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    When I'm With You

    First time I seen this story, and I loved it I'm the leads in a not so wedding band, but Ash sounds like me and Dust sounds like my bf, mostly. Specially cause of the promiscuous nature of Ash and the caring, slow nature of Dustin. I am a tad concerned about his prison record though. Make it a happy ending so I don't lose my mind worrying 'bout my boi toy

    First time I seen this story, and I loved it :D I'm the leads in a not so wedding band, but Ash sounds like me and Dust sounds like my bf, mostly. Specially cause of the promiscuous nature of Ash and the caring, slow nature of Dustin. I am a tad concerned about his prison record though. Make it a happy ending so I don't lose my mind worrying 'bout my boi toy :P

    Chapter 13

    Had a chance to see what your beta said about this in a pm and I completely disagree with his view point of jumping 5 years. I understand why ya did it, and I'm glad. The worst ya should do is maybe touch it up a bit, but so far I love the story. Great chapter Cassie! (And sorry JC ) Of course I hope you explain where that Mia chick went...

    Had a chance to see what your beta said about this in a pm and I completely disagree with his view point of jumping 5 years. I understand why ya did it, and I'm glad. The worst ya should do is maybe touch it up a bit, but so far I love the story. Great chapter Cassie! (And sorry JC :P ) Of course I hope you explain where that Mia chick went...

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    Chapter 38

    WTH? Seriously? Everyone is doing cliffhangers today, hehe. Loved the chapter though, and like the new budding relationship on the horizon. Can't wait for 39...

    WTH? Seriously? Everyone is doing cliffhangers today, hehe. Loved the chapter though, and like the new budding relationship on the horizon. Can't wait for 39...

    Chapter 6

    Why do I get the feeling Josh's pops is gonna see the light? Either that, or Mitch is going to kick his ass... Great chapter bro, I like the developments in this story

    Why do I get the feeling Josh's pops is gonna see the light? Either that, or Mitch is going to kick his ass... Great chapter bro, I like the developments in this story :D

    Troubles in Life

    I think I was just as jealous when I read that. Poor Teeny falling for the porn star... I love it. But your killing me with the cliff hangers... throw us a bone at least 'Nother great chapter though. WTG Sid.

    I think I was just as jealous when I read that. Poor Teeny falling for the porn star... I love it. But your killing me with the cliff hangers... throw us a bone at least :P 'Nother great chapter though. WTG Sid.

    Chapter 19

    I hope you fully intend on writing a spin off, because I enjoyed this story about as much as I enjoyed Charlie by Hamen last year. I read at least 30 chapters a day on various sites, and this story alone makes my Mondays (and an occasional Sunday apparently) easier to bare. I'm highly disappointed that it will be ending soon, but I'd take that as a compliment if I was you

    I hope you fully intend on writing a spin off, because I enjoyed this story about as much as I enjoyed Charlie by Hamen last year. I read at least 30 chapters a day on various sites, and this story alone makes my Mondays (and an occasional Sunday apparently) easier to bare. I'm highly disappointed that it will be ending soon, but I'd take that as a compliment if I was you :P

    Normal?

    Well, I have a feeling I know how this story is going to go, and to say it's an interesting premise is an understatement. I hope ya spend a long time on this story because I'm intrigued, and would love to read more.

    Well, I have a feeling I know how this story is going to go, and to say it's an interesting premise is an understatement. I hope ya spend a long time on this story because I'm intrigued, and would love to read more.

    Chapter 18

    Okay, sir. Your beginning to make me mad. I can take a cliff hanger or two, but seriously... Still loving the story, and still have a million questions. Keep up the good work, bro.

    Okay, sir. Your beginning to make me mad. I can take a cliff hanger or two, but seriously... :D Still loving the story, and still have a million questions. Keep up the good work, bro.

    True Connection

    Okay, that was hella mean.... I just started the story this morning, and I am a fast read, so I prefer completed works, but I was struck by this one, so I had to read. How dare you leave it off there But thanks for putting Shay and Miro in my life, lol. They are soo cute together. Can see I'll be following this story for a while.

    Okay, that was hella mean.... I just started the story this morning, and I am a fast read, so I prefer completed works, but I was struck by this one, so I had to read. How dare you leave it off there :P

    But thanks for putting Shay and Miro in my life, lol. They are soo cute together. Can see I'll be following this story for a while.

    Chapter 16

    Well written KC. This is my favorite story on GA at the moment, and that says a lot, as I'm practically reading all of em, lol. Still feel bad about Tanner, and don't want him to just disappear so maybe just kill off Gibby and let em go to heaven together Either that, or make em haunt Amanda for the rest of her days

    Well written KC. This is my favorite story on GA at the moment, and that says a lot, as I'm practically reading all of em, lol. Still feel bad about Tanner, and don't want him to just disappear so maybe just kill off Gibby and let em go to heaven together :D Either that, or make em haunt Amanda for the rest of her days :devil:

    Chapter 15

    Your chapters are simply too short. I would rather them be in the neighborhood of 20k if I only get to read one chapter a week JK. Another brilliant chapter bites the dust, and I'm stuck waiting for the next one.... I did like Tanner in this one a little more for some reason.

    Your chapters are simply too short. I would rather them be in the neighborhood of 20k if I only get to read one chapter a week :P JK. Another brilliant chapter bites the dust, and I'm stuck waiting for the next one.... I did like Tanner in this one a little more for some reason.

