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  2. chris191070

    Entry 40-41

    Is there a rough patch ahead between Carl and Ross or will Adam be the peacemaker.
  3. Demiurge

    Chapter 8

    @weinerdog how dare you bring sportsball into this? 😨
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    RivKen would be the best one. That would guarantee longevity.Why? The longest streak in playing consecutive baseball game was set by Cal Ripken so Ripken,RivKen?....Okay I know that's a stretch
  5. weinerdog

    Entry 40-41

    OK this it pretty much the first time we hear about some slightly annoying trait Ross might have (talking too much) and being lousy at helping Adam exasperated things little plus the tiny blow up between Carl and Ross.Rough patch ahead perhaps? I never noticed the book cover before (Took me long enough) I'm guess Ross house is on the left side and Adam is on the right? One tiny insignificant error. I broke it up without any bloody noses or broken furniture like a WWE match and came home. The time frame this story takes place WWE was called WWF then. The fact that I know that says more about me then anything else
  6. I'll grace you with my omelette, too. It started with the idea of making an omelette, but then I went overboard with the veggies and tomato (it's a FRUIT) so it looks rather ridiculous. But so tasty! There's also some cheddar.
  7. Been a good day so far.. Shrink is happy with me. The crumpet rings finally got here, and I made these. It's not nearly perfect, and i miss my convection oven, which helps to brown things. i need practice making the crosses.. but they smell nice.. lol Can't wait to try them. They are made with lemon and orange candied peel, golden and dark raisins, spices and a little splenda brown sugar.
  8. New things on my list … to read … AHHHHHH.
  9. Demiurge

    Chapter 8

    @Mattyboy Kiver? Rinji?
  10. I shall put spy novel on my list... *looks at the mile-long text document* *shivers*
  11. Today
  12. I first read this particular…chapter? Episode? Story? Part? Of the SS universe via the author’s website. It’s well-written and I was intrigued by the premise. I like that Alec and Sasha are very different people but still managed to come together. Who Alec is, someone that won’t back down, maybe as a way to impress Sasha, but also his personality that drove him to do what he did. We are all teenagers once and some of us never had the fortune to meet someone who would stick up for us or be there for us through thick and thin. That is the review for this particular part (chapter?) of the series. Moving to the series itself, I do say I quite enjoy the characters overall and they are all complicated and multidimensional - with various degrees of issues being dealt with when coming to terms with being an awkward teenager and/or being gay. With that said, the author also explored multiple issues/subjects including, what I believe is the correct term, polyamory. I have heard about it, I have came across fiction that explored it but I never would choose to get out of my way to read them. While some may be uncomfortable with the concept, as I was (and still am), I don’t think it’s fair to ding someone’s creativity because of lack of a trigger warning. I was surprised to read the throuple and development between the four original characters, I forced (not in a bad way) myself to go through with it to try to understand how that can work and what that means. Those parts of the series forced me to think and get into an area that I never thought to enter. With that said, I still don’t understand it nor will ever entertain the idea of being in any polyamorous relationships (which btw, is not the same as polygamy relationships) but it’s definitely something to know and learn to accept that we live in a very diverse world and that is a reality for many people. The one thing that tickles me is these teenagers are a whole lot more mature than when I was at that age or anyone I knew at that age. If they were a lot older (mid to late 20s) I would think the complexities would have made sense (heck, I’m still trying to figure myself out at the ripe old age of old enough to be their parent). But it’s fiction and its creativity, so who am I to judge. I actually stopped the series at about 70-80 chapters in (last I checked it was at 135 or something) and needed a break - maybe not a good idea to power through in one go but great series though. Not sure when I will pick it back up…(I did spoiled myself with the family tree).
  13. I will paste you’re quote: I have written/am currently writing every genre I wanted to write, so let me think about my options here... I believe Fantasy is next on my list. The thought of going deep into world building leaves me nervous. I'm not the best at detail tracking. Such subterfuge and misdirection! You should write a spy novel next!
  14. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 1

    A former war correspondent and somewhat well known author* (who wrote a few fiction stories) said: "The best writing is rewriting". Why? He explained that, "...no one gets things perfect the first (or many) time. Cooks fiddle with recipes. Great painters frequently painted over initial works because they didn't look quite right. Writers remember things they forgot the first time through, want to clarify something, or just say it better". In this 'rewrite' of Halos and Heroes, (Book 1 of Finding Home series) @JJ Quinn takes this idea to heart, and the result is a richer, more intense and more informative look into the life of a unique man, (perhaps someone we've passed by and not given a second thought to). Do you need to read the original to appreciate the changes? No, but those with an 'Editors Eye' to detail, , will find the updates worth the effort put in. * Ernest Hemingway
  15. Mattyboy

