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Way to go . Congrats

HI kiddo. Glad you liked it. I'm out of town for work, but the next chapter is almost done. Will be posted by Monday. Hugs.

What a sweet review. I guess we could all use a few "twinkle toes" at one time or another. They are pretty cool. And yes, Uncle Dan and his little menace are going to be a wake up call for Hunter. thanks for reading!

Carly is now the victim of her own evilness. Go Craig! I'm glad their mother was a witness to the truth. Now I'm ready for a beautiful love story between Craig and Jared.

Well, well. Looks like Ms. Carly is going to get the wind taken out of her sails. Twin brother is not a fool except for his feelings for Jared of course. It's so sad that Jared has lived in this hell for so long at the hands of the man he loves sister. "shakes head" Can't wait for the confrontation between the good twin and the evil twin

I couldn't help but compare Carly and Trina. One is bat shit crazy and the other supportive and protective. You write your characters so well. "Crap on a cracker", is now my new phrase. I love it. That expression can say a lot at times you need to get a point across. lol Jared has a lot of demons to face. It's obvious he doesn't want to cause problems but when love is involved, it's all or none. It's going to be interesting to watch him evolve in the story.. Great chapter!

Sheesh! You talk about a storm in progress. I couldn't run for cover thinking I'd miss something. Great first chapter and I can see I've missed some great reading in my time away from GA. Thanks for such wonderful writing.

And Dang Bear, I hope I can keep you hooked. Hope you are doing well. Thanks and hugs back.

Thanks. I remember those shoes so well. Uncle Dan I can tell is going to have to be someone special. Thanks for the review

Thank you. I hope I don't disappoint. I'm trying to put Uncle Dan in my mind. Thanks for reading.

Thank you! I'm looking forward to expanding this story. I've missed writing here and Uncle Dan is going to be quite the surprise for Hunter.

Hi Lisa Glad to be back and I've missed all of you. Yeppy Uncle Dan is going to have to be hot and handsome to be able to get Hunter's attention.

Me too Uncle Dan is evolving in my mind as I write. Thanks for the review

Thanks Avid One of those times when the prompts keeps on going

Thanks hun. One of those things that just keep pushing you.