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    We Are Stars

    It's early morning here and I'm reading from bed. Now the better half is mad at me for accidently waking him up. Couldn't contain the "finally!" from coming outta my mouth.

    It's early morning here and I'm reading from bed. Now the better half is mad at me for accidently waking him up. Couldn't contain the "finally!" from coming outta my mouth.

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    Chapter 58 Discovered

    I can finally see how everything can play out. This chapter had my feels going especially Andy getting some actual family that he's never really had after his mother's death. His uncle worries me a little, but not much. I hope that the CPS woman and those attached to her get what is coming to them. I seriously hope that there is about 20 more chapters, to be honest. I rarely read a story twice, but I imagine this will have the pages worn out on it.

    I can finally see how everything can play out. This chapter had my feels going especially Andy getting some actual family that he's never really had after his mother's death. His uncle worries me a little, but not much. I hope that the CPS woman and those attached to her get what is coming to them. I seriously hope that there is about 20 more chapters, to be honest. I rarely read a story twice, but I imagine this will have the pages worn out on it.

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    Chapter 56 Promises

    I KNEW IT! (It's why I was asking about laws the last chapter). Oh hell yeah! I swore I was gonna quit reading if you made him run again Of course, in honest speaking, if he'd simply appeal to the courts himself as not in danger as well as the troubles with the classmate, heads would roll, but I'm all for Andy getting some guaranteed happiness for life instead.

    I KNEW IT! (It's why I was asking about laws the last chapter). Oh hell yeah! I swore I was gonna quit reading if you made him run again :P Of course, in honest speaking, if he'd simply appeal to the courts himself as not in danger as well as the troubles with the classmate, heads would roll, but I'm all for Andy getting some guaranteed happiness for life instead.

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    Chapter 55 Stalkers

    While I know this isn't over, since Andy's own legal issues aren't exactly over, I think he has enough personal allies to weather the storm so to speak. As a big fan, I should caution to tread lightly on the upcoming events, because it is going to be a legal nightmare and so far you've been pretty accurate. One part I seemed to have missed is the judicial level of Judge Harrison (i.e. County court, state court, etc. It seems like a small issue but the entire story could hinge on that one minor d

    While I know this isn't over, since Andy's own legal issues aren't exactly over, I think he has enough personal allies to weather the storm so to speak. As a big fan, I should caution to tread lightly on the upcoming events, because it is going to be a legal nightmare and so far you've been pretty accurate. One part I seemed to have missed is the judicial level of Judge Harrison (i.e. County court, state court, etc. It seems like a small issue but the entire story could hinge on that one minor detail. I personally wouldn't mind reading Bruce's story, because there is obviously more to say there. I imagine he has esteem issues and his family seems like real 'winners', lol. I can't wait until Andy has enough esteem himself to punch a dude in the nose rather than run, although running this time was a good idea. Thanks for a realistic story, and double thanks for making it so long. I'm still dreading the day the story is finished. It's actually so good that I wake up and see an update and it takes my morning grumblings away. It's only month two and I think I found a good contender for 2016 story of the year (although you'd have to face Twoey in a showdown :P ).

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    Chapter 51 Uphill

    You're one of the reasons I hate reading stories in real time. A chapter at a time is seriously not enough for me especially with a story this good. I love the development and how Andy is changing over time. It's left me truly disgusted with his fictional father and also gave me hope that people like Kaz, Terry, Zander and the rest of the Sanders exist. The fact that he thought Mrs. Sanders would be offended by the word 'mom' shows how much he his still deeply damaged, but at the same time shows

    You're one of the reasons I hate reading stories in real time. A chapter at a time is seriously not enough for me especially with a story this good. I love the development and how Andy is changing over time. It's left me truly disgusted with his fictional father and also gave me hope that people like Kaz, Terry, Zander and the rest of the Sanders exist. The fact that he thought Mrs. Sanders would be offended by the word 'mom' shows how much he his still deeply damaged, but at the same time shows how much he has grown and I love it.

