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  2. FRIDY Felt rather indecent doing yoga DNDOG
  3. Young pianists are often challenged to do difficult pieces at public recitals. I understand it can be a terrifying experience.
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  5. It's Good Friday, so Nevada will be serving us Pita Bread and Lemon Chiffon Cake.
  6. TASTY Twinks and Servants try yoga NOOPE
  7. "After speaking with his father, his mother had forced herself back into his priorities. She wasn’t feeling well and Henry was desperate for them to spend more time together in case this was the last visit. He’d go to the hospital tomorrow and go from there." There is no indication Mae wants Alec to visit her, it appears it is Henry who wants Alec to visit his mother. Hopefully Henry's balls have FINALLY dropped and he wants Alec to be there when he tells her what he thinks of her as a wife and what an appalling mother she has been to their son. The final nail in her virtual coffin and hopefully one which hastens her placement into a real live one. "Alright, I’m going to smack you right across your pretty face. I’m going to kick you in the shin too. Listen to me.” “Riv-“ “No talk. Just listen. You talk enough to yourself in your head. My turn. You want Finn. He wants you. You’re both adults and he’s pursuing you. Finn might want a relationship and what’s so horrible about that? You’re throwing away your best shot at happiness in a long time Alec. It’s honestly hard to watch. You run around in circles, beating your head against a wall in your mind. I get you have trauma. Same. You can’t let it control your life now. If something feels right, just fucking go with it already. God, I love you so much but you’re exhausting me right now.” River took a deep breath, dragging his hands through his hair and messing it up. Then he frowned softly at him and rubbed his cheek and then the back of his neck." Alec is getting better advice for free from his best friend who is not afraid to bitch slap him for his own good when warranted. Get the lube and condoms ready Alec and "fasten your seatbelts it's going to be a bumpy night". @Demiurge you failed to get rid of Mae with that out-of-control semi-trailer and that woman is still breathing. How about a strategically placed pillow placed over her face such that she is unable to move it.
  8. FRIDY Fresh raspberries in Dave's yoghurt TASTY
  9. JJQuinn

    Chapter 1

    Anton.... I don't know what to say. That's one of the kindest and validating things I've heard in awhile, and I needed it today. God know what we need and with the strong likelihood of another MS flared keeping me from my regularly programmed life, I needed that reminder that life goes on and though there's a lot of things I can't do right now, at least being home gives me ample time to address all the stories in my head, a little at a time. I am thrilled you noticed the edits! I wasn't sure anyone would though there are A LOT of them throughout all the chapters. Mote fleshed out overall because I sort of had to work backward. It had been so long since I wrote it that when I wrote the segue and began writing book 2, I realized my writing style had drastically changed and there were holes and things that didn't make sense now in the original because of how the segue wrote itself and how the second book was shaping up to be. I figured if I was going to post it on another site anyway--a site where there are so many top tier authors btw which is a little intimidating!-- that I should just revise it as I liked despite feeling a little silly about rewriting an old story. Your comments made me feel this was the right choice and I appreciate you taking the time to say so, from the bottom of my heart. Hopefully I can get the other chapters posted soon. The flare is affecting my hands a bit with stiffness and temp changes but I always persevere...stubborn that was as learned from my grandma! I hope you keep following along! Take care. JJ
  10. all spring birds sing songs

    of tranquil joy and peace

    if only we listen

     

    is it the steel in

    the heart or blade that makes a

    warrior strongest?

     

    I would sharpen my

    wits instead of my sword

    on todays battlefields

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