Last Goodbye

[Benji]

Damn!! (like you were going to tell me anyway, Hahah!)

[Meeko]

Great chapter, dude!

 

Man, what exactly does Darren do for a living? Why is he so uptight all the time? I get that he's worried about Josh's safety, but whipping that gun out was hardcore.

 

Great line about stealing Jayce's porn...and it was super sweet of Trent to push Josh on the swing...he's not all goofy apparently.

 

One of my favorite parts was when Josh thought he was going to die from Queen. Btw, nice name! LOL. Anyway, I loved that Josh was forcing himself to think good thoughts if those were the last ones he was going to have. Kind of like your life flashing before your eyes, but in this case, it's only the good moments and important people that are remembered. A small piece of the story, but powerful enough to stick in my mind.

 

Awesome and I can't wait to read more. You know when I get to Hawaii, I'm going to make you write all the time even if we're hanging out.

 

 

I've had an encounter like that before, you

[bedseller]

This story has hooked another reader. All the scenes come over as so real that I cant wait for the next chapter. Is it all written and you are just teasing us with a slow posting or dont even you know yet how the story will end up ?

Either way please keep posting

Steve

[Meeko]

This story has hooked another reader. All the scenes come over as so real that I cant wait for the next chapter. Is it all written and you are just teasing us with a slow posting or dont even you know yet how the story will end up ?

Either way please keep posting

Steve

 

 

Hey Steve

 

First thanks for posting here; I'm glad you

[Conner]

I'm loving your character, Trent. The world needs more Trent's.

[KJames]

Hey, Mike! Aloha~! The story's progressing great, and I've been going through the tear jerker every time you post another chapter. You realize that you're giving good old what's-his-name a run for his money as "King of Cliffhangers" don't you?

Edited January 17, 2009 by kjames

[Benji]

Well, that and the fact that we don't even have a hint into Josh's orientation!!

[Meeko]

I'm loving your character, Trent. The world needs more Trent's.

 

I agree the world really does need more Trent's. Glad to see your still reading Conner

 

 

 

Hey, Mike! Aloha~! The story's progressing great, and I've been going through the tear jerker every time you post another chapter. You realize that you're giving good old what's-his-name a run for his money as "King of Cliffhangers" don't you?

 

 

Hey Kelly!

 

Thanks for reading the story, how about I buy you a box of Kleenex? =D

 

And I can't be King Of Cliffhanger, I mean I did start posting the story during 2009 sooo.... I guess your just going to have to vote for CJ

 

 

 

Well, that and the fact that we don't even have a hint into Josh's orientation!!

 

All I will say is that I have mentioned his orientation, but I'm not telling when!

 

Guess you'll just have to re-read it all muwahahaha

 

-Mike

[Benji]

Mike, you are truly evil!! I now have to re-read to see what I missed!! LOL

[KJames]

I agree the world really does need more Trent's. Glad to see your still reading Conner

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey Kelly!

 

Thanks for reading the story, how about I buy you a box of Kleenex? =D

 

And I can't be King Of Cliffhanger, I mean I did start posting the story during 2009 sooo.... I guess your just going to have to vote for CJ

 

 

 

 

 

All I will say is that I have mentioned his orientation, but I'm not telling when!

 

Guess you'll just have to re-read it all muwahahaha

 

-Mike

 

 

Actually, Mike, your prologue was last year!

[Meeko]

Actually, Mike, your prologue was last year!

 

 

Well that was on the sneak peek forums... Does that count? *Sobs*

 

SAY IT AIN"T SO!

[Fishwings]

"A pair of red eyes stared at me. The creature behind the eyes moved toward me very casually, as if it were sizing me up"

 

I honestly thought Josh met a werewolf, LOL. Really love the story so far Meeko. The pace is excellent, everything is dramatic and not overdone -- even the gun thing -- and... I'm deciding whether to abduct Trent or Jayce.

 

Don't keep us waiting : D!!

[WhatEvs_svEtahW]

That had to be the saddest thing i have read in my life

But i like how theres no way to tell if there are any relationships staring up...

when i think it would be Trent and josh. the story changes and i think its Jayce and Josh

really good story can't wait for the next chapter

[KJames]

Well that was on the sneak peek forums... Does that count? *Sobs*

 

SAY IT AIN"T SO!

 

Your prologue was in the sneek peeks, but chapter one was just before, or after, Thanksgiving.

 

It might work...it's a heck of a tear jerker!

