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Houdinii

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    The Life of Him

    Well, ya said I read and reviewed the first version, and can't say I remember it (which is a good thing, cause that means I have a new story to become addicted to). I definitely like the story, and I just about fell in love with Amy, she's a blast. I also like how you did the good boy / bad boy routine with Eddie and Dylan. Can't wait to see where the story takes us

    Well, ya said I read and reviewed the first version, and can't say I remember it (which is a good thing, cause that means I have a new story to become addicted to). I definitely like the story, and I just about fell in love with Amy, she's a blast. I also like how you did the good boy / bad boy routine with Eddie and Dylan. Can't wait to see where the story takes us :D

    Are You Christian

    My god, how did I miss this story. I kept trying to picture John in this story and he reminds me a lot of me growing up. I really liked it, and hope you wrote the short stories you were talking about

    My god, how did I miss this story. I kept trying to picture John in this story and he reminds me a lot of me growing up. I really liked it, and hope you wrote the short stories you were talking about :D

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    Always

    I don't leave reviews very often (I'm blind at it's difficult on this site) but I had to. My tale was similar but def. not the same (I would be a Luke/David mis) and it hit close to home. I can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out. Kudos on a well written and thought out story

    I don't leave reviews very often (I'm blind at it's difficult on this site) but I had to. My tale was similar but def. not the same (I would be a Luke/David mis) and it hit close to home. I can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out. Kudos on a well written and thought out story :)

    Agoraphobia

    Aside from trying to pick up chicks, I never wrote a line of poetry in my life, and I'm scared to try.... I might like it though. It is a raw story though, being voiced by my memories, and turned into text. I think I have two (three after ch. 6) left in me, then I can write whatever I feel like writing.
    On 09/26/2011 09:06 PM, Marzipan said:
    Reading your story is like floating with a stream of the narrator's consciousness (and at times it seems subconsciousness too). The jumps and missconnections in the text actually make it feel stronger to me, more raw. I read this with a burn in my chest and I would like to read more. A lot more. You have a strong, individua and haunting voice. It is quite rare. Work with it! Write more.

    Hm. Have you written poetry, I was thinking that you have a writing style that could make me swoon if turned into a poem.

    Aside from trying to pick up chicks, I never wrote a line of poetry in my life, and I'm scared to try.... I might like it though. It is a raw story though, being voiced by my memories, and turned into text. I think I have two (three after ch. 6) left in me, then I can write whatever I feel like writing.

    Agoraphobia

    Aside from trying to pick up chicks, I never wrote a line of poetry in my life, and I'm scared to try.... I might like it though. It is a raw story though, being voiced by my memories, and turned into text. I think I have two (three after ch. 6) left in me, then I can write whatever I feel like writing.
    On 09/26/2011 09:06 PM, Marzipan said:
    Reading your story is like floating with a stream of the narrator's consciousness (and at times it seems subconsciousness too). The jumps and missconnections in the text actually make it feel stronger to me, more raw. I read this with a burn in my chest and I would like to read more. A lot more. You have a strong, individua and haunting voice. It is quite rare. Work with it! Write more.

    Hm. Have you written poetry, I was thinking that you have a writing style that could make me swoon if turned into a poem.

    Aside from trying to pick up chicks, I never wrote a line of poetry in my life, and I'm scared to try.... I might like it though. It is a raw story though, being voiced by my memories, and turned into text. I think I have two (three after ch. 6) left in me, then I can write whatever I feel like writing.

    Alex and Zach

    Greg, I love your story so far. Hehe, I hope Zach isn't hurt for too long Can't wait for the next chapter

    Greg, I love your story so far. Hehe, I hope Zach isn't hurt for too long ;) Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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