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  1. Chapter 1

    Truthfully, people have a right to be as private or as out as they like. I'm horrible at keeping my life secret. It leaks out in stories, poems, and regular conversation. I always feel that everyone leads many lives, and they are as open or closed as they need to be. As long as the life you live is fulfilling to you and you aren't hurting others, that is all that matters.

    On 1/8/2019 at 12:45 AM, droughtquake said:

    I think I’ve probably shared enough information here that a very thorough investigator could probably figure out who I am, but why would anyone care?  ;–)

    Truthfully, people have a right to be as private or as out as they like. I'm horrible at keeping my life secret. It leaks out in stories, poems, and regular conversation. I always feel that everyone leads many lives, and they are as open or closed as they need to be. As long as the life you live is fulfilling to you and you aren't hurting others, that is all that matters.

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  2. Chapter 26

    Aria is nearly comatose. Jay is the sort of friend everyone needs. Amara is hurt and fighting to keep those most important to him close.   These are who Drew was afraid of?   Drew's mom is in full mother mode. She is going to protect and care for the twins, Jay, and Drew. I can see many pots of coffee and tea being made.   Drew has two broken souls to help. Both love him, and he loves them. He has a lot to do. Jeff needs to he contacted, the hospital needs to be updated, Amara needs a doc if just for medicine,  and Aria needs help to come back to himself. Drew really is in the deep end with the men he loves.   Can't wait for more.

    Aria is nearly comatose. Jay is the sort of friend everyone needs. Amara is hurt and fighting to keep those most important to him close.

     

    These are who Drew was afraid of?

     

    Drew's mom is in full mother mode. She is going to protect and care for the twins, Jay, and Drew. I can see many pots of coffee and tea being made.

     

    Drew has two broken souls to help. Both love him, and he loves them. He has a lot to do. Jeff needs to he contacted, the hospital needs to be updated, Amara needs a doc if just for medicine,  and Aria needs help to come back to himself. Drew really is in the deep end with the men he loves.

     

    Can't wait for more.

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  3. Chapter 3

    So they are face to face and neither lays their cards on the table. Not only is one a powerful mind reader but he knows his mate is in trouble. The other is a King unwilling to communicate. I get the feeling there is a lot more to Ivan. Until your next chapter and a few new pieces of the puzzle.

    So they are face to face and neither lays their cards on the table. Not only is one a powerful mind reader but he knows his mate is in trouble. The other is a King unwilling to communicate. I get the feeling there is a lot more to Ivan. Until your next chapter and a few new pieces of the puzzle.

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  4. Chapter 2

    So Nico is in an odd position. His mate needs him, Craig senses him, and his powers are warning him. Seems like a powder keg ready to go off. Onwards.

    So Nico is in an odd position. His mate needs him, Craig senses him, and his powers are warning him. Seems like a powder keg ready to go off. Onwards.

  5. Chapter 1

    Late to the party but enjoying this. Nico is an interesting character and you have a lot of intrigue just below the surface.

    Late to the party but enjoying this. Nico is an interesting character and you have a lot of intrigue just below the surface.

  6. Chapter 25

    As usual, a mom knows when something is off with her child. Drew might think he is doing what is best for everyone, but neither his mother or the twins see it that way. I expect the former soldier and body guard is about to have his ass handed to him.

    As usual, a mom knows when something is off with her child. Drew might think he is doing what is best for everyone, but neither his mother or the twins see it that way. I expect the former soldier and body guard is about to have his ass handed to him.

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  7. Chapter 1

    Ouch. I know other PKs and it hard to live under the microscope. Glad you made it out the other side. I just remember what one of them was told by her dad. Excuse the paraphrase.   You were given life and free will. It is your life to live. You were given my last name. It has no marks against it, so keep it that way. Always remember to live a life you're proud of so when you face your final judgment you have nothing to fear.   I was born and raised Catholic so guilt works well on me. Lol.

    4 hours ago, droughtquake said:

    My father was a minister and viewed everything through that perspective. It was one of many issues where we did not agree. Unfortunately for me, he didn’t ask me how I felt about his lifestyle choice that made me a ‘son of a preacher man’ and a PK (Preacher’s Kid).  :–\

    Ouch. I know other PKs and it hard to live under the microscope. Glad you made it out the other side. I just remember what one of them was told by her dad. Excuse the paraphrase.

     

    You were given life and free will. It is your life to live. You were given my last name. It has no marks against it, so keep it that way. Always remember to live a life you're proud of so when you face your final judgment you have nothing to fear.

     

    I was born and raised Catholic so guilt works well on me. Lol.