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    Chapter 3

    Great start Nephy. Daniel doesn't really come off as 'retarded' but somewhere on the autistic scale, but it's odd because he can understand emotions. If I had to venture a guess, something psychological happened with his father.

    Great start Nephy. Daniel doesn't really come off as 'retarded' but somewhere on the autistic scale, but it's odd because he can understand emotions. If I had to venture a guess, something psychological happened with his father.

    Chapter 43 Good Dreams

    So happy for Andy but I am so sad that this is about to be finished Bittersweet. It was a hell of a ride my friend. I hope you immediately start another story for us to enjoy

    So happy for Andy but I am so sad that this is about to be finished :/ Bittersweet. It was a hell of a ride my friend. I hope you immediately start another story for us to enjoy :)

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    Chapter 37 Awake to Warmth

    I really hope that boy learns some trust. Zander would probably go to the ends of the Earth for Andy, which based on the name of the story I'm assuming that will remain his name (fingers crossed). Even though you can basically tell how the story is going to play out, it is beautifully written. I agree with xleroc when he said this story is like crack. Most stories on this site are great, but occasionally (i.e. once a year maybe) you find that one that you can't put down. I am going to hate seein

    I really hope that boy learns some trust. Zander would probably go to the ends of the Earth for Andy, which based on the name of the story I'm assuming that will remain his name (fingers crossed). Even though you can basically tell how the story is going to play out, it is beautifully written. I agree with xleroc when he said this story is like crack. Most stories on this site are great, but occasionally (i.e. once a year maybe) you find that one that you can't put down. I am going to hate seeing this story end.

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    Washington, D.C.

    I forgot all about this story! I hope Jacob is going to be alright. especially that Josh now finally has something he wants. Please don't be a stranger with the story, it's a good one.

    I forgot all about this story! I hope Jacob is going to be alright. especially that Josh now finally has something he wants. Please don't be a stranger with the story, it's a good one.

    Chapter 5 - Turtle Tricks

    Initially Zach annoyed the daylights out of me. I'm not a big fan of flair and drama, and he seems to be about as dramatic as they come. The little brat grew on me, though. I love the randomness of the story. Keep it coming, bro!

    Initially Zach annoyed the daylights out of me. I'm not a big fan of flair and drama, and he seems to be about as dramatic as they come. The little brat grew on me, though. I love the randomness of the story. Keep it coming, bro!

    Part 7

    I refuse to believe it's over. You can't do this to me. It's just plain mean Great story. I'm going to miss seeing it on the story updates.

    I refuse to believe it's over. You can't do this to me. It's just plain mean :P Great story. I'm going to miss seeing it on the story updates.

    The Date

    Read, and re-read the beginning to all 28 and you are killing me... Mike either is or isn't an asshole, Pete is or isn't Prince Charming, and I'm trying to decide if Lee is actually Corbin's golden boy, because even though he screwed to get ahead, he seems like the nicest one of the bunch. Hell, I think Lee should screw around with Pete on the side just to show Corbin that hitting on a straight man isn't all that difficult! Arg... next chapter please

    Read, and re-read the beginning to all 28 and you are killing me... Mike either is or isn't an asshole, Pete is or isn't Prince Charming, and I'm trying to decide if Lee is actually Corbin's golden boy, because even though he screwed to get ahead, he seems like the nicest one of the bunch. Hell, I think Lee should screw around with Pete on the side just to show Corbin that hitting on a straight man isn't all that difficult! Arg... next chapter please :P

    Ticking

    I just read 1-18. I seen that this is your first full-length suspense. Congrats on a job well done so far. I wish I could just take a peek at your notes, because you are tracking so many details and they must be about 500 pages by now, lol. Cole, you're doing great, and I can't wait to read more!

    I just read 1-18. I seen that this is your first full-length suspense. Congrats on a job well done so far. I wish I could just take a peek at your notes, because you are tracking so many details and they must be about 500 pages by now, lol. Cole, you're doing great, and I can't wait to read more!

    Chapter 16

    I am, by no means, a fantasy fan but I am seriously hooked. I hope it gets updated soon!

