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  2. pvtguy

    Chapter 13

    As with all of us, our views and values are formed from our experiences and our reflections upon them. Keith has probably lived a very difficult life because he was effeminate and not "masculine". Taking into consideration his age, it is not at all unbelievable. However, he has closed himself off from developing attitudes of today's youth. Are there still those who discriminate and are narrow minded? Of course! Yet, there are more accepting people today than when Keith was young. As he has not had by choice interaction with children/teens, he is most likely unaware of the changes. Still, he sounds open to give Cole a chance. If he truly cares for Morgan, that will thaw his frozen attitude at least a little bit. He actually could make a 180 degree turn - we'll just have to see what the author reveals. I'm sure Teo and Alessia want a closer and less abrasive family situation. Again, let's see what happens. Next chapter, please!
  3. weinerdog

    Kissing Friends

    I'm certain The Fitzpatrick's will explain the situation to the police. Unfortunately they don't always get it right but I see no problem there.The real sad thing is his dad dying is a good thing in Tyler's life.Great story
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 14

    Can you imagine a young boy of his age suddenly learning how tenuous the supposed deep love his parents have for him really is?
  5. Will Hawkins


    I wonder about the Reverends change of heart – I find it difficult to accept that a person so basically evil as he is portrayed can turn 180º so quickly and easily no matter what the provocation. Well, we shall see as we read on, Wayne. At any rate you are a genius at creating characters both good guys and bad. It makes for a fascinating read!
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter Two

    Oh my God. A lazy, bug obsessed boy in coldly calculating survival mode. Add in the present situation and a nasty granny and I see where we're headed. This is so not going to end well.
  7. R. Eric

    Chapter 90 Morality

    You're right. Both of you. Even I could sense it. Writing styles change with the writer. I felt it stagnate. There are more than a few times I felt...less motivated to write and had to make myself do it. I'll get it back. I make no promises about the rabbits.
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  9. Thank you again, Goodie, for reading and for the comment. This was a hard chapter to write, because I knew DCF would be taking Rob away. But you are right, Adam is on the right side of the law in this, and DCF has to investigate the accusation, so it's a crappy situation all around. I can't wait to see what you say for the next two chapters.
  10. Will Hawkins

    The Devil

    Harlan has made move one against the evil preacher, unfortunately those who don the armor of righteousness very seldom give up that easily. This is just the opening salvo between Harlan and Preacher, Let's see where the war goes from here. Mr Will
  11. Parker Owens


    Elias and Rayne share a first kiss, and it’s simply beautiful. The dinner date was described so well, we were the invisible guests, not Shawn. I’m wondering about Shawn, and his reaction to the whole scenario. Could there be another reason for his watery smile? In any case, Harlan has better realize that Bailey deserves his unvarnished truth, sooner rather than later. Awesome chapter!
  12. Will Hawkins


    It is good to see that there is a potential crack in the Biblical armor worn by that a~~ h~~~Minister. Unfortunately amateur 'do gooders' like him frequently surround themselves with 'self righteousness' to the point that they are unreachable. Let's hope for the sake of Rayne's sanity that there is a widening of that crack to the point of preacher destruction. Mr.Will '
  13. Awesome chapter. Fantastic to see the base dedicated to fallen soldiers who never returned by the Governor General. The new home sounds fantastic.
  14. Parker Owens

    Chapter 2

    Now the mystery deepens: what is Jimmy, and who is he hunting? And why? Even as we linger under the moon’s silver light, I’ll be looking forward to answers next week.
  15. chris191070

    Chapter 12

    We're at 62 please can we have the next chapter @Dabeagle
  16. Goodie, thank you for reading, commenting, and for your insight and opinions on the chapters. I've enjoyed reading each one. Yeah, the next three chapters are going to be a ride to remember.
  17. Parker Owens

    Chapter 1

    Well, now I’m scared to put into the woods under the full moon! Great beginning.
  18. Thank you, Goodie! That sting that Adam feels because of his brother, I've felt due to my sister. I haven't spoken to her going on 8 years. As for the grandparents, grief can make you do stupid stuff.
  19. Thank you, Goodie, for reading and for the comment. I truly appreciate your thoughts and opinion on the story so far.
  20. KayDeeMac

    Chapter 7

    To say Mom is a little unstable is like calling the Pacific Ocean a lake!! The woman needs to be committed! Very glad Andrew grew some!!
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 4

    Glen has a nice family. Nicky isn't the typical annoying little brother type. We already have a cohesive crew for the next fishing trip.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    It seems as though we already have a couple here.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    The crap with Lou could have gone worse. I hope this will be his last trip. No need to tempt fate.
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    You hooked us nicely with such a short chapter. I doubt Lou is done with causing problems.
  25. Will Hawkins

    The Word of Man

    Pastor Rogers is so typical – he is in a situation that is exposing his ignorance of the psychology of a member of his flock and his failure as a supporter. It's good to see Harlan's support and anger at the preacher. I am a believer in the fact that 90% of the wars in which mankind has been involved throughout history have been caused by religious fanatics who have cherry-picked the Bible to support their ignorance and narrow minds. Even an agnostic like me can read the love that Christ wanted us to express for one another. Pastor Rogers is NOT a psychologist and he should leave medical treatment to those who are properly trained. This is not 'hate mail' directed to the author, if anything it demonstrates how well the author is doing in presenting his characters.
  26. I don't think it needs explanation here as you said that people needed to read the first and fourth book before reading this one as there would be material covered in those books that was needed for Noah's story. After all if you are reading the Barnstable Series you would be familiar with all the background information about Charlie and Jacob's relationship breakdown.
  27. Will Hawkins

    A Treasure Lost

    Just one small hint – the difference between shaking and nodding of one's head. Normally to nod your head is to agree or answer in the affirmative; to shake your head is to respond in the negative; answering 'no', 'not', or 'never' to a question or situation. As a reader who has not been introduced to the characters here by reading a previous story, it is going to take me a few chapters to get up to date on the relationships and reactions of the several characters. But your writing style makes me eager to do so. Writing about a character who cannot speak is a real challenge, but you are handling it well. I am fascinated watching the relationships be created, keep up the good work and, yes, you have a hooked reader. Mr Will
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