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  8. Chapter 1

    I watched a few of those shows but never really seen them as religious. At least not Quantum Leap or Early Edition.    Fixers work on all sorts of issues. I picked school shootings mainly because it was being discussed again on the news just before I sat down to write. I wanted something most people could relate to.   Glad you enjoyed, and we might yet see the Pops again.

    21 hours ago, droughtquake said:

    The newspaper bit reminded me of Early Edition with Kyle Chandler and Fisher Stevens. My minister father liked to believe I enjoyed TV shows like that and Joan of Arcadia, Eli Stone, Journeyman, and Quantum Leap as being related to religion while I enjoyed them as a form of fantasy. One thing many of them share is being cancelled after a season or two.  ;–)

     

    I like the idea of Fixers and would like to read more about what Mrs Pop meant about grandchildren! There are so many other situations where a fixer could be useful. School shootings are, unfortunately, not the only tragedies we have to deal with these days.  ;–)

    I watched a few of those shows but never really seen them as religious. At least not Quantum Leap or Early Edition. 

     

    Fixers work on all sorts of issues. I picked school shootings mainly because it was being discussed again on the news just before I sat down to write. I wanted something most people could relate to.

     

    Glad you enjoyed, and we might yet see the Pops again.

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  9. Chapter 24

    Well that was a proper mess.   Henley hasn't been in his children's lives, so trying to be the father now is a little bit too late. Instead of fixing things, it appears he has made them much worse.   Drew is a mess. Running away without speaking to the boys, correction, men is wrong. Hopefully, by going home he will hear from his mother the one thing he really needs to hear, to get his butt back to them.   Alicia should have shoved her foot up his ass. The whole damn staff knows Drew is good for the boys.  Someone is going to have fill in the twins. God help them all when the chips fall this time.   Have I mentioned how I love Mason and Emma. Both of them want to smack Drew but keep hoping he'll come to his senses. I hope they are right.   I'm grateful Jeff filled Drew in. However, I kept hoping he would realize how much the twins need Drew and Drew needs them.   Til your next chapter and few new pieces of the puzzle.

    Well that was a proper mess.

     

    Henley hasn't been in his children's lives, so trying to be the father now is a little bit too late. Instead of fixing things, it appears he has made them much worse.

     

    Drew is a mess. Running away without speaking to the boys, correction, men is wrong. Hopefully, by going home he will hear from his mother the one thing he really needs to hear, to get his butt back to them.

     

    Alicia should have shoved her foot up his ass. The whole damn staff knows Drew is good for the boys.  Someone is going to have fill in the twins. God help them all when the chips fall this time.

     

    Have I mentioned how I love Mason and Emma. Both of them want to smack Drew but keep hoping he'll come to his senses. I hope they are right.

     

    I'm grateful Jeff filled Drew in. However, I kept hoping he would realize how much the twins need Drew and Drew needs them.

     

    Til your next chapter and few new pieces of the puzzle.

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  10. Chapter 1

    It's never easy to admit to being abused. I'm glad, even though he had to be kidnapped, that he finally is breaking free. Powerful story.

    It's never easy to admit to being abused. I'm glad, even though he had to be kidnapped, that he finally is breaking free. Powerful story.

  11. Chapter 1

    In many respects, a horrific future. I kept thinking of British mathematician who helped win the war and then was punished for being gay. I'm glad that Loy and Kee escaped and it causes a changed future.

    In many respects, a horrific future. I kept thinking of British mathematician who helped win the war and then was punished for being gay. I'm glad that Loy and Kee escaped and it causes a changed future.

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  12. Story

    Now that was sweet and heart wrenching.  Glad Dean could help. Looks like he might be getting just what he needs.

    Now that was sweet and heart wrenching.  Glad Dean could help. Looks like he might be getting just what he needs.

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  13. Santa's Visit

    Carlos,   A story so naughty and nice. Loved it. Send Santa my way, and I can find out which one I am.

    Carlos,

     

    A story so naughty and nice. Loved it. Send Santa my way, and I can find out which one I am.

  14. Story

    Now there is a dark take on Christmas. So didn't see that ending coming. 

    Now there is a dark take on Christmas. So didn't see that ending coming. 

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  15. Chapter 23

    Love comes in many forms - love for a child, love for a parent, love of a partner, love of a friend, and many more. Amara and Aria both love Drew, and he loves them. The degree hasn't been labeled yet, but everyone can see it. Hell, even momma bear can sense it which, I suspect is why she went after Drew.   I love Henley. While he may have abandoned the twins to his bitch wife, he does care about them. While at first comfortable with Drew, he is now worried that one of his twins is in love with the hunky security. What will happen if Aria also confesses to this?   Makes you wonder what Jay has going on in their life? They seem to be one of the very few friends the twins have. He evidently wants to educate Drew on what the rest of the world knows or sees in the twins and by extension, themself. Jay is an amazing person.    Jeff may just lose his "brother" in this mess yet.

