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RIP Comsie...

The chapter is great as is! But, the important thing is that you are getting better and have someone in your life now that is good for you and your children. And that you are getting mentally healthy once again. Sounds like you have an amazing BF! Hope all goes well for all of you?

This is a sad day. As @Sherye Story Reader says, he will be missed. He is such a personality and will always be. My condolences to his friends and family and to @Myr and all those he touched here.

Tragic. No other words.

Me too. He is the reason I got on this site. I still can't believe it.

I am still stunned. He brought so much happiness with his work. We shall all miss him.

Stand

Such a loss.

He will be missed! He always told me to stay positive and not negative. RIP Comicality.

DOOOR Debutantes often order odourous roses MASTH

Nope. Never ever have I done any dirty dancing

BONER Big old Nicky' enters rear DOOOR

I'll be honest. When Al asked me to read what he was working on, I didn't think I would like it. Frankly, I like action, big fights, lots and lots of action and things like that. Al told me that it was a coming-of-age story that wouldn't have lots of the action I liked. Well, we were both wrong. I can not comment much on each chapter since I know what is to come, but what I can comment on is how good of a story it is. After only 3 chapters, you have hardly got your feet wet. I will very much enjoy the reactions that come after each chapter.

I have been following Comicality since New Kid in School first showed up on Nifty in 1998. I started exchanging emails with him that long ago. We've been online friends since. When the opportunity arose for me to start Gay Authors in Sep 2002, Comicality was the first author with us. When we opened the forums at the very end of July in 2003, it only took me a few days to get Comicality on the forums. Back then he was on a WebTV... He continued to grow and grow as an author branching out and touching so many lives. It's hard to put into words that sort of friendship we had. The ultimate penpal with 26 years of emailing and chatting. He was so expressive and caring. He took his passion for writing and shared so much with us all through his stories, his articles, his posts, everything. Rest In Peace, my friend.

II agree with what @pvtguy said about No.15 and No.18 IMO was perfect I think every reader would agree with that. I wonder if you have been to my house because the first couple of lines of No.12 describes my cupboard perfectly😄

Thank you very much for reading these and tasting the apples. I’m glad they worked for you.

WOW, love how you used the apples for metaphors and how perfectly they blended. So well done...

All of these were truly well done; but 2 and 3 really touched something in me; I think because of my age, they resonated more with me than the others but so enjoyed them all.

So descriptive and the imagery that the words painted were so impactful. Brought up some really nice memories of the past for me.

Ok I really loved how the date went. I love how they showed Robbie and Nathan their sexual attraction to each other and still maintained their control to behave themselves. This is a level of maturity we’ve not yet really seen in Robbie. I think Nathan will be good for Robbie in teaching him to be self confident and help him come out. That said, it’s clear Nathan (who is liked by and large by the Taylor family), Daniel and Nicola will support Robbie against his new parents and help them come around too. Don will be the most difficult sell of course. Something tells me Sue is more open minded than even Don is aware and it won’t take much to win her over

Spring and Fall were well written but disturbing; but I guess that was the point. Summer was really nice. Winter however was very powerful. I truly felt the emotion behind this one. They were all well written, but this one was truly special.

Starting on them now... Can't wait.

I agree with Skinny and Tim here. A mentally healthy Robbie is precious. I love how he got defensive to that jock tool

Truly delightful, and so descriptively accurate about the situation.