Julien

Another beautiful story! Where do you get your inspiration? 😊 I love this story. First of all, because today Internet flirtings are more and more frequent. Secondly, because flirting over Internet and flirting in real life is totally different. Com, you manage to make the reader feel the difference. Behind his screen, Kevin is completly uninhibited. He is « protected » by anonymity. He can say what he wants, fantasize without any consequences. When comes the time to meet Rory face to face, there is the excitement, the shyness that take over, the surprise and all the other emotions and feelings which do not express themselves to their fullest when we are behind a screen. It’s really different and more difficult to express yourself and your feelings in real life. Inevitably everything hit Kevin when he first saw Rory, especially that Rory is gorgous and different from the picture he gave to Kevin. I find it very interesting that you have chosen to present Rory physically « average » on the internet, to make him super cute in real life. Your description of Kyle and Jason when they saw Rory was so perfect! Haha it was hilarious. Kyle and Jason... I don’t like that kind of person who fuck everyone around and use their nice appearance to seduce someone and then ditch him/her. In the end, I think that kind of person feels alone and unhappy once sex is done. To find the happiness they have to do sex again and again because although sex is good and intense, it’s also punctual. Once they reach the orgasm they feel probably empty and it is Love that fills this emptiness. Love is a feeling that runs through time and remains present when we have found the right person. But well, it’s my opinion haha. I think jealousy will settle between Kyle, Jason and Kevin. I hope Kevin will not be influenced by his « friends ». In fact in this case, « friends » is not really the right word, doesn’t it? A friend doesn’t try to change you. He supports you whatever the choices you make as long as these choices are in agreement with yourself. Hum I loved the hot wisperings. I can imagine Kevin’s excitement growing as Rory tells his fantasy. Com, once again I love the way you write! Thank you very much for this story, your work and your time! Big Hug!!! And sorry this is a long comment again.

It’s interesting to read a story from the point of view of a parent and especially the father. It’s also a challenge for the writer haha 😉 It’s a success! I like it a lot. Thank you Com!

It’s very very hard to help someone who is abused because they are so convinced that it’s all their fault. To survive, the brain invents all sorts of stratagems, which in final are all more damaging. But in the moment it’s the best thing to do to continue to live. When there is no longer solution, hope, the victim gives in and it almost always ended to the worst. Brody is very determined to convince Zack that he is a victim and that nothing can justify the horror he has been experiencing every day since almost his birth. For this, Brody is amazing and strong. I was happy to see that he had not left his lover. Despite the desire to isolate himself to protect the one he loves, Zack is very brave. He confronts his fears to the rhythm his conscience allows him to do it. Step by step, he becomes aware that he is a victim. Alone it is a process so difficult to engage and especially to maintain. With Brody’s help, Zack gets there. Bravo for this chapter Com! Zack’s thoughts are exactly what an abuse victim might get. I totally disagree with you Ben. It is precisely by highlighting abuses, homophobia, harassments and any other form of cruelty or abuse that we awaken the conscience and then decisions can be made. It’s by talking about it, by writing it, by disturbing the quiet little life of people that we are fighting against this kind of horror.

Hey Com! This story is one of those that made me discover your work. I already told you all the good I think about it in private but your work deserves a public comment! 😉😘 So yeah of course I read it again from the beginning until this chapter. Randy and Ryan are both adorable. Love between them is true: first look, the blushing, the small sensations in the belly and the heart when the two of them met. It was fast but sincere. Then, like all teenagers they discovered the temptation, the jealousy and all the emotions which make Love to live. Throughout the story you manage to give all these emotions to the reader. Me and I guess all your readers if I believe their comments have been hanging on your words hahahah. I always told you that you are an amazing writer and I will never stop telling you because with this story you proved it again. I felt Randy’s stress, his anger, his sadness, his love and passion for Ryan, sometimes his helplessness, his doubt, his love for his friends. Thank you and bravo!! Randy and Ryan have a long way to go. Their relationship is going to be hard because of Sean, maybe Cody (I believe the friendship with Randy could be evolve to something more), Ryan’s dad, and some of your surprise upheaval haha... But despite everything I am sure that Love between them will be strong. As for Ariel and Tyler. OMG, I am in love with those two!! But I keep my comment for Kiss of an Angel 😉 So I guess the next challenge for Randy is to speak with his mom about Ryan. I’m pretty sure everything will be fine with his mother... But well, I can’t be too confident because, Com my friend, you could always surprise me! Haha suspense...😊 Thank you so much for your work, your time and the passion you put in all your stories. It’s always a pleasure to read your stories. And I wonder, what is the first story you wrote? Did you publish it ? Big hug 😘😉

Hey Com! My first public comment will be for this story 😉 and I’ll try to be short but no promises. Well as usual I swallowed your words. I begun to read two days ago and I just finished at this chapter. First of all Lori is the best! She’s an amazing friend. She’s always here for Tristan despite probably her own problems. But she’s never complain about it. Sometimes I think Tristan is a little selfish but well, he’s in love and crazy about Jesse so he’s forgiven haha... Ha! Love! The alchemy between two people, the perfect mixture between madness, shyness, envy, passion, desire, and well jealousy. You managed to give us all these feelings with your words. Bravo!! 😉 Your are very talented you know that. I already told you. You don’t stop impressing me! Jesse and Tristan are very cute together. I love the way their story begun: the shy looks, the blushing and all the questions in the head when you meet someone who is cute and pretty. The first one: is this a fucking dream? And then: Is this boy interested in me? And then: oh my god he looks at me... haha So thank you Com for this story about Love and friendship. Oh by the way I loved when Tristan trashed Jason haha hilarious. To finish, I have a little question. Jesse is famous. He’s a youtuber. Well it’s different but have you ever had bad words and some (sorry for the word) assholes about your work like Jesse had ? How did you react if that’s the case ? Again thank you for your amazing and wonderful work and also the time you spend to write all these stories! Can’t wait to read more 😉... lol this comment is not short at all...