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  1. One More Day

    I would like to say that "Lets add more bodyguard and you will be fine" plan has never work and never will.  LISTEN TO NOEL Too late... Its okay, onto next chapter! God damnit

    I would like to say that "Lets add more bodyguard and you will be fine" plan has never work and never will. 

    LISTEN TO NOEL

    Too late...

    Its okay, onto next chapter!

    God damnit

  2. Close Call

    At first, it had been awkward to wake with my head on his shoulder or he spooning me, his arm wrapped firmly around my waist. From the day the attack had happened, he didn’t bother with etiquette any longer. He pulled me into his arms as soon as we went to bed and it felt right.  Aww   “That’s right, but that is not the only matter; I also have to examine him for penetration… he was a virgin, right?” “Was?” I thought that would be it and Diarmad would kill the doctor on the spot

    At first, it had been awkward to wake with my head on his shoulder or he spooning me, his arm wrapped firmly around my waist. From the day the attack had happened, he didn’t bother with etiquette any longer. He pulled me into his arms as soon as we went to bed and it felt right. 

    Aww
     

    “That’s right, but that is not the only matter; I also have to examine him for penetration… he was a virgin, right?”

    “Was?” I thought that would be it and Diarmad would kill the doctor on the spot when one of the council members piped up-

    I thought so too and here I am all excited, bundled up, eyes wide and whispering, "Yessss go D."

    We all need a friend like Landyn

  3. Reality Bites

    “Thought of everything, huh?” “No. We arranged it yesterday. I own this building and knew there were several unoccupied flats left. Has your family visited you before?” D, no. You should not be answering that..oh..oh nevermind. I just had a sudden thought that well, Noel is a great person for someone his age. He was hurt and angry about the moving but understands how severe the situation is when explained. But age and experience does play a role here and I am impressed with how sm

    “Thought of everything, huh?”

    “No. We arranged it yesterday. I own this building and knew there were several unoccupied flats left. Has your family visited you before?”

    D, no. You should not be answering that..oh..oh nevermind.

    I just had a sudden thought that well, Noel is a great person for someone his age. He was hurt and angry about the moving but understands how severe the situation is when explained. But age and experience does play a role here and I am impressed with how smooth the character developments are. At least for me it is, it feels natural. Noel is easily persuaded here, it was endearing to watch and amusing which believe me *mumble* can happen when you have lovers with huge age gap...

    Yes, I finished Book 1 and now going through again. Second read is when you notice all the details.

    I figured out why I like your writing, there is conflict but not foolish drama. There is something lovely in seeing people willing to work things together.


    Of course, I had a cheeky grin at the piano scene.

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  4. Thinking Out Loud

    Simon startled me out of my thoughts. “You said you’re not sure what’s them, and what’s you… well I know one thing, they never had romantic feelings for the King. They were his friends, not his lovers. If you’re falling for him, that’s definitely you.”  *points and grin like an idiot* “Noël… this Diarmad you see here… he is a, let’s say… subdued version of the real man. Because of his weakness, of the imbalance of his soul, his personality is… muted. He will become himself in time. As

    Simon startled me out of my thoughts. “You said you’re not sure what’s them, and what’s you… well I know one thing, they never had romantic feelings for the King. They were his friends, not his lovers. If you’re falling for him, that’s definitely you.” 

    *points and grin like an idiot*

    “Noël… this Diarmad you see here… he is a, let’s say… subdued version of the real man. Because of his weakness, of the imbalance of his soul, his personality is… muted. He will become himself in time. As a matter of fact, I’m really looking forward to your fights…” Grinning he raised his empty mug

    Oh? I sense my all time favourite scene will come in the near future 👀
     I always had a thing for couples who get back at each other or when a good emotional scene occurs.

     “If you don’t want me sitting with you at the table, just say so. There is no need to bring Landyn or Ronan into this. I’m not the type to force myself on people.”

    Yes Noel! Say it! I remember how much I love this part. I recall when I read it a long time ago, this is the first time I read a character actively called out and confront when someone is avoiding them instead of merely holding it in and keeping quiet or just accept it. Nothing wrong with them but I always preferred this. It shows they have..substance in them in a sense? a strong personality of sort and won`t just take it in. 

    Are we seeing potential King Noel`s behaviour here? *grin*

    He wrapped his arms around my waist, burying his face in my stomach

    Ah the fluff, the softness of lovers and emotions of love. How enduring love is especially when you wait centuries for it.

  5. Overexertion

    “How do you look…unaltered?” “Nobody knows anymore. The Seraei are old. We have forgotten.” Now this is new! If I am not mistaken *squint suspiciously* =-= Oh Diarmad, you didnt even apologize for endangering Noel?  “It is called diplomacy, Noël. We were able to agree on a treaty eventually. As soon as I am deteriorating, I am to step down, and the Council will elect a new king. Probably Keelan McGill. However, as it is a known fact the McGills have been trying to get this posit

    “How do you look…unaltered?”

    “Nobody knows anymore. The Seraei are old. We have forgotten.”

    Now this is new! If I am not mistaken *squint suspiciously* =-=
    Oh Diarmad, you didnt even apologize for endangering Noel? 

