Jason Rimbaud Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 Duel of Love By: Jason R. In the dark confines of a smoky bar Where gay boys gather from afar They have come together to this place To see who will rule forever in this place The symbol of this friendship war Between the one named, John And the broken-hearted boy, to be broken no more Enveloped by a trillion black lights Bodies groping and touching through the night To find a one to complete the sum Looking for that perfect lover but finding none And the one to decide the fate and the death Of the one named, John And the boy who held his breath The audience had gathered close for this 'fight of the bars' Friends of the broken-hearted boy had arrived, shining like stars And those that followed the one named, John, squealed out Glaring and smoking in the semi-dark, curses they shout And for a moment, all who had gathered silence fell Those of the one named, John And the boy who had lived his hell Then a cheer erupted, shouts and screams were loud As an olive skinned boy stepped up, through the crowd Arrogantly he pranced, his small hands held high Trailed by his minions, more than a few queers sighed And with that grand entrance the outcome was bleak Not for the one named, John But the boy all remembered as weak Another cheer erupted, this time the minions shook in pain As a swell of goodness flowed down like a cleansing rain Walking into that darken bar, there he stood awaiting this duel Neither blinking nor cringing, refusing to add fire to this fuel And there on the finger, a silver band was a gifted ring To the one named, John From the boy who urged the night to sing Then a persona, known both far and wide, appeared in all black Brandon, the bartender, had been elected to oversee this attack Opening the book of rules, each side hushed in awe As the neutral one, cleared his throat, and read the words he saw As he explained, in his soft golden voice The one named, John And the boy knew it was he who would make the choice "Now here's the rules, and each of you will abide Once you're finished, it will be I who decide The side who is defending, will get the first chance to speak Then one who feels wronged, will get the answers that he seeks" Prancing there, a smug expression and glazed eyes Was the one named, John As the boy steeled himself for the up-coming lies John cried out, "This is your last shot tonight." The boy just smiled, he had come prepared for a fight "You're dead meat boy," John yelled with glee Trying mentally to get the upper hand to steal the victory Because jeers and threats had before worked on this one And the one named, John Stared at the boy, confident, believing he already won Then Brandon rang the bell, the crowd cheered, it was on And John leaped out, making sure his blows were strong He brought up nights of drugs and casual sex The boy countered back saying all these things he regrets And the jabs of accusations of cheating and nights of lust The one named, John And the boy who felt love was a matter of trust For an hour and five minutes the two battled to a draw When the boy's hands came down, John was amazed at what he saw An opening in the boy's defense, he struck without a sound The blow of indifference, sent the boy crashing to the ground Minions roared in victory, encouraging the one still on his feet While the one named, John Peered down at the boy, awaiting the ten-count of defeat Brandon, the bartender, turned his head Tears fell from his eyes, signified the boy was dead Brandon, who had thought the boy would never bend Feared the ten-count would proclaim the battle's end But something caused him to tremble through his sweat This one named, John Knew in his heart, the boy was not finished yet Before Brandon could begin by saying, Ten The boy stirred and held up his bleeding chin Staring into the eyes of the one he once loved Somewhere in his heart, maybe with help from above He realized the pain he saw in those eyes Of the one named, John And the boy, for the first time, broke and cried "I'm sorry, the boy said, in a quiet but calm voice "For all the times I lied and narrowed your choice I know you were pushed and kept from my heart If it's okay with you, I'd like a fresh start." And with forgiveness, and love in his stare The one named, John And the boy, left all the anger there Link to comment
AFriendlyFace Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 Wow, Jason! That was amazing! I've read a lot of poems tonight, and this is the only one to make me cry. WELL DONE! It was just...so beautiful and well told! I loved the whole thing, how it was like they were having a physical, in the ring fight, but were really just rehashing their problems. It was genus to make the bartender the ref. because of course he would be the one stuck listening to their quarrel. All in all it just purely amazing and very well told! I regret not reading it sooner, but I'm also pleased that I had this unexpected delight! Awesome! -Kevin Link to comment
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