    Chapter 8

    It took a while to explain to Alec and Finn, I seem to remember. Maybe there's a dom/sub phase to this coming up, but I find master/brat enormously easier to read about characters I like. And more fun. Because neither of them loses themselves in their relationship-role. I'm finding that to be something I like a lot about this story... I know it's a romantic comedy (possibly on the wildly sexy side). I Hate This Town spent a long time looking like maybe it was going to be a tragedy. But we can trust have faith in Riv-Ken, Ken-Er, Kenver whatever we're calling this is going to be alright.
  16. People are mere dilettantes at pomposity compared to cats. Cats have mastered being pompous into a fine art.
  17. A former war correspondent and somewhat well known author* (who wrote a few fiction stories) said: "The best writing is rewriting". Why? He explained that, "...no one gets things perfect the first (or many) time. Cooks fiddle with recipes. Great painters frequently painted over initial works because they didn't look quite right. Writers remember things they forgot the first time through, want to clarify something, or just say it better". In this 'rewrite' of Halos and Heroes, (Book 1 of Finding Home series) @JJ Quinn takes this idea to heart, and the result is a richer, more intense and more informative look into the life of a unique man, (perhaps someone we've passed by and not given a second thought to). Do you need to read the original to appreciate the changes? No, but those with an 'Editors Eye' to detail, , will find the updates worth the effort put in. * Ernest Hemingway
  18. J92

    Chapter 6

    It had been a long week at work, there had been presentations to endure but it was now Friday night and Thomas is at Zack’s place. Thomas has brought his laptop round and they have just finished up the latest spreadsheets so they are prepared for the work ahead in the next few weeks. It makes Thomas feel at ease to know everything at work is on track, it is a relaxing feeling of accomplishment. Thomas has just closed up the laptop and is just chopping up carro
  19. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 3

    It can only be but one person and I did think of her before "inventing" Luciana. Claudia, due to her spunky attitude would not tolerate Vincenzo's homophobia, nor would she be impressed by his flashy manners and ostentatious displays of wealth. She could give him "numbnuts" with a withering look or a subtle put-down. I could not remember if Claudia had met Cosmo either. I was very impressed with and greatly appreciated Cosmo's positive appraisal of Marco's looks, but completely forgot to comment on this because I was so incensed by Vincenzo's behaviour. His disdain for the simple gift Cosmo gave him irritated me too. I was hoping when he left Cosmo injured and upset that he would tread on a shard of the broken ceramic dish and sever a vein in his foot. Hopefully he will get his comeuppance (perhaps his brakes will fail on a hairpin bend and he will be forced to ride a Vespa too).
  20. Not what one would expect with the title but I really enjoyed the plot. You can wish there was more but I feel the ending was still quite appropriate.
  21. James Carnarvon

    Chapter 3

    Thanks for all the comments so far (terrible jokes aside). I'm actually still editing this story even as I begin to post it; last night, I decided that a key part of chapter 6 was underwritten, and I actually ended up adding around 1,000 words to it (it's a daunting 8,500 words now, compared to my chapter-by-chapter target of 6,000 words). In a way, I may have started posting too soon, but I'd been grinding away at writing this story since the end of December and I was keen to start putting it out there. It hasn't always been the easiest of writing journeys. Memory game time. Who do we know who worked or aspired to work on the Amalfi ferries, and might have reason to reject an ugly soul like Vincenzo? In the swimming scene, there's one thing I was half expecting you to mention but, since you didn't, I'll bring it up myself. For all Cosmo's many deficiencies, through his eyes we nonetheless get our first entirely positive physical description of Marco. I thought it was important to provide a firm contrast to our little mouse's own lack of self-belief. Looking at Luca, Vincenzo and (if we go back to earlier stories) maybe even Enzo, I wonder if there's a thing with heterosexual boys in my stories being written as less sympathetic? I feel like I/we would naturally find them less relatable, and I'm actually glad that Vincenzo read to you both as overtly hetero from the beginning. I wasn't trying to hide it; just to insert enough ambiguities for Cosmo latch onto and get the wrong end of the stick, so to speak. As to Luca... I don't think he's ever really integrated that take on Cosmo's choices when they were younger into his worldview, despite Dani suggesting it as far back as the last story. Who knows, maybe this story will allow him to grow into his relationship with Cosmo a little? Aargh! 😩 (I do, since you brought it up... but if I lived in Ravello, I'd be tempted to brave a Vespa.)
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Later as we know River and Kenji will have a front row seat to what was happening with Alec and Finn I wonder if observing those two help them navigate their own relationship. I had no idea how much paint was smeared over my person and I quickly lost track of time. If River went out in public with all that paint on him would Anyone really notice?🤔 So Kenji overheard a member of his staff speak of Rivers page. I hope you write a scene where River shows up with Kenji at his place of work I would love to see the staff member reaction
  23. Good advice... although at times it feels like life can be a dumpster fire and you need to douse those flames with a giant extinguisher of whoop ass. 🤭
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