    “It is called diplomacy, Noël. We were able to agree on a treaty eventually. As soon as I am deteriorating, I am to step down, and the Council will elect a new king. Probably Keelan McGill. However, as it is a known fact the McGills have been trying to get this position since the beginning of our time here, certain rules and prohibitions had been implemented into the treaty. Among them the strict ban on using any offensive powers in my or your presence other than to defend me.” He snorted. “That will be the day when a McGill defends me or mine. Since Moira is a physician, she was the logical choice to monitor my health; see if I was still able to do my duty. One of the conditions of the treaty was that she had to be always by my side. We knew she was spying on us; watching me to see if I broke the law by making contact with you before it was time.”

    As someone who had went through the above so many times, especially the diplomacy shit. Yes. Yes. Everyone knows what is going on, its an open secret but you can`t go after your enemy or someone who hurt you. That would be fatal and all you can do is watch them smirk at you because you know they know, they know you know and there is nothing that can be done except to go through it and win. Sometimes...the opposite can happen :DD 

    Oh he apologized! and they look so cute bundled up together.

    Noel is angry, Diarmad is angry and even weakened he still acted like a king.

    Despite seconds away from clicking the next chapter. Seeing the mild cliff hanger and suspension *cough* frustrates me. I want to know what happened next asap XD

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  6. Demonstration of Strength

    *coos and melt* Noel, I can see more of his fierce personality here, I find it entertaining. I hope there will be growth for him as years comeby. Some actions or words spoken help added more zing? kick? to the characters personality. Like an antique mirror now polished. Diarmad, you are indeed a king. Power show to inflict mental damage on opponent is a must no matter what. Now, did I said no matter what? I hope I did because I wonder what will happened next. So many things like b

    *coos and melt* Noel, I can see more of his fierce personality here, I find it entertaining. I hope there will be growth for him as years comeby.

    Some actions or words spoken help added more zing? kick? to the characters personality. Like an antique mirror now polished.

    Diarmad, you are indeed a king. Power show to inflict mental damage on opponent is a must no matter what.

    Now, did I said no matter what? I hope I did because I wonder what will happened next. So many things like body language, quick thinking done all to help him get a semblance of upperhand to Keelan.

    Oh damnit Keelan. I dont like you. 

    My memory is vague but I hope I will have the delight of seeing Diarmad cook in the future~

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  7. Sleepless Night

    I am thinking between Old Fashion or Bourbon Sours for myself but I would put orange, cranberry and a cinnamon stick for garnish in the second one 😅 If I am curled up cozy however, I would just spiked my egg nog. But then again its a matter of question if I want to get up or not. Hell, I would just modify a rum and coke to look festive. Sometimes its a matter of taste and mood.  Snacks: Christmas cookies for sweet, a flaky savoury pastry for...savoury. But the fun part is fending off m

    3 hours ago, aditus said:

    How cool is that!? Which snacks? Which drinks?

    I am thinking between Old Fashion or Bourbon Sours for myself but I would put orange, cranberry and a cinnamon stick for garnish in the second one 😅

    If I am curled up cozy however, I would just spiked my egg nog. But then again its a matter of question if I want to get up or not. Hell, I would just modify a rum and coke to look festive. Sometimes its a matter of taste and mood. 

    Snacks: Christmas cookies for sweet, a flaky savoury pastry for...savoury. But the fun part is fending off my cats

    I dont have snow but I do like doing snow related things...you have made me think. Which is bad because now I want to experiment :whistle:

  8. Sleepless Night

    Oh Diarmad you oblivious king, he is so happy that he was a tiny bitt oblivious to Noel's mental churning. Now I cant wait to finish all the three books. We can see here that Diarmad is a king and he is dominating in a sense to Noel. Noel kept most of the sass inside his mind judging by the Prologue part. Noel is still young of course.  Am I equally confused no? But I am however, equaly frustrated as Noel is so we can tell what us my main driving emotion mostly  But I must say, a

    Oh Diarmad you oblivious king, he is so happy that he was a tiny bitt oblivious to Noel's mental churning.

    Now I cant wait to finish all the three books. We can see here that Diarmad is a king and he is dominating in a sense to Noel. Noel kept most of the sass inside his mind judging by the Prologue part. Noel is still young of course. 

    Am I equally confused no? But I am however, equaly frustrated as Noel is so we can tell what us my main driving emotion mostly :gikkle:

    But I must say, a midnight scene during a snowy season? I can easily pictured how quiet it must be, and the lighting in the room, it feels as of there's only two of them in the entire world with nothing to disturb them. 

    I can easily imagined Diarmad's part particularly on how guiding and quietly dominating he is. 

    Sometimes when I read things it was as if it could melt in my tongue and spread its taste if that made sense. I think I can easily get a tribute drinks and snacks to go for with this series while reading it 😆

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  9. The Letter

    We shall attribute this to my selective memory on certain things at certain point of time. For me it does feel like I have never read it before as your writing have changed (In a good way) I think I am quite sensitive to changes as I can remember something was different 

    33 minutes ago, aditus said:

    I love seeing you experiencing the story all over again, as if you'd never read it before. Thank you for this.

    We shall attribute this to my selective memory on certain things at certain point of time. For me it does feel like I have never read it before as your writing have changed (In a good way) I think I am quite sensitive to changes as I can remember something was different :wub:

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  10. Prologue

    So this is how you quote a comment 😀 and we are all happy that you did. I do wonder if there will be more in the future.  Thank you for continuing and finishing this story 

    38 minutes ago, aditus said:

    Hi Silver!

    I promised you and  @Blueyes57 I would complete the story come hell or high water. I'm glad I did.

    I'm looking forward to read your comments while you're re-reading the story. :heart: :hug:

    So this is how you quote a comment 😀 and we are all happy that you did. I do wonder if there will be more in the future. 
    Thank you for continuing and finishing this story :thankyou::hug:

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  11. Flare of Power

    “Is there a problem Simon?”  I just...laughed. I sure hope not Simon, let the poor man be with his mate. Too good an opportunity... I grinned. “No.” and that dear Landyn is The Negotiator. I can tell that the writing is more filled this time compared to the first time I read it. The arrangement of words are slightly different but retained the same..air, we can say that a writing shows a person`s personality and it is still as good as ever. Your writing aged like a fine whiskey 😁.

     “Is there a problem Simon?”
     I just...laughed. I sure hope not Simon, let the poor man be with his mate.

    Too good an opportunity... I grinned. “No.”
    and that dear Landyn is The Negotiator.


    I can tell that the writing is more filled this time compared to the first time I read it. The arrangement of words are slightly different but retained the same..air, we can say that a writing shows a person`s personality and it is still as good as ever. Your writing aged like a fine whiskey 😁.

    But poor Noel, I am sure he is doubting everything he did and feel quite alienated from his own self.

    Hello Miora. I do not like you. 

    Oh Noel, of course you do not mind. Each of your soul loved him in their own way, a love that stretch across centuries will always be special. 
    I have devised a scheme. With every set of phase and work I got done. I can read a chapter as...a treat :D

  12. The Letter

    I have never been so thankful that there is a next chapter after this so I can read immediately. Diarmad and Noel are mates, thousands of books I have read. (I am human and my reads are limited) and never found a twist as interesting as this. I love that Diarmad is not a representative of an organization but potential lover to Noel instead, I love how weakened he is, his emotions as a king is displayed when he admit that this is the least he can do in his state. How will Noel react? Th

    I have never been so thankful that there is a next chapter after this so I can read immediately.

    Diarmad and Noel are mates, thousands of books I have read. (I am human and my reads are limited) and never found a twist as interesting as this. I love that Diarmad is not a representative of an organization but potential lover to Noel instead, I love how weakened he is, his emotions as a king is displayed when he admit that this is the least he can do in his state.

    How will Noel react? That should interesting. 
    We can tell how Diarmad is the older one every time he says, "Read!" 

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  13. Reunion

    I love how vivid and simplistic your writing are. At least for me they are, its amazing how smooth flow they are. When Landyn explain to Noel about the double work, it made sense but there is something off about it. I can`t wait to see what happened next. For someone who never experienced snow in my life I can always feel yours in the writing. The way you write about nature have always been my favourite, it is very calming no matter how many others I have read. Perhaps it is the atmosp

    I love how vivid and simplistic your writing are. At least for me they are, its amazing how smooth flow they are.

    When Landyn explain to Noel about the double work, it made sense but there is something off about it. I can`t wait to see what happened next.

    For someone who never experienced snow in my life I can always feel yours in the writing. The way you write about nature have always been my favourite, it is very calming no matter how many others I have read. Perhaps it is the atmosphere or air of the writing style. 

    Si for Simon is a very cute nickname

    Edit: I did groaned when Noel was...punt off so to say. Ouch.

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  14. Prologue

    Why hello there Noel, pleased to see you again. I have found the review button and I promise after reviewing a few chapters and re-reading them that I will go back to my work. I have been following this story for a very long time (2012?), back in the early days. I can`t express how exciting I am to read this again. I can share my emotions with the person who counted the beams in church. I have nothing against religion but I don`t have the attention span nor patience for it, no matter h

    Why hello there Noel, pleased to see you again.

    I have found the review button and I promise after reviewing a few chapters and re-reading them that I will go back to my work.

    I have been following this story for a very long time (2012?), back in the early days. I can`t express how exciting I am to read this again. I can share my emotions with the person who counted the beams in church. I have nothing against religion but I don`t have the attention span nor patience for it, no matter how fascinating.

    The last sentences are intriguing and made me feel very anticipating for the next one.

    Onward I go.

     

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  15. Excerpt from a diary

    Thank you for your kind words and interest. I am still trying to get myself used to the site's formatting and the works so everything is a bit wonky. As for the writing, it will need editing of course 😆 I planned on doing it asap before posting another chapter. 

    Thank you for your kind words and interest. I am still trying to get myself used to the site's formatting and the works so everything is a bit wonky. As for the writing, it will need editing of course 😆 I planned on doing it asap before posting another chapter. 

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