    Life to Endure

    Damn, Sid, that was just plain mean, lol. I was finally starting to like Dylan, and you go and bring Marcus into the picture Great job on the story so far, though.

    Damn, Sid, that was just plain mean, lol. I was finally starting to like Dylan, and you go and bring Marcus into the picture :P Great job on the story so far, though.

    Chapter 12

    Another great chapter!! How long is it going to take Johnathan to think that poor Gibby is going batty? Can't wait for ch. 13

    Another great chapter!! How long is it going to take Johnathan to think that poor Gibby is going batty? Can't wait for ch. 13 :D

    Chapter 11

    KC, I agree with Manu, and I am desperately trying to keep my tongue in check about Tanner dying. You better keep Casper around. If you don't, I will hunt you down. <Total Promise, I will go psycho stalker reader on you But really, great chap. and can't wait for the next.

    KC, I agree with Manu, and I am desperately trying to keep my tongue in check about Tanner dying. You better keep Casper around. If you don't, I will hunt you down. <Total Promise, I will go psycho stalker reader on you :P But really, great chap. and can't wait for the next.

    The Beginning

    Well, so far true to form, the story is real, but I think I'll embellish a lot in this one. I only have about half the story line worked out. I hope you like it (or hate it), either way I know you thought about it Thanks for the review.
    On 06/10/2012 02:49 AM, K.C. said:
    Hmmmm....Interesting... want to see where this goes.
    Well, so far true to form, the story is real, but I think I'll embellish a lot in this one. I only have about half the story line worked out. I hope you like it (or hate it), either way I know you thought about it ;) Thanks for the review.

    Chapter 10

    Whoa, I can't say I seen that coming, but I am a little confused. If he is dead and has been since the accident, why did John have to go to the hospital so quickly? Still a brilliant chapter and a helluva cliff hanger. I'm definitely hooked now so look forward to me begging you for quicker chapters, lol.

    Whoa, I can't say I seen that coming, but I am a little confused. If he is dead and has been since the accident, why did John have to go to the hospital so quickly? Still a brilliant chapter and a helluva cliff hanger. I'm definitely hooked now so look forward to me begging you for quicker chapters, lol.

    Chapter 1

    I've been through the same. Never had a problem in high school, as I was really popular at the time, and always quirky, never a problem with my mother, sisters or brother, or at my jobs. My ex husband however had the roughest time. People bullied him in school, his parents disowned him, the people at the same job I was working at teased him, even while knowing I was out and proud. I'm actually quite glad they did tease him though, because if they didn't, I wouldn't have met him, and spend many m

    I've been through the same. Never had a problem in high school, as I was really popular at the time, and always quirky, never a problem with my mother, sisters or brother, or at my jobs. My ex husband however had the roughest time. People bullied him in school, his parents disowned him, the people at the same job I was working at teased him, even while knowing I was out and proud. I'm actually quite glad they did tease him though, because if they didn't, I wouldn't have met him, and spend many mostly happy years with him.

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    Chapter 9

    Ya better tremble KC.... that was one helluva cliffhanger. I'll be the first to throw stones, I suppose. Honestly, though, your writing one heck of a story, and so far it's in the bag to be nominated for the next award session Two thumbs up

    Ya better tremble KC.... that was one helluva cliffhanger. I'll be the first to throw stones, I suppose. Honestly, though, your writing one heck of a story, and so far it's in the bag to be nominated for the next award session :D Two thumbs up ;)

    Trouble

    Excellent start, on an equally excellent premise. I hope you can keep up the story line, and have a well thought out plan, as you started with a bang. Outside of what Cia is saying, I've myself tried to justify actions as such, and regardless what she says, we are all just guys Sorry Cia, gotta pull the man card, lol. I definitely look forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work, and I'm glad to have a new author to read

    Excellent start, on an equally excellent premise. I hope you can keep up the story line, and have a well thought out plan, as you started with a bang. Outside of what Cia is saying, I've myself tried to justify actions as such, and regardless what she says, we are all just guys :P Sorry Cia, gotta pull the man card, lol. I definitely look forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work, and I'm glad to have a new author to read :)

    EPILOGUE

    Okay, now that it's over, I'm going to have to go back and re-read it (most likely 10 times) Never once in all my years have I been so emotionally connected to a story, and you had it down to a science. You must continue this story, and it better be soon, cause I think this novel caused a rare 'ham addiction' and we need our fix Anyways, kudos on my personal reader's choice awardee

    Okay, now that it's over, I'm going to have to go back and re-read it (most likely 10 times) Never once in all my years have I been so emotionally connected to a story, and you had it down to a science. You must continue this story, and it better be soon, cause I think this novel caused a rare 'ham addiction' and we need our fix :D Anyways, kudos on my personal reader's choice awardee worshippy.gif

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    Chapter 46: "Fox In The Hen House"

    I remember when my long term bf of 10 years told me the same thing about our roommate, and made me believe I was going nuts.... until I caught them in bed.... Time Sean gets strung up by his manhood

    I remember when my long term bf of 10 years told me the same thing about our roommate, and made me believe I was going nuts.... until I caught them in bed.... Time Sean gets strung up by his manhood :devil:

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    Chapter 15

    I seriously thought Elliot's parents would have found a way to stay I WAS looking forward to the ending, that is until I read it Great story, congrats on a well written tale

    I seriously thought Elliot's parents would have found a way to stay :( I WAS looking forward to the ending, that is until I read it :P Great story, congrats on a well written tale :)

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