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    Chapter 5

    Thanks Ian!
    On 03/19/2013 03:04 AM, IanGf said:
    I like where this is going. They all seem to have issues expressing themselves but the camp seems to at least getting them to think a bit.

    Can't wait to see this story unfold even further.

    Thanks Ian!

    Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review Stephen. Let's just hope Nate keeps his nose clean
    On 03/12/2013 06:00 AM, Stephen said:
    Just when things start to get comfortable, Nate's past barges in. I smell trouble

    up ahead in those woods.

    Thanks for the review Stephen. Let's just hope Nate keeps his nose clean :)

    Chapter 1

    I didn't like Nate much myself until I realized he is a lot like I was then... Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter should be up in a day or two
    On 03/09/2013 12:55 PM, Stephen said:
    This is an interesting story. At first I didn't like Nate at all, thinking that he's just

    some incredibly stupid punklet that would probably be no good to anyone, -himself

    included. Then as the story advances, he starts to have some redeeming qualities,

    and Jeff has the key to unlock the real person inside the dumbass. So now I'm

    curious to see where all this will go. So I'll be looking for the next chapter.

    I didn't like Nate much myself until I realized he is a lot like I was then... Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter should be up in a day or two :)

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Lisa! Katelyn is about 4 years older than Nate (She's in an abusive marriage). I'll be posting the next three chapters rather quickly, then I'll be back on schedule
    On 03/09/2013 03:10 PM, Lisa said:
    Houdini! I just finished your latest chapter of this terrific story on another site. Shhhh, don't tell anyone. lol

     

    Love, love, love the story! I'm so glad you're posting here to I can r&r. :) I'd rather r&r than email the authors.

     

    I love Nate and it's so unfortunate that he had to go thru all that shit with his brother-in-law. Oh, how old is Katlyn? (Is that how it's spelled?) The way Nate talks about her, (or thinks about her in his inner thoughts), it sounds like she's younger than he is. Obviously she's not, so I was wondering just how old she was.

     

    Anyway....looking forward to more! I guess I'll have to wait until you catch up on this site to r&r again. =)

    Thanks Lisa! Katelyn is about 4 years older than Nate (She's in an abusive marriage). I'll be posting the next three chapters rather quickly, then I'll be back on schedule ;)

    Chapter 11

    I'm glad to see that you made Zach & Josh's breakup as painless as possible, was wondering how you were gonna pull that off. I'm seriously trying to hate Trent, but he reminds myself of me way to much to get mad at him I think. Thanks for the entertainment, can't wait for another chapter

    I'm glad to see that you made Zach & Josh's breakup as painless as possible, was wondering how you were gonna pull that off. I'm seriously trying to hate Trent, but he reminds myself of me way to much to get mad at him I think. Thanks for the entertainment, can't wait for another chapter :D

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    Chapter 12

    Well, Nephy, this story turned out to be a surprise I've read many vamp stories, a bunch of werewolf ones as well, but never an angel story... I'm glad I found it though The innocence of the angel is so .... let's just say it's making me diabetic... Looking forward to another chap! Keep up the good work

    Well, Nephy, this story turned out to be a surprise :D I've read many vamp stories, a bunch of werewolf ones as well, but never an angel story... I'm glad I found it though ;) The innocence of the angel is so .... let's just say it's making me diabetic... Looking forward to another chap! Keep up the good work :D

    Strange Life

    I'm gonna hate seeing this journey end Siddy. Thanks for the ride bro, I hope ch. 20 is epic!

    I'm gonna hate seeing this journey end Siddy. Thanks for the ride bro, I hope ch. 20 is epic!

    Chapter 1 - Memories and Lies

    Great start bro The banter of the two boys was incredible. I REALLY hope you post often, as I like these intelligent well written stories. I do agree with Cia, as the the timeline seems odd, and I'm not sure how old they were in the second half, so I just assumed they were still 16. Welcome to GA by the way, looking forward to seeing more out of ya

    Great start bro :D The banter of the two boys was incredible. I REALLY hope you post often, as I like these intelligent well written stories. I do agree with Cia, as the the timeline seems odd, and I'm not sure how old they were in the second half, so I just assumed they were still 16. Welcome to GA by the way, looking forward to seeing more out of ya :D

    And Life Back to Square One...

    Me thinks I know who get's the cliffhanger award this year, ya mean sonnofa..... Nice chapter, mean ending you cruel vindictive person (I'm still happy for the two...)

    Me thinks I know who get's the cliffhanger award this year, ya mean sonnofa..... Nice chapter, mean ending you cruel vindictive person :P (I'm still happy for the two...)

    Chapter 16

    Loved the story... mad it ended Meanie Well written, could have had a more dramatic ending... but I liked it.

    Loved the story... mad it ended :P Meanie :P Well written, could have had a more dramatic ending... but I liked it.

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    Artist and Parties

    Omg, constructive criticism? Seriously? Doubt there would be much. You straight up took me back to college, and got me drunk in just a few paragraphs Looks like I have another story to follow (Although, I do have a hard time finding Ogre to be attractive, but that's just my tastes I think.) I'd probably go after the Little Man

    Omg, constructive criticism? Seriously? Doubt there would be much. You straight up took me back to college, and got me drunk in just a few paragraphs :D Looks like I have another story to follow (Although, I do have a hard time finding Ogre to be attractive, but that's just my tastes I think.) I'd probably go after the Little Man :D

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    Chapter 2 The Act Begins...

