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  3. The Tooth Fairy doesn't have Euros to exchange for teeth, so she wouldn't be able to collect French teeth without the proper currency!
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    There will be no more extra reactions. And as an active punster, I'm thankful.
  5. CincyKris

    Chapter 13

    Andre really came through as brave and caring! Telling his story for only the second time to police takes guts! I'm looking forward to all the positive changes the boys will be experiencing. I'm also hoping the evil bastard gets what is due to him.
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    @drsawzall - we must have attended school at the same time! I remember that Thanksgiving vividly! What does Columbus have to do with Thanksgiving?🤔 He was at Plymouth Rock also?
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  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 51

    The admiral is quite the strategist. It doesn't matter where he stands since he only executes his orders as derived from policy. He could be a complete Anglophile and it wouldn't matter . I think he is the Russian version of Jervis.
  9. Bring it on little bro. I'd like to see you try.
  10. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 13

    Wow! Just wow! What a wonderfully written chapter @Paladin. Although the interviews with both Ollie and Andre were largely superficial as written, the underlying trauma of what both had experienced resonated. As I stated in my comments on the prior chapter, a clever writer is able to inform and move the reader without resorting to excess melodrama and histrionics, and that is what you did again in this authentically written and very moving chapter. Good news for Mamma was welcomed by all and helped improve the day for them. And my favourite statement, and not just because of my love for such a dish: "Our serves of Lemon Lime Tart arrived. It summed up our day; bittersweet.”
  11. But the Tooth Fairy collects tooth not money so she doesn't care
  12. Northern Dutch Guy

    Chapter 11

    Thanks for another nice chapter. Another weirdo hit the dust, I hope. A bit surprised though that Jake would only inform the the Olympic Committee people and not local authorities as it was in a public park. let’s see how these people will handle it. Would not be surprised if they would try to turn the table and make Will the bad guy.
  13. pvtguy

    Chapter 4

    @drsawzall - we must have attended school at the same time! I remember that Thanksgiving vividly!
  14. Paladin

    Chapter 13

    Outside the interview room Andre was stressed so I continued to hold him until he settled. He finally did. “Thanks Chris. I needed that.” While I was supporting Andre, I was a turmoil of concern for him. I gently asked, “What do you want to do now?” He took a deep breath and sighed. “I want to make a statement to the police.” A man, looking every inch a police detective, approached us. “I’m Detective Senior Sergeant David Jenkins. I was watching from the next room and saw wha
  15. Just who is Quigly and let's hope Phentrom is unharmed...
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    A very enjoyable chapter and like others, this brought back some poignant memories of things I got up to back in high school...you know that time just after Columbus discovered the New World and blue jeans....
  17. Summerabbacat

    Chapter 3

    A task for your "to do" list perhaps @drpaladin?
  18. It is very clear both Alec and Finn have a strong connection. Is it love or perhaps regret for what was not? I suspect the former, but it will take time for both to overcome the distance that time has brought to their lives. I doubt Finn will leave Sunnyside (so not an appropriate name), but Alec may surprise and return, although not before Mae is given a lonely send off. She has as much chance of changing her pious ways as I have sleeping with a woman. Milo, still blunt and full of life. His reference to Alec as "Jailbait" when he was a teen irritated me, but now he is older I can see it for the term of affection it apparently is. His disclosure that the whole family worried when Alec moved to California was genuine as I don't think Milo engages in small talk or platitudes. Nina seems well suited to him, with a wry sense of humour and an obvious care for his health without being smothering. Superb chapter @Demiurge, setting up a return for Alec and a relighting of the Alec/Finn fire. Aarrgghh the cool soothing voice of Dan Hartman with the scorching vocals of Loleatta Holloway.
  19. pvtguy

    Chapter 4

    The counselor needs counseling too! This was a wonderful chapter, each looking back on their first times. It caused me to look back too! Oh the windows of the mind!
  20. EGGGS "Egad!" gasped Genevieve, going stiff. SCARE
  21. The Tooth Fairy doesn't accept any European currencies. I haven't had baby teeth in nearly twenty years.
  22. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 5

    Need a bucket of Tartar for all those Red Herrings. AND creole chips! Then I can have a Good Friday. 🙏
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