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I hope before the reopening there is a massive rainstorm that floods the park. I can't believe how Jackson's mom is so not worried about him losing his scholarship. He should tell her that working in the park has caused his times to be messed up. Toby and Derek kidnapping him was a DOOD thing after being punished for TOO LONG. after last chapter I started to think different about the ending but now i'm back to my original thought!
When I read a story on this site I (usually after chapter 1) try to envision how the story will end. With a story a least 8 chapters the longest I gone with out changing the ending in my mind is chapter 6. With this story it remains the same even after Chapter 10,right after graduating (packing everything he owns the night before) goes to the park drops his cap and gown down and leace that town FOREVER!