    I am, by no means, a fantasy fan but I am seriously hooked. I hope it gets updated soon!

    Chapter 26

    Cannd touched on an issue I was wondering about. Deyvn draws those he likes properly, and only images I can dream of differently. He's apparently unschooled, etc. It might be a good place to tie a knot in both. Maybe Lyle was way nicer than we thought out there in the fields? With one chapter left, I don't expect him to get his speaking voice, but I surely hope he gets his voice Can't wait for the finale.
    Cannd touched on an issue I was wondering about. Deyvn draws those he likes properly, and only images I can dream of differently. He's apparently unschooled, etc. It might be a good place to tie a knot in both. Maybe Lyle was way nicer than we thought out there in the fields? With one chapter left, I don't expect him to get his speaking voice, but I surely hope he gets his voice :D Can't wait for the finale.

    Chapter 11

    Gah, these chapters are too short for me to get my "All In" fix... Great chapter! I'm hooked.

    Gah, these chapters are too short for me to get my "All In" fix... Great chapter! I'm hooked.

    Chapter 2

    Just seen this today, I suppose I should upload a new chapter
    On 04/01/2014 02:05 PM, Lisa said:
    Holy shit, Houdinii! Logan is certainly going to need to pull a Houdinii to get out of the jail cell he's facing! Omg, what a mess. He didn't even know his father was dealing! Holy shit! Man, and now the cops think the Jimmy's money is drug money. This is not going to be good.

     

    Great chapter. You better hurry up and update before I run out of anti-anxiety meds. :P

    Just seen this today, I suppose I should upload a new chapter :D

    Chapter 1.5

    I had gotten really busy with school, so the last chapters of 15 and life to go are still in editing phase. Now that I'm taking a Creative Writing class, though, I'm getting back in the groove. Should be finished shortly
    On 04/01/2014 01:41 PM, Lisa said:
    What a great new story, Houdinii! :)

     

    I don't know how I missed when this was first posted.

     

    My heart goes out to those two boys. No one should ever be in the situation they were in.

     

    Ok, on to chapter two. Oh, and did you finish "Fifteen and LIfe to Go", damn, that wasn't the name of it, was it? I didn't think it was finished, but I haven't seen an update in awhile...

    I had gotten really busy with school, so the last chapters of 15 and life to go are still in editing phase. Now that I'm taking a Creative Writing class, though, I'm getting back in the groove. Should be finished shortly ;)

    Chapter 21

    Overall, I'll give an A plus. The hand was tipped a bit, but not enough to mess the story. I enjoyed every minute, however... Cal groweled at least 25 times..... maybe more. My only complaint/crit is you don't have to explain how people speak. Said and asked, maybe even exclaimed are enough. Makes it all transparent.

    Overall, I'll give an A plus. The hand was tipped a bit, but not enough to mess the story. I enjoyed every minute, however... Cal groweled at least 25 times..... maybe more. My only complaint/crit is you don't have to explain how people speak. Said and asked, maybe even exclaimed are enough. Makes it all transparent.

    Chapter 13

    Wait, it was Henry that died? Are you sure about that?? Thanks for the review, Lisa!
    On 12/25/2013 08:19 AM, Lisa said:
    What an excellent chapter, Houdinii! :)

     

    Poor Nate just needed some space b/c he couldn't deal with what happened, and now everyone is after him. However, I can also see it from Jeff's pov, thinking that Nate is selfish.

     

    I can't believe Henry is dead. That's horrible. And Brandon and Tony are in ICU. They have Jack, right? He's in jail I hope?

     

    What a sad, sad chapter.

     

    I'm glad you're back Houdinii. Have a great holiday and I look forward to your next update. :2thumbs:

    Wait, it was Henry that died? Are you sure about that?? :P Thanks for the review, Lisa!

    Chapter 13

    I went too long in between chapters and had to build it all back up again I had no other choice
    On 12/25/2013 02:32 AM, Stephen said:
    You like cliffhangers, don't you?

    This is an extended cliffhanger in slow motion. You devil!

    I went too long in between chapters and had to build it all back up again :) I had no other choice :P
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