Edited January 19, 2009 by kjames

[KJames]

That had to be the saddest thing i have read in my life

 

Yeah, it's sad...any story relating any death is sad...mostly any kind of physical pain inflicted onto a child...try reading "Shane" by vlista or A Special Place, Concord 5 & Oberlin 5, by Sequoyah, but remember your Kleenex...oh, and be prepared to read C5 and O5 in parallel, several chapters run concurrently due to different story locations.

Edited January 19, 2009 by kjames

[shadowgod]

Your prologue was in the sneek peeks, but chapter one was just before, or after, Thanksgiving.

 

It might work...it's a heck of a tear jerker!

 

Unfortunately....

 

Last Goodbye New! by Meeko Published: 01/02/2009 Updated: 01/15/2009

 

I wonder if we can send in early nominations for 2009??

[KJames]

Unfortunately....

 

 

 

I wonder if we can send in early nominations for 2009??

 

 

You got me...but the prologue was definitely before T'day in sneek's...

[Former Member]

I just discovered and started reading this last night. Wow, Meeko! You've already sucked me in! Like everyone else, you've done a wonderful job of pulling out emotions in me. My heart goes out to Josh. I really can't wait for more chapters!

[Meeko]

"A pair of red eyes stared at me. The creature behind the eyes moved toward me very casually, as if it were sizing me up"

 

I honestly thought Josh met a werewolf, LOL. Really love the story so far Meeko. The pace is excellent, everything is dramatic and not overdone -- even the gun thing -- and... I'm deciding whether to abduct Trent or Jayce.

 

Don't keep us waiting : D!!

 

 

Hey Fishwings

 

I was actually going for something like that, glad it worked, on you anyways. Thanks for the nice words, I was a little worried about moving the pace too fast but I'm glad you don't think so.

 

 

 

 

That had to be the saddest thing i have read in my life

But i like how theres no way to tell if there are any relationships staring up...

when i think it would be Trent and josh. the story changes and i think its Jayce and Josh

really good story can't wait for the next chapter

 

The saddest? awww go read some other stories like Ducans then hopefully mine won't be the saddest anymore, hehe. Thanks for reading

 

 

 

I just discovered and started reading this last night. Wow, Meeko! You've already sucked me in! Like everyone else, you've done a wonderful job of pulling out emotions in me. My heart goes out to Josh. I really can't wait for more chapters!

 

 

Hey Jessiflash

 

Read it all in one night? Im impressed, but I'm glad you're enjoying it!

 

The next chapter can be expected anytime this week, as soon as I get it back it's all yours.

 

-Mike

[Meeko]

Hey everyone, I now present you with...

 

Last Goodbye, Chapter 5

 

Happy reading all, and remember I welcome and encourage all forms of feedback, criticism.

 

-Mike

[KJames]

Okay, Meeko! Read 5--what a rush! But, but--you can't just have them MOVE! Josh has to find SOMETHING in the house besides his picture with Will! The Investigation was a good twist, though. But you're perfecting your cliffhanger skills while you're starting to write? :wacko: That's just NOT fair!

[wildone]

Hey Meeko,

 

Thanks for the chapter .

 

It is interesting that you give us a little bit more information and yet still leave questions out there. The biggest example I can think of is that you gave us the impression that Agent Morris and Roger were actually body guards of some type, and now we find out that they are FBI's. Yet...what is Darren's line of business. Obviously he is well to do, and not an underpaid government agent. Why is the FBI working or guarding Darren and his assets?

 

And to top things off, you're teasing us way too much . What would have Josh found on Jayce's computer if he had some more time to snoop around. Actually to tell you the truth, I like being teased, so take that as a compliment. If anything, it keeps me coming back for more.

 

Then you have the whole mystery for two chapters now on the mystery man all in black. What did Will do that attracted the evil characters attention. What did he die for that he is desperate enough to now pursue Josh?

 

Loving the story so far, so keep the chapters coming.

 

Thanks,

 

Steve

[Former Member]

They can't move! Then Josh won't be as close to Trent! Even if a romantic relationship isn't in their future, I am hoping to see a friendship form between the two.

 

Anyways, thanks for the chapter Mike! I'm really enjoying this story.

 

-Jess

Edited January 24, 2009 by jessiflash

[Phoenix]

I'm still dying to know how Will and Darren knew each other, and why Will was so quick to tell him him "secrets" like where to find Josh.

[Meeko]

Sorry for the very long delay, but I (Just my opinion) think this chapter was well worth the wait, AND it is a tad bit longer then normal soooo enjoy guys and girls.

 

Last Goodbye - Chapter 6

 

Happy reading all, and remember I welcome and encourage all forms of feedback and criticism. So don't be shy, post away!

 

-Mike