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I'm enjoying your story and look forward to more chapters, but am confused by your timeline. His parents died on Nov. 13, and the next day he can't go to school because school is out for the summer. Summer? Okay, maybe we're in someplace like Australia. But now we find out that the first day of high school is Aug. 23 -- sounds more like the U.S. or Canada.