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  2. me too 😂 i’m just surprised that Jack and Nigel didn’t try something to scare the boys as well 🤣
  3. I don't think Toby has the flu, I believe the Leukemia is back as much as I hate to think or even say it. I just wanna be wrong in Toby's case.
  4. Today
  5. dutch woman

    Bad Puppy

    Yess!! Finally the story is back and it is getting more interesting and more interesting
  6. drpaladin

    Part V, chapter 8

    The way Russell talked about the floppy it wasn't clear how long ago it was. I still have a portable computer here somewhere that operates solely off of floppy disks. Computers were a novelty back then.
  7. bundu_st

    Chapter 53

    It's a bit surprising that they don't seem too worried by Roku getting a check up.... That could potentially reveal some information they might not want anyone else having about the demi shou no? 🤔
  8. Make him go for the gods now. I want an epic battle with Raiyo winning. 😂
  9. dughlas

    #774 Me and I

    I had to pause at "she whispers" thinking I misunderstood the protaganist's gender. I like that they are the same and yet not. That is a nice twist. Now as to why he is planning to celebrate alone ...
  10. Will Hawkins

    A New Family?

    There are some dark clouds on the horizon. First the tension between the bad members -- it is hard to imagine a group of 'twen-teens', especially complicated by musician egos getting along for months on the road without stress; sooner or later, more likely sooner, Ryder is going to lose the support of his grandmother; he may also burn himself out from stress or turn to chemical support, either of which might mean the loss of his music support: and Teddy probably does not fully realize the pressures he is going yo be under in medical school and beginning a career, without Ryder's support. Hang on to your seats readers, it is going to be a bumpy night!
  11. hmm i thought that Vinnie’s parents were in one of the other planes not those that hit the twin towers 🤔 even if it is the same day
  12. ObicanDecko

    Spies With Eyes

    It took me a while, but I'm finally caught up with the story! Salem keeps surprising me (and Johnny, apparently). It was so sweet of him to give a present to Johnny and ask him to be his boyfriend, and as Johnny said, it's not about the gift - it's about the fact that he worked hard for it. I'm really curious how things will develop between them and how others will react if/when they find out. I feel like things with Salem could change at any moment because of his mental health, and there's also the matter of his mom, which I'm sure we'll hear more about later.
  13. Black Paper

    Raven’s Roof

    I'd give this a Rainbow reaction, but, GA doesn't have one. So- 🌈
  14. Carlos Hazday

    American Land

    @Bushba Thank you! I don't know If or when those two items may come in handy, but I'll keep them in mind. In my defense, the 11/10 birthday I may not have featured Since I highlighted 11/11 a couple of times instead. But now I'll try to work it in just for you. I'm certain I'll have another Marine as a character again.
  15. Will Hawkins

    A New Ryder

    If both boys continue in the pattern they have spoken of, Teddy will be going on to Medical School and entering into a long hard row to hoe until graduation as a MD. Ryder will climb the charts as a singer as Teddy acquires his degree, But teenage singers are like celestial novas, they flare brightly, but then burn out quickly. At some time in the future, not too far away, Ryder will need Teddy again. A rock to build his life after the stage upon. I can only hope that they will not lose one another before that point.
  16. I have an old friend named Liebe. Well, her name's Elizabeth, and the nickname was given to her because it's what Queen Elizabeth II was supposedly called. My goal was to honor my friend and give the girl a distinctive moniker. I knew CJ and Owen would have a daughter early in my plotting and planned accordingly. I named Owen's sister Elizabeth so they could name their daughter the same. Georgetown University requires at least a year of a foreign language, so I had CJ pick German even though he could have tested out of the requirement because of his fluency in Spanish. He would know what Liebe means. I speak four but aside from English, they're all Romance languages. Zero knowledge of German here!
  17. Thorn Wilde

    Online

    I have found lately that my attempts at communication have been met with a lot of misunderstanding... I have tried to alter my words accordingly, but it isn't always enough. And I know that I myself am guilty of attempting to see beyond the words and seeing the wrong thing. Assuming sarcasm where there is none. Expecting hostility when people try to be kind. It's a vicious circle. Thanks for your comments, Parker. ❤️
  18. I feel bad for Johnny, he's in over his head and feels like he has no one to talk to about what he's going through. Salem is scary and that ending does not sound good...
  19. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 7

    Honey is my favorite, I want to marry him!
  20. It seems that there is a beginning of a flip-flop in personality between Ryder and Teddy with Teddy becoming more insecure and Ryder's self-confidence building. Like this is the direction for the story to progress in -- sort of a second act. Interesting and great authorship. Keep up the great work, Ace, I really appreciate your style. Mr Will
  21. IBEX

    Chapter 1

    If nly I could write....this pretty much would be my style! So yeah, I love it! And not only for selfish reasons, I have to admit! 😇
  22. quokka

    Alo Chapter 35

    Hmmm, maybe a second book, I need to finish the current ones and a few others that are in line...
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 97

    I had thought Lakshou had already been handled THAT way. Chomper is a hand full. Fire dangerous. lol
  24. Butcher, you brought up some good point that might come up again as you continue reading. This particular book was first posted in the second quarter of 2001 and much has changed since then. I'm sure many of your questions will be answered in future chapters. Thank you for the feedback.
  25. JeffreyL

    Conduit

    I feel a bit like I just visited the Twilight Zone. This spirit involvement is pretty bizarre. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks.
  26. JeffreyL

    Chapter 4

    Another great chapter with good dates for Brandon and Isaac. More good writing from you, and more good reading for me! Thanks.
  27. JeffreyL

    Chapter 3

    Brandon is a great character! I enjoyed the way he took on Isaac and his problems. I really enjoy his interactions with his coworkers! It will be interesting to see how things go on his date with Hal. Thanks.
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