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Wayne Gray

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    Avalanche

    This is a good little story. Dialogue is good, and the sex is too. What more do you want? Nice job, Thorn.

    This is a good little story. Dialogue is good, and the sex is too. What more do you want? Nice job, Thorn.

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    As Betwixt the Devil and the Deep Sea

    If you like horror then don't skip this one. It sent a chill down my spine, and the imagery was just right. A nice addition to the genre, inspired by Lovecraft, but voiced in Thorn's own style. Give it a read.

    If you like horror then don't skip this one. It sent a chill down my spine, and the imagery was just right. A nice addition to the genre, inspired by Lovecraft, but voiced in Thorn's own style. Give it a read.

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    • Love 2

    N'than

    N'than is the lone surviving member of his race. His slight stature makes him a target for those who would take advantage of him, but he ends up with strange allies along his journey. Give this one a read. It won't take much of your time, but it will stay with you long after you finish. Nice story, tim.

    N'than is the lone surviving member of his race. His slight stature makes him a target for those who would take advantage of him, but he ends up with strange allies along his journey.

    Give this one a read. It won't take much of your time, but it will stay with you long after you finish.

    Nice story, tim.

    • Love 4

    Sauna Summer

    This was a great snapshot into the life of Juha and the happy invasion of Adam into his world. This is where they get started, and it's a good read - sweet, hot, and sweaty. I'm betting you will enjoy it!

    This was a great snapshot into the life of Juha and the happy invasion of Adam into his world. This is where they get started, and it's a good read - sweet, hot, and sweaty. I'm betting you will enjoy it!

    • Love 1

    Before the Fall

    This story is so very different. It's biblical without preaching, sweet but not cloying, well-researched without waxing pedantic. Give it a read. It's good, and worth your time.

    This story is so very different. It's biblical without preaching, sweet but not cloying, well-researched without waxing pedantic. Give it a read. It's good, and worth your time.

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    My First French Kiss

    Wow.  So, don't read this at work. This short tale is unrepentantly erotic.  It's a story of many firsts for a young boy on the cusp of becoming a man.  If you're in the mood to make a mess, then here's your story.   Great story, AC!

    Wow.  So, don't read this at work.

    This short tale is unrepentantly erotic.  It's a story of many firsts for a young boy on the cusp of becoming a man.  If you're in the mood to make a mess, then here's your story.

     

    Great story, AC!

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    11:50 From Seattle

    I really like this story. It shows the angst of Andi, the questions he has, and his fear that Ronan will not find him attractive, or desirable.  Or even worse - that Ronan will not see him as a man. In the end, Andi is what he is.  Ronan can see it, and in the process of proving that, he helps Andi come to a place of greater acceptance of himself. Nice work, Thorn.

    I really like this story.

    It shows the angst of Andi, the questions he has, and his fear that Ronan will not find him attractive, or desirable.  Or even worse - that Ronan will not see him as a man.

    In the end, Andi is what he is.  Ronan can see it, and in the process of proving that, he helps Andi come to a place of greater acceptance of himself.

    Nice work, Thorn.

    • Love 1
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