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  2. Doha

    The Bodyguard

    Jamie is adapting very well to the new and strange reality of his job as well as his supernatural abilities. RMW remains an enigma but seems to be getting closer to Jamie's wavelength. I wonder if the Turners know about his powers
  3. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 12

    Very nice holiday description. Devin probably could have had the same experience with the bullying, but a little higher self-esteem if he was allowed to be just a bit shorter than average. I was always shorter and smaller, but my older brother was the opposite, taller and bulkier, so I didn't get bullied much. Maybe I just grew up in a nicer town, who knows?
  4. The entire group less their murdered friend are set to meet in the future. Fonith said she was messed up from the torture, though. Starwen and Lyoth landed in a supposedly uninhabited area on Jitha to collect granitewood. Instead they meet people and a leader called Mama and greeted by“Welcome to the Entry of Ecstasy." Something strange is unfolding. Is this a drug fueled cult and that might try to capture them or is the group harmless?
  5. JJQuinn

    Chapter 4

    😆 🤣 😂 😹 😆 JM&J.... I giggled. And yes that meme is soooooo accurate. Sam doesn't always hope in the best ways. Too many years of abusive childhood experiences and then complicated interpersonal relationships have molded him. But Ben is going to chip him apart then build him up again stronger. Anyone whose read the original knows that there's more to Ben than meets the eye... his own checkered past which has been more fluffed out in this revision and the segue so Sam needs to hold onto his hat. He will find out what happens when he bluffs the wrong person. A big, bad, and dangerous former Delta operative is nothing compared to a loving, compassionate and STUBBORN priest.
  6. My thinking as Karl is thus: "You want the divorce, I don't want to have anything to do with telling the kids, you do it."
  7. Thanks, @chris191070. Although I was happy with the first revision, I also kept thinking of improvements, the semicolons really drove me nuts. LOL
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Wow--the last chapter ! There are so many loose ends and promising developments. I hope you return to this story in due course, please. This story advances or has advanced in reasonable amounts and at a focused pace. Kandric's last chaper was an epic of world class length--maybe a record for nifty--in many segments that told multiple stories about several characters and required great concentration to comprehen and tie together. I do want to know about how the end points in Kandric develop--now that the green dragon secret is out, Afterdusk is in the world, the positive role the drow played is known, gamba is is losing forces, Kandric's brothers are very active and fighting forecefully, Kandric needs to fight Flexna, etc. I worry it will take a long time to create and publish the next chapter of Kandric. Maybe, I worry too much..... Good luck Kyle in carrying out your vision--You always write interesting tales.
  9. Robbie is blind to Rory who is so sweet on him. It’ll break his heart when he learns about Nathan. As for Fran, until the argument tonight, she was in denial. Now I worry if she will be vindictive.
  10. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 4

    Holy Mother of God! J, M & J. The first 7 words that come out of your mouth when you go into 'The Confessional', spring immediately to mind. (For ye of other faiths, think of similar words uttered when you confess sins and seek forgiveness from a merciful God). Sam seeks to battle his demons, but using a bottle (like his alcoholic father did) seldom if ever finds solace. Sam is discovering that fact ... again. Coming to his aide (not necessarily 'rescue'), after being summoned by bartender Darcy, (who tended to his physical wounds with glass from a broken beer bottle embedded in his hands), Father Ben takes Sam back to his own home to let him sober up. Despite arguments in his head ... ... Sam listens to the wrong head and with Father Ben's back against the wall, he leans in to kiss him, then pauses to rethink, only for Ben to pull him closer to his lips, and ... HOLEY MOLEY
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    خبر تحیر عشق سن نہ جنوں رہا نہ پری رہی

    نہ تو تو رہا نہ تو میں رہا جو رہی سو بے خبری رہی

    سراج اورنگ آبادی

     

    Listen to the Word of love, for neither apparitions,

    Or sprights, nor you or I who stay, will remain unenlightened.

    —Siraj Aurangabadi

     

     

     

  12. Still an awesome story, with a much improved read.
  13. Marty

    Chapter 12

    True. And I suppose he did at least attempt to explain why...
  14. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    @Paladin Who knows? You never know when paranormal sex will strike. Thanks for reading and commenting 😀
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  16. akascrubber

    Roommates

    Connor has M back and to pacify Hannah told her he loves her, as a first. But M is stilll a blank slate. Sadly, the man or men in black keep appearing and are very scary. Connor repeatedly runs into them. One tried to reach M but needed to be let in with permission and M would not permit him to enter the trailer. Connor is very frustrated. He is going to question the next man in black he sees and not run away from him. Plus, he is likely going to get M high with his weed and see if he can loosen his lips. He is close to be blown out of his mind , I think. M confuses him. He said he had not eaten before Connor taught him and only been fed by a tube.
  17. James Carnarvon

    Chapter 12

    @Summerabbacat objected to his behaviour in The Star in my Eye.
  18. My froggy senses are telling me he's up to something. Hi, B! ~waves~ New job, huh? Congratulations and good luck.
  19. Paladin

    Chapter 6

    I loved this story. Great detective story. I'm just a bit sad that there's no more amazing paranormal sex for Tom. But then maybe . . . .
  20. Marty

    Chapter 12

    What on earth has poor Sami done to make you not like him??? Okay, he and his friends ragged Marco after seeing him holding hands with Giorgio. But the way I read it they were not being deliberately nasty, just acting like the young children they are. I'm not sure of the exact age of everyone, but I think Marco is about 6 years older than Sami. Certainly we were told Sami was only 7 years old when he first appeared in Lanterns in the Dark, and Dani (who I think is about the same age as Marco) was 13. I'm not sure exactly how much time has passed between that story and this, but I doubt it's more than a few. Give Sami a break, for goodness sake!
  21. Levie and Greg have been together for three months, and are moving in together. The young couple learns that no matter what life throws at them, they've always got the Love Of Family to help and strengthen them.
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