    This story seems to be one that I'm gonna be stuck with.... so I think I'll have to chase Sid out, and shake him down for the next chapter, cause I know your not gonna give it up Get rid of Nina though, I don't like her much

    This story seems to be one that I'm gonna be stuck with.... so I think I'll have to chase Sid out, and shake him down for the next chapter, cause I know your not gonna give it up :D Get rid of Nina though, I don't like her much :P

    I Just Can't Get Enough

    Crap, now I'm definitely hooked. Even got me looking up my old band mates for a bit of a reunion.... Thanks a lot Great story though. Even if it is a bit nostalgic.

    Crap, now I'm definitely hooked. Even got me looking up my old band mates for a bit of a reunion.... Thanks a lot :P Great story though. Even if it is a bit nostalgic.

    Chapter 9

    Nice twist... I was just getting into the flow of things and you turned around and threw a curve ball. Can't wait to read the next chapter

    Nice twist... I was just getting into the flow of things and you turned around and threw a curve ball. Can't wait to read the next chapter :D

    The Real Beauty of Life

    Great chapter, although it was a bit weird about his mother dying and his father spying on him (peeks out window to make sure my father isn't doing the same) I'm sure the next chapter will be dedicated to his mother's funeral and a confrontation with pops. (And hopefully another great sex scene to cheer him up )

    Great chapter, although it was a bit weird about his mother dying and his father spying on him (peeks out window to make sure my father isn't doing the same) I'm sure the next chapter will be dedicated to his mother's funeral and a confrontation with pops. (And hopefully another great sex scene to cheer him up ;) )

    Chapter 15

    Cassie, bravo Well written, and, well, makes me so happy Now we have to figure out how to make gay marriage legal in an alternate world before it even happens in this world....

    Cassie, bravo :D Well written, and, well, makes me so happy :) Now we have to figure out how to make gay marriage legal in an alternate world before it even happens in this world....

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    Mister

    Grr, the tension is killing me. I've been in situations like Corb & Pete's, and all it does is make you pine for a guy like Pete even more... Of course, I really feel like smacking both of em for being just plain dumb. Thanks for another good chapter

    Grr, the tension is killing me. I've been in situations like Corb & Pete's, and all it does is make you pine for a guy like Pete even more... Of course, I really feel like smacking both of em for being just plain dumb. Thanks for another good chapter :D

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    Chapter 42

    I cannot believe I missed this story in my GA journey... I love it, and I think you just got yourself a new faithful follower. Even I tear jerked at the end of the 42 chapter. Oh, and I think you adding Tom's POV to the mix was perfect.
    thumbsupsmileyanim.gif I cannot believe I missed this story in my GA journey... I love it, and I think you just got yourself a new faithful follower. Even I tear jerked at the end of the 42 chapter. Oh, and I think you adding Tom's POV to the mix was perfect. :D
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    Chapter 1

    I know I drink too much and all, but tonight, as have been many nights, we shared beer in the kitchen. I stayed awake and momma fell asleep. I kissed her forehead, covered her up in the chair and brought her alarm clock downstairs so she didn't miss work. Can't ever undervalue a mother's worth... 'Course doubt she'd like your poem much, cause it was my reminder to make her wake up for work as well, hehe.

    I know I drink too much and all, but tonight, as have been many nights, we shared beer in the kitchen. I stayed awake and momma fell asleep. I kissed her forehead, covered her up in the chair and brought her alarm clock downstairs so she didn't miss work. Can't ever undervalue a mother's worth... 'Course doubt she'd like your poem much, cause it was my reminder to make her wake up for work as well, hehe.

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    Chapter 15: Follow That Nowhere Man

    Okay ass hat, this entire story was about Tyler killing his wife, and because he couldn't be honest, he got himself killed only because a letter Trav's dad wrote him...?!? Grr.... I hate you some times I loved the story though. Didn't even take a bio break while reading it

    Okay ass hat, this entire story was about Tyler killing his wife, and because he couldn't be honest, he got himself killed only because a letter Trav's dad wrote him...?!? Grr.... I hate you some times :P I loved the story though. Didn't even take a bio break while reading it :P

    Being English

    Ya make me want to go back to college.... I hope this is a quick story, cause most of my favorites are making me wait a week, lol. Still reminds me a lot of myself... A gay guy that likes to party and socialize.... got a lot of experience at that, lol. Course I was far more over the edge when I was in college.... Gotta remember to follow this story It's a good one.

    Ya make me want to go back to college.... I hope this is a quick story, cause most of my favorites are making me wait a week, lol. Still reminds me a lot of myself... A gay guy that likes to party and socialize.... got a lot of experience at that, lol. Course I was far more over the edge when I was in college.... Gotta remember to follow this story :D It's a good one.

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    Epilogue – (10 Years Later)

    Kc, get it published.... honestly. That was the best damn story I've read in a long time. It's an honor to have talked to ya in chat when I see this level of talent. Bravo, and I fully expect a signed first edition. Def. my pick for story of the year. Guess it's time for a re-read...

    Kc, get it published.... honestly. That was the best damn story I've read in a long time. It's an honor to have talked to ya in chat when I see this level of talent. Bravo, and I fully expect a signed first edition. thumbsupsmileyanim.gif Def. my pick for story of the year. Guess it's time for a re-read...

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