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  2. chris191070

    Chapter 4

    A great chapter. Colin and Phil are developing a friendship as we heard more of there stories.
  3. rjostlie

    Chapter 11

    one thing i remember from the previous book. will the brad pay people to-do the dirty work where jake and zack do it themselves.
  4. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 4

    Dare I say a blossoming friendship between Phil and Colin, with their roles shifting back and forth between confider and confidant. What a joy and catharsis to share their stories of young love. Similarly to many of my fellow readers I believe Stanley could benefit from their life experiences as marginalised persons, regardless of his own sexuality. Phil apparently resembled a young Paul Anka. I must say the only song of his I was familiar with was the evergreen My Way (and I have not heard his version that I can recall). I searched the 'net and found some photos of a young Paul Anka and some were of a very handsome man. I also recalled Tab Hunter was a singer/actor from that era and found some photographs of a young Tab Hunter. As a young man he was certainly handsome and like Marvin Gaye he improved with age. As a 30 something he was absolutely sizzling. Woof. I admired him for his courage too, he refused to bow to pressure and marry a woman to appease society. Poignant, the perfect adjective for this chapter @Ronyx. Teen angst and drama may be what you are renowned for, but I have to say I am as impressed, if not even more so, with your writing examining adult relationships. Beautiful writing and great story telling.
  5. Daddydavek

    Chapter 11

    My comment in the last chapter was that Will was acting like an entitled prick and then Mark throws a mugging on Will and he has to use the swat line. Then Travis shows up and Will is in heaven. Somehow Will and Travis are good for each other and I hope it lasts awhile. Will calls JJ to warn of the visit and JJ panics and Will somehow calms him down as he knows JJ better than JJ himself. Looking forward to more. Also when they finally get into school....
  6. One guy i listen to said to try and look toward the sun.. not at it, of course, but in its direction for about five minutes. Worth a shot and cheaper than drugs!
  7. Now, why do I think all hell is about to break loose?
  8. The best parts of this chapter was when Father was introduced to his son and then Colin's date turned into being a man! I laughed hard at those.
  9. WOW, so much going on in this chapter and it really wasn't long at all. I have to wonder if you really want to go to restricted space in the middle of what may be the biggest outbreak of war the universe has seen in untold millennium.
  10. I've done all of this except the sun exposure after waking. I'll give that a shot. Thanks for this.
  11. Evil may triumph for a while; but rarely in the long run...
  12. Today
  13. Make sure you video it, we all need a good laugh
  14. centexhairysub

    Chapter 11

    OMG, Will understands JJ better than I think he understands himself sometimes. And no matter what JJ or anyone else thinks; Will is going to always have JJ's back. I cannot believe that idiot was dumb enough to actually attack Will in broad daylight. Even if he did pick a secluded area to do so; did he think that someone in Will's position would not have access to some type of security arrangement? This could so blow up in way to many people's faces. Love that Travis came to see Will; yes, he wanted to so that he could tell Will face to face about his encounter, but he missed Will just as much as Will missed him. I worry about JJ. I guess I keep remembering how he was when Matt first met the family; that bubbly happy go lucky kid; and how much he has gone through since then and how it has affected him. Maybe the facade was already in place all those years ago; but I don't think so. I think he truly was happy go lucky then; but it was like once he got focused on skating and started to move up the ranks; his whole psyche changed. You know this meeting in New York is gonna be off the hook. Can't wait to see what happens...
  15. Darryl62

    Chapter 11

    And, and... can't wait for the interactions when the Masters of the universe meet Kris with JJ hovering with flames ready...!!! Hazmat suits obviously the evening wear of choice
  16. Darryl62

    Chapter 11

    I have done a complete 180 between JJ and Will. Now I look forward to JJs story and his grasping of the dynamics of an adult relationship, his understanding of his own insecurities while Will is just juvenile and coming across as a total jerk. He should not have paid for Gillis to be beaten, the local police and the Olympic security would have ruined that mans life once the swat team had been called. Will, you disappointed me, only with the call to JJ have you marginally redeemed yourself.
  17. If things cease to exist when translocated to the AR, it's possible to use it as a weapon.
  18. All or most of these resources must have been hidden in unexplored space.
  19. The Tooth Fairy doesn't have Euros to exchange for teeth, so she wouldn't be able to collect French teeth without the proper currency!
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    There will be no more extra reactions. And as an active punster, I'm thankful.
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