged in this one. She was somewhat of a martyr in the other ones (where she was wronged by David Sr.), and she was killed before she could revert to full martyrdom. I agree that someone from the government needs to have a talk with her, but with her current mindset, jail would push her past the point of reason for ever.
  11. A nice bright sunny Sunday morning. Can't say warm, there's frost on my car here in Maryland. I experimented with poker last night. Instead of sleeping 4 hours, getting up at 3am and going to the casino, I just decided to nap for an hour around 9pm, got up at 10pm and went. I noticed that as it got later the "recreational" players (recreational is defined as people who work normal 40 hr/wk jobs) started to toss more and more money into the pot. It was like they didn't want to have to cash out. So I made $3500, played until 430am when the crowd really died down and then had a nice rid
  12. astone2292

    Chapter 20

    Bring on the grammatical comments!!! If there are numerous on a single chapter, feel free to shoot me a PM, but I am always looking for feedback! I want to be the best writer I can be, and feedback is necessary to accomplish that goal.
  13. Depending on how much I write between college graduation and inauguration, we'll see Owen and CJ age and hopefully mature. I've tinkered with J's approach to life, mellowing out certain views, and will continue to do so.
  14. Carlos Hazday

    GMA XVI

    Good guess. Olga moving in was inspired by my maternal grandmother living with us while I grew up, and ny my youngest brother's fixation with multi-generational households. Our parents, even when they had to move to a retirement home, refused to move to first New Jersey then Chicago. Weather and language. He finally got his wish when his mother-in-law moved in last year after her divorce. I think I wrote the shark encounter during Shark Week on Discovery. CJ's loose language may get him in trouble one day. Although I've tried to showing policing himself when not around his inner cir
  15. astone2292

    Chapter 19

    Well, I've been seeing everything absolutely perfect on my end!
  16. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 20

    When I make a comment in my persona as the Old Troll I frequently forget to ask the author´s permission. Making gramatical comments on a story is just the retired teacher in me sneaking out around the corners. Some authors accept my grammatical comments in the spirit in which they are intended – one of making the work read better -- other authors quite frankly tell me to 'fuck off' -- the story is theirs to tell. If my suggestions (and that is truly what they are, suggestions) irritate you I will dive back into my cave beneath the bridge and not say anything more. But in your case, they are so
  17. astone2292

    Chapter 18

    Oh, dear. I will go fix this right now! Thanks for pointing this out, and anytime you see mistakes, feel free to call them out.
  18. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 19

    In reading back over several chapters, I have discovered that a number of my comments seem to have faded into black print on a black background. This is not because I wish to hide them from you, as the author, or any of your follow-on commenters. It is a symptom of advancing age when I forget to change the set-up on my lap-top from the dark mode that I use to read the story to something else so that it shows up in either normal or dark mode. Now, if I can only remember to pick a color that will work for both (I have to reselect it every time I comment as it defaults to black-on-dark). But you
  19. CLJobe

    Chapter 7

    There are several more chapters which I think will answer your questions.
  20. CLJobe

    Chapter 7

    Thank you Chris.
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