    Love comes in many forms - love for a child, love for a parent, love of a partner, love of a friend, and many more. Amara and Aria both love Drew, and he loves them. The degree hasn't been labeled yet, but everyone can see it. Hell, even momma bear can sense it which, I suspect is why she went after Drew.

     

    I love Henley. While he may have abandoned the twins to his bitch wife, he does care about them. While at first comfortable with Drew, he is now worried that one of his twins is in love with the hunky security. What will happen if Aria also confesses to this?

     

    Makes you wonder what Jay has going on in their life? They seem to be one of the very few friends the twins have. He evidently wants to educate Drew on what the rest of the world knows or sees in the twins and by extension, themself. Jay is an amazing person. 

     

    Jeff may just lose his "brother" in this mess yet.

  16. Chapter 22

    Well, Momma is worse than I thought. All hell broke loose and now we have to see where the dust settles.

    Well, Momma is worse than I thought. All hell broke loose and now we have to see where the dust settles.

  17. Chapter 1

    I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. If fixers are real, I  need one myself.  Happy Holidays 

    On 12/16/2018 at 8:59 PM, Defiance19 said:

    Oh, please, can fixers be real! 

    This was a wonderful story, Wayne! Thoroughly enjoyed it.. Thank you. 

    I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. If fixers are real, I  need one myself.  Happy Holidays 

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  18. Chapter 1

    Hi Kitt,   Ms Diaz just is prejudice and uses her "faith" as a weapon rather than as a reason to do good. Some people hide behind belief rather than look at the message and help. Martin sort arranged a career change for her.    As for Mrs. Pop, well, what she knows is open for speculation.    Glad you enjoyed my story.

    On 12/16/2018 at 9:09 AM, Kitt said:

    When I comment, it is always before I read the comments of others. I therefore apologize if I repeat the praise of others.

     

    Well written, your story tugs at the heartstrings.  It addresses senseless violence, bigotry, and the fact that love is the best cure for both.

     

    One wonders if Mrs Diaz was a member of that church congregation? Sad that a church could stray so far from the ideals.  More should take to heart the phrase "The greatest of these is love".

     

    Now, just what is it that Nana knows and Martin doesn't?

    Hi Kitt,

     

    Ms Diaz just is prejudice and uses her "faith" as a weapon rather than as a reason to do good. Some people hide behind belief rather than look at the message and help. Martin sort arranged a career change for her. 

     

    As for Mrs. Pop, well, what she knows is open for speculation. 

     

    Glad you enjoyed my story.

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  19. Chapter 20

    All you see is a massive amount of pain in the very near future. Someone has allowed themself to drop their shields and the problems loom.

    All you see is a massive amount of pain in the very near future. Someone has allowed themself to drop their shields and the problems loom.

  20. Epilogue

    I'm glad you enjoyed it and everything made sense to you.

    23 hours ago, Potterslashfan said:

    Well the thing with the father makes more sense now, although I agree whole heartedly with Jonas, and I would be pissed off and disappointed that it wasn't really his father accepting him.

     

    Thank you for sharing this lovely little story with us! 

    I'm glad you enjoyed it and everything made sense to you.

  21. Epilogue

    I think you'll find karma is named Jenny, and I dont think she'll let anyone hurt Jonas. I like to think she found a way to make him pay, and not for just the date.

    On 12/8/2018 at 1:12 PM, Fae Briona said:

    Interesting way to end the story - not entirely satisfactory. 

    We never did see the karma that was promised to the guy he met on his first disastrous date.

    I think you'll find karma is named Jenny, and I dont think she'll let anyone hurt Jonas. I like to think she found a way to make him pay, and not for just the date.

  22. Chapter 20

    There were things I cleaned up and answered in the epilogue. 

    23 hours ago, Potterslashfan said:

    This has been a well written and thoughtful fantasy story, which I binge read in one night.

     

    I'm glad things are ending great for Jonas, but the conclusion with the father just seemed too easy/neat. Just my opinion, though. I don't think that internalized homophobia is an excuse to abuse your son, or that abuse should be forgiven so easily. 

    There were things I cleaned up and answered in the epilogue. 

  23. Chapter 20

    I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully the epilogue helps with closure.

    On 11/3/2017 at 6:51 PM, Sussins said:

    Loved loved it couldn't put my fon down waiting for de epilogue thnx

    I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully the epilogue helps with closure.

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