I may be late to reading this, but it is far worth the wait. I've read it a few times now. Each time, I get a different feeling. One is viewing the world from the perspective of nature and the vitality and richness that can never be tarnished by man's warmongering. Another is using a metaphor to describe the complex human condition and man's struggle to find connection and meaning in life. The introduction of the fifth sense is fascinating - man's connection to the greater universe which transcends his mortal time on Earth.
Besides all of that, I love the flow of the unconstrained stanzas. I think I will like Blank Verse!
Thank you for bringing this to my attention, AC.