Rabble_Rouser Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 Another great chapter that gives us a big hint on the direction of the story... I won't say more until people have had a chance to read to avoid any spoilers. Happy reading! Steve Link to comment
Marco Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 Excellent as usual Vance. Andy sticking up for Matt, geez, I didn't expect that at all. I did notice Mark was absent mostly from this chapter though. I like him. He's good for Matt. As usual, it will seem like ages until next Friday gets here. One of your best yet Vance. marco Link to comment
Menzoberranzen Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 It was a very good chapter, but I found some of Andy's dialogue a bit contrived and unrealistic. Perhaps it's just me. Link to comment
I luv Dom Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 I don't think Andy likes his mom very much. Excellent chapter Vance!!(Is it next friday yet?) That is all. Link to comment
Lugh Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 It was a very good chapter, but I found some of Andy's dialogue a bit contrived and unrealistic. Perhaps it's just me. What was so contrived about it? I'm curious, so please enlighten me. Link to comment
Menzoberranzen Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 What was so contrived about it? I'm curious, so please enlighten me. It felt unrealistic to me, that's all. I know people change, but I doubt Andy would turn on his friend and mother in such a blatant, rude manner. Link to comment
Lugh Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 hum well let me see... Andy is a teenager. Andy is in therapy. Andy is apparently starting to think on his own. I can see how he would snap/turn on his mother. Then again I live with a tweenager who has done the EXACT same thing to me for less reason. As for his friend, well, it's possible. Think about high school for a moment and the drama that happened there every day. Teens turn on teens for no reason at all. It seems to me that Andy might have had a reason, especially if he linked Brian's behavior with that of his mother and snapping at him was, quite possibly in his mind, a way of snapping at her. Link to comment
Rabble_Rouser Posted May 19, 2007 Author Share Posted May 19, 2007 I don't think that Andy's behaviour is at all that unexpected as it's been noted in previous chapters and even this one that he'll do anything to piss his mother off: And don Link to comment
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