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    Infinite Density

    The straight guy getting "outed" was something I just couldn't resist doing... poetic justice and all that. And, it's what made the story fit the theme.
    On 03/18/2012 05:58 AM, MJ85 said:
    Hee hee, nice use of title. :D The twist on the theme is interesting too.

     

    I enjoyed reading this. :)

    The straight guy getting "outed" was something I just couldn't resist doing... poetic justice and all that. :) And, it's what made the story fit the theme.

    Infinite Density

    I was torn on the details for purchasing the property; I had to include some (but not too much) to show what the resulting situation was (and Chad making some air-headed choices) but not too much... It's a short story, and ended up at 12000 words as is.
    On 03/19/2012 04:40 AM, Percy said:
    I enjoyed reading this. The details added a lot of texture to the story and the pacing was just perfect.
    I was torn on the details for purchasing the property; I had to include some (but not too much) to show what the resulting situation was (and Chad making some air-headed choices) but not too much... It's a short story, and ended up at 12000 words as is. :)

    Infinite Density

    I set the story in 2004, because I felt it worked better then, regarding slightly different attitudes regarding homosexuality, and anonymous handles being far more prevalent in the pre-facebook era. I used the car's age to set the timeframe; 1990, plus 14 years.
    On 03/18/2012 11:50 AM, Bill W said:
    '90 Ford Probe - 14 years old... what year are you in? lol

    Although I had an inkling, once Jason's attitude began to change, it was well done and I thoroughly enjoyed this.

    I set the story in 2004, because I felt it worked better then, regarding slightly different attitudes regarding homosexuality, and anonymous handles being far more prevalent in the pre-facebook era. I used the car's age to set the timeframe; 1990, plus 14 years. :)

    Circumnavigation

    Thanks!  The Florida side is fast changing, and this much delayed move by Gonzalez to get Lisa and Joel out of their love shack should keep Trevor a bit safer -were it not for the tracker on Kookaburra. :-)   Joel is a favorite of mine as well.
    On 11/16/2011 05:42 AM, flashpoint2008 said:
    Good read, although part of me was wanting more on the Trevor / Rachael reunion fallout, in reality, Joel is probably my favorite character and reading about him is always a pleasure. Also, reading about how the Florida side of things is starting to get wrapped up is also enjoyable.

     

    I am really looking forward to and dreading the approach of the end of the story, how you handle the remaining threads will keep me guessing.

     

    Thanks for all the hard work.

    Thanks!

     

    The Florida side is fast changing, and this much delayed move by Gonzalez to get Lisa and Joel out of their love shack should keep Trevor a bit safer -were it not for the tracker on Kookaburra. :-)

     

    Joel is a favorite of mine as well. :)

    Circumnavigation

    Shane's orientation; now that's a question I can answer!   Shane's orientation is almost always upside down; he is, after all, in Australia, where they do most everything upside down.   Ned's wife's response.. I can't say much, except that you have a good eye.
    On 06/08/2011 04:04 PM, colinian said:
    Great chapter.

     

    So is Shane straight? Maybe. Maybe not. There's not enough evidence yet. That's what we need, more evidence about Shane's orientation! Yeah, yeah, I know, because it's the Southern Hemisphere his orientation is clockwise. But is he bent clockwise?

     

    Shane did a great job helping Trevor relieve a substantial bit of his PTSD. But the suggestion for Trevor to use Shane's Medicare card? That's flat-out stupid and could land both of them in a world of hurt.

     

    We haven't heard much from the reporters that were nosing around Carnarvon. It seems that's going to be a major factor at some point. Then there's Ned's wife's response to Trevor when he phoned. What is that all about?

     

    Too many questions. Not enough answers.

     

    Colin B)

    Shane's orientation; now that's a question I can answer!

     

    Shane's orientation is almost always upside down; he is, after all, in Australia, where they do most everything upside down.

     

    Ned's wife's response.. I can't say much, except that you have a good eye. :)

    Circumnavigation

    There will be pictures in the chapters. The pictures from past chapters should be appearing in them now.  I avoid the pics of the characters, because many times, I've read a story only to be blindsided by the author's selection of a pic for a character, which looks nothing like what I'd thought. I find that jarring, and I don't want to do that to my readers (who are prone to threatening to burn me alive at the best of times. )
    On 02/03/2011 01:44 AM, sdaddy said:
    Just another great chapter in a long line of great chapters. I agree with KevinD about the skewers though. Time for Trevor to have a little......fun, yeah thats the ticket. I am beginning to get used to the new format at GA but miss some of the extras that used to be part of the story like some pictures that allow this feeble mind of mine to imagine. I know most writers dont do this but I would love to see a pic of what the author thinks his main characters look like, even if it is just a drawing. Anyway as always keep up the great work and send that next chapter as soon as possible.
    There will be pictures in the chapters. :) The pictures from past chapters should be appearing in them now.

     

    I avoid the pics of the characters, because many times, I've read a story only to be blindsided by the author's selection of a pic for a character, which looks nothing like what I'd thought. I find that jarring, and I don't want to do that to my readers (who are prone to threatening to burn me alive at the best of times. :))

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