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I'm looking for a beta and/or editor to help polish up a short story I cranked out for the Pride prompt. It's 7,200 words, contemporary romance centered around a bi bro trying to find his place while volunteering at his first Pride celebration, while crushing hard on another volunteer.

I'm looking for comments on content -- does it feel authentic/realistic? Does the romance feel well-earned and paced? Is there the right amount of swoon? And, since I banged this out real fast, editing is definitely needed too. I'm open to beta swapping romance, sci-fi, and/or fantasy works of any length.

Comments in-line in Google Docs is my preferred mode, but I'm open to whatever amount of feedback you're willing to give. PM me if you're interested!

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