oboi83 Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 Hi all, I am new to this community. I've always been interested in creative writing but chose a different profession instead. Recently I have been more open about my sexuality which has really helped me with my creative side. I never had formal training in writing stories or poetry so will definitely need a lot of work. I really appreciate your comments and recommendations on any resources to help me self improve. Title: Would you Would you go, if I invite you to travel with me to the ends of the world? Would you listen, if I recite you poems from the words traversing the flowing stream of time? Would you be my perfect audience, if I play love ballads on the string chords resonating with those of your heart? Would you let me take care of you, if I ask you to move across an ocean to be with me? Would you walk with me, along this lonely and tortuous path called love? Would you stand defiantly with me, when our love is ridiculed and attacked? Would you stay with me, after leaves have fallen and flowers withered? None of those words can conquer a simple I Love You, from deep within my heart. And would you let me take your hand, if I ask you to? 1 Link to comment
Emi GS Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 Hi all, I am new to this community. I've always been interested in creative writing but chose a different profession instead. Recently I have been more open about my sexuality which has really helped me with my creative side. I never had formal training in writing stories or poetry so will definitely need a lot of work. I really appreciate your comments and recommendations on any resources to help me self improve. Title: Would you Would you go, if I invite you to travel with me to the ends of the world? Would you listen, if I recite you poems from the words traversing the flowing stream of time? Would you be my perfect audience, if I play love ballads on the string chords resonating with those of your heart? Would you let me take care of you, if I ask you to move across an ocean to be with me? Would you walk with me, along this lonely and tortuous path called love? Would you stand defiantly with me, when our love is ridiculed and attacked? Would you stay with me, after leaves have fallen and flowers withered? None of those words can conquer a simple I Love You, from deep within my heart. And would you let me take your hand, if I ask you to? That was great poem. But, as you are waiting for suggestions, you would have created a great Ghazalyaat out of it. The feeling and the way you repeated the first words, it could have suited perfectly. Coming to the learning part, for poems, just follow writing prompts forum and try to look at poetry prompts. Try from number 1. And you can also get help from professional here. All the best. Link to comment
Emi GS Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 You can also join with us on 'Live Poets Society' https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/41190-live-poets-society-–-a-corner-for-poetry/page-1 Link to comment
oboi83 Posted December 11, 2016 Author Share Posted December 11, 2016 Thank you so much. Link to comment
Site Moderator Reader1810 Posted December 11, 2016 Site Moderator Share Posted December 11, 2016 That was lovely and I'm not one for poetry. If you haven't' already, you should post this poem in "Live Poets Society" as Emi suggests. There are a number of talented and very welcoming poets who post there. It's a good first step to becoming an author on GA and publishing your poems for everyone's enjoyment. Good luck and write more please. 1 Link to comment
oboi83 Posted December 11, 2016 Author Share Posted December 11, 2016 Thank you so much. 1 Link to comment
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