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A great Christmas had by Devin, Mac and there families.

I have. Pit bulls make terrible playmates for three-year-olds. Bad Doggie! Never have I ever worked in retail.

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Oscar was doing really well, with no panic attacks. He goes home to see his parents and his mother manages to cause a panic attack. Oscar stating he will not visit home again, unfair for his brother and sister ( how long before they are living with Oscar and the grandparents ).

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As was said by Bachman-Turner Overdrive, Baby, you ain't see nothing yet

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He seems to doubt, Stephanie would make the move to tell the kids herself or volunteer in any way, but he seems to trust her to do so, when he asks(?) her to do so, calling upon her guilt(?) and the trouble it is about to cause to the kids, so she has an opportunity to leave on good terms from the kids. As for his choice of words, as Carlo already pointed out, there might have been a couple more poor choices of words, however somewhat understandable, given the circumstances. He might not imply, using physical force or similar to make sure, she does so.

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This was also a new part that made me giggle because I can see it in my head so clearly. Sam all big, bad and dangerous, and also as sulky as a 3 year old, while Ben doesn't miss a beat. __________________________________ Awkward wasn’t a strong enough word for the situation and I should’ve kept my mouth shut, but apparently stung pride was a snarky bitch. “You said I was hot,” I grumbled beneath my breath. “Because you are hot,” Ben said again, not missing a beat “Just like puppies are cute and people in hell crave ice water. They’re all just facts and none of them equate you and I in bed together. Not tonight.”

“It’s not much,” Lyoth said to Stawren, “but this is my home planet.” The Galaxy Surfer was in orbit above an almost entirely green sphere. “See the one big lake?” Lyoth asked. He continued without awaiting her reply. “It’s called Lake Iggatio. It’s the largest body of water on Jitha. Oh, and you can see the ice cap; it’s on the southern pole, which means it’s summer up north where I’m from.” The monitor in front of Stawren beeped. “The ship is picking up the two cities you me

Very true @Zuri. However to me "I'm making Stephanie tell them," sounds more like being vindictive than trusting.

I'm giggling.... I'm so glad youre enjoying the revision Cane. It makes me feel like it really was the right thing to do for the sake of the story because it ties in more strongly to the segue now. Wait till the next chapter...I'm sure you remember Sam offering to do penance on his knees lol. Doesn't happen but a lot more snark and dialogue does. Sam is more mouthy this time around and Ben is just as sharp. After writing JFH and filling in Ben's past as much as I did, it totally changed him in my head which is one of the reasons I had to rewrite Halos. Someone with his ahem...past and skills...wouldn't have made it as far as he did without some major game. Just because he has the collar on doesn't mean it disappeared lol. Poor Sam! It makes my heart wag it's tail that you picked up on all the new dialogue. The scene where he flips Ben off is from the original, but Ben's commentary and all the dialogue between Sam and the bartenders is new. Again, just wanting to round the world out more realistically and set more blocks in motion for future character development in this story and novels to come. It's not a series in the traditional sense, but the stories all take place in the same world wirh recurring characters in each in supporting roles around whomever the 2 main characters are. Thank you for continuing to support me my friend!

Ken had barely finished reading the un-encrypted warning letters, when one of the precinct cops interrupted him. “We found Bart Pearl,” he said. “Okay, let’s go to my desk.” As soon as they were back at Ken’s desk, he asked, “Did you bring him in?” “No. He couldn’t possibly have committed the murders.” “Why not? How do you know?” Because the guy is wheelchair bound. He could not have negotiated the four steps which lead to the entrance of the building Hamm lived in,

I have loved this story!! I really hope you will be able to finish it…❤️

Omg, poor Tyler! After reading that, that was all I can think of to put here.

Hah the heat will come eventually. It's a preview of things to come, but still a slow burn because Sam is stubborn and doesn't want to get emotionally involved while Ben refuses to get between the sheets without emotion. You're going to see some eyebrow raising revelations from Ben next chapter lol. Anyone whose read the original knows how checkered Ben's past is and why it means he's more passionate promise and hope than prudish piety. He's also stubborn as a mule so Sam has zero chance. Thank you for taking the time to comment!

I'm afraid you'll have to wait to see if Ollie finds out about Andre and the abuse. Not a spoiler alert but the teens do continue to bond.