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    Drama
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    USA Cananda
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    gay teen boys coming of age

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  1. Jon Jon

    February 15th, 2011

    Too often certain folks, cultures make it so hard to understand. Being closeted all my life and now at 77 the end is near. To have tried first to fool myself and then all around sneaking porn and an opportunity here and there. It's so much better to be who you really are with the beauty of loving who you love not who you are expected to love. Bravo to the young man in the poem.
  2. Jon Jon

    Palouse

    I know little of music and less of classical music. Though many years ago I played the trumpet in my middle school band. I worked with disadvantaged, neglected and underprivileged boys. Lost boys so to speak but many with talents. This story brings back those memories. I don't know why I cried with the reading. The emotion of the characters was there in a subtle way almost hidden. I guess I just love stories of lost gay boys who find love and success and show their talent and overcome obstacles of bigotry and foolish religious doctrum. Although filled with beautiful detail and artful description which can make for a slow read the story held my attention. Yes 5 stars for pulling all my favorite themes into one magnificent read. Thank you for your achievement and the effort it took in the writing.
  3. Beautifully written. I loved the banter back and forth between Robby and Nathan. A couple of times they had me laughing out loud. Nathan is such a tease and Robbie for all his problems is really a good hearted kid. Nathan is a bit much trying so hard to be a big splash as an entertainer, always putting himself on stage. Hopefully, he'll find a balance with Robbie the second time around. I have voiced this on several occasions and for sure Dodger has a great creative talent. I guess it is the selfishness in me that wants more and to bring the story to a conclusion. I could bear installments if they were at a pretty regular interval. I have tried my hand at writing and know how much of an effort it is. So I know the energy and commitment it takes so thank you Dodger for all the work that is in your stories.
  4. I liked it. For such a long, very very long story it held your interest. I found myself skipping over some of the super descriptive passages. I tend to take thing at face value so when you say something is big you don't have to say gigantic or monstrous or whatever. One thing for all it's length I thank the author for finishing it in a timely manner. It is filled with mystery and intrigue and that is what keeps your attention. I reserve 5 stars for stories that capture me emotionally. This although thrilling for the most part did not.
  5. Jon Jon

    Chapter 139 Bonding

    I don't agree with the bunch that says Daniel is a mini Don. Don is psychotic homophobe - Daniel is basically a good kid who doesn't like conflict. Nothing like Don he has very little of Don's meanness that is for sure. The pastor is a little too touchy feely for me. I think he has brain washed Mathew, probably molests him too. Robbie is just beginning to see that Sue is probably his best friend trying so hard to give him the love he needs with the passing of his mom. For sure the whole experience for Robbie is too much as he grasps at straws like Connor and Nathan when he really needs to be back in the UK with Tom.
  6. Jon Jon

    Chapter 8

    So sad, a great story started but not completed. I can understand taking a bit of a break but 4 years. I guess I should give the author the benefit of a doubt and say he was incapacitated in some manner.
  7. The story simple and direct without long lavish descriptions. ( I hate those never ending descriptions ). It was sweet the way that Blake came out to Tay. It's the land of make believe but so wonderful to see 2 gay boys find each other.
  8. I agree it's a shame Robbie and Daniel can't be together. Or can they. Daniel could be Bi or closeted Gay due to Don's homophobe influence. The fact that Daniel asked Robbie to go on the date with him shows his love and respect for his adopted brother. Maybe as much as Daniel tried being with the girl just didn't stir his juices the way he imagined it would. Nathan is too gayishly flamboyant with an agenda that really has no room for Robbie and Conner is just a big lug with a good heart but little sensitivity. So discouraging that the story has no ending yet. It's been on going for almost 5 years. I love it but it needs an end. Stopping and starting breaks the continuity. I read the first 134 chapters in the fall of 2019 and then a drip and now another. I so want to know all this boys are well and safe and happy with their lovers.
  9. Jon Jon

    Chapter 33

    It is a good move so sad I think that it is so hard to bring this story to a conclusion.
  10. Jon Jon

    My Only Escape

    I do a little bit of writing myself but I tend to complete the story. The end is the hardest part you've gotten bored with the characters but you have to soldier on so to speak. the readers deserve an ending. Sorry to say this Comicality, but I don't want to read any more of your stuff becase there isn't an end. Hey you are a gifted writer your plots and character development are great. There are times when you can't stop reading it. But for me I don't want to go through that reading to have it not come to a conclusion.
  11. I found it cute and entertaining. Well written and it moves along so. I don't like long drawn out flowery descriptions. Like the author has a dictionary and a tusaris at his side and is looking up every pretty word he can fine. No you David told it how it is without all the BS that puts guys like me to sleep. Thanks fir your effort in putting it together.
  12. Jon Jon

    My Only Escape

    It is sad - that was my second ending - Zack getting hurt or actually dying - more times than not a teen in that situation - in a nervous breakdown and gay - always hiding the real person - they do it... it is sad - but the fear of being out - is bigger than the survival instinct - probably a lot less today with the more tolerant attitude - but back in the 50's it was the norm.
  13. Jon Jon

    My Only Escape

    If only Brody's or Adam's mom were a school psychologist and took an extra look at Zack and saw the turmoil, the pressure going on in his head. If only they could reach out and give him the help he so sorely needs; get Zack and his mom out of that apartment while Zack's father is confronted. Hey looks like Zack's dad doesn't work so he should be removed. Then Zack and Brody can go on being boyfriends and after college marry and with a surrogate have a child of their own. Zack demanding it be from Brody's seed with his beautiful loving sensitive way. I need an ending. It is such a marvelous story; it develops the reader so thoroughly in the pure emotion of Zack, Brody and their friends. But it needs it's ending and please a happy ending. Before everyone is crying at Zack's funeral and Brody reads Zack's notebook to all assembled and Zack's father is found out to be the miserable excuse for a human being that he is. Sadly, that would be the case in real life but this is fiction, make it end happy Comicality. Please!!
  14. Jon Jon

    My Only Escape

    It is great story - the plot is outstanding and the characters are really good. Being a steak and potatoes man my only grip is that sometimes the descriptive is a little excessive and flowery seemly never ending at times. I found myself skipping over it as I became used to the author's style. That said other passages had me riveted to the action - the love scenes were spectacular and the sensitivity of the author jumped off of the page. It seems as if young Zack is in the throes of and emotional breakdown to compound the physical abuse of his father. I was literally 100% depressed to find at the end of chapter 32 (read in 2 days time) that Zack still didn't have the courage to get the help he needed. PLEASE HURRY AND FINISH IT.
  15. Jon Jon

    Chapter 8

    wow what a chapter - such a marvelous scene between Zack and Brody as they exchange their second kiss, so sensual and exotic. Zack gives up his middle name and a beautiful name it is Zachary Aiden. You feel his strength of character in Zachary and his sensitivity in Aiden. There is now hope for Zack; a little bit of love dropped from haven; maybe just maybe Brody's love for him will give him the strength to tell of the horrors inflicted by his father. So sad that the father is such a villain with the mother oblivious and complicit in her inability to see the obvious. There are so many good fathers in the world but so often it the faulty ones that get the press and the mothers the love and glory.
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