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    Chapter 31

    I'm glad you liked it!  Sometimes you gotta rough (draft) it up a little when it's not cooperating lol. 
    Just now, JCtoGO2 said:

    Great Chapter. Sorry it took many drafts but the final chapter was well worth it. Looking forward to future chapters.

    I'm glad you liked it! 

    Sometimes you gotta rough (draft) it up a little when it's not cooperating lol. 

    Chapter 30

    Next chapter is coming soon. Been working with different drafts to make sure it's good. Looking forward to posting the finished product.

    Next chapter is coming soon. Been working with different drafts to make sure it's good. Looking forward to posting the finished product.

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    Chapter 13

    Yes! it was a total mess!  not like us, no sir! *Takes a peek out the window as the worlds on fire* 
    3 minutes ago, gabz2000 said:

    Omg omg 

    With how Baldric put it... the surface world 2,000 years ago was a total mess. I’m surprised Babica did not use the power vacuum to take over but I guess she’s more into the bloodshed than ruling the surface word herself. 

    Yes! it was a total mess! 

    not like us, no sir! *Takes a peek out the window as the worlds on fire* 

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  1. 5 minutes ago, gabz2000 said:

    How am I suppose to be productive working from home if I read this during my “breaks” ... extended breaks at that 😂😂😂

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    Chapter 7

    Hello! Today we are here to make one of Demented's famous Main characters!  The recipe calls for  1/3 hot  1/3 adorable  1/3 Frightening  Add salt to taste! 
    1 hour ago, gabz2000 said:

    Just gets more interesting by the chapter. 
     

    Excited to see how powerful Kotic will be. 
    One thing I agree with our protagonists at this point is that something really has to change in their countries... hopefully Baldric and Kotic will lead a successful revolution or coup or whatever.

    Also... both Baldric and Kotic are hot/adorable yet frightening at the same time! Hehe I like it. 

    Hello! Today we are here to make one of Demented's famous Main characters! 


    The recipe calls for 

    1/3 hot 
    1/3 adorable 
    1/3 Frightening 

    Add salt to taste! 

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    Chapter 5

    Glad you're enjoying it!  I love that that twist managed to hit as well as it did with so many people. 
    19 minutes ago, gabz2000 said:

    OMG... so exciting. 
    I’m so rooting for Baldric and Kotic to bring down this wretched kingdom. 
    What a surprising twist to the story and I love it!!! 

    Glad you're enjoying it! 

    I love that that twist managed to hit as well as it did with so many people. 

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    Chapter 2

    More than happy to take adorable! 
    Just now, Story Reader said:

    This may sound strange for a woman telling a man this about his story, but this story is so adorable. I love it! I especially loved the scene where the Warlocks and all came rushing at them but they got away through teleporting! Great writing! I am hooked!

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    More than happy to take adorable! 

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    Chapter 1

    I hope to see you in future chapters to see where this little story of mine goes! Always love to see new comments! 
    19 minutes ago, Story Reader said:

    I agree! A different type of story. The interesting characters are by far seem nice enough but have to read on to see. I am a feline lover as well as a canine lover. So this story makes me feel like Kotik may have found a good home the way the orc described the others.

    I hope to see you in future chapters to see where this little story of mine goes! Always love to see new comments! 

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    Chapter 8

    I swear I love the genuine hype I feel off of this comment.  I like how you're digging into the story and really thinking about it! Those are really good questions to ask, and I'm interested to see how you react to the answers. Stay tuned! 
    2 hours ago, astone2292 said:

    I have been a fan of this series since I laid eyes on it. This. Is. Bonkers! It's bananas! Straight up ridiculousness! And I need more! We have two badasses and a Felix, Hunter's in drag, vehicular pandemonium, flying phones with some demented Mary Poppins witch with interesting powers, and now our powerful hero is on the run! Combined with the interesting point of view for the storytelling, the action and world building is beyond addictive. Was honestly expecting just a pure chapter of Hunter being dragged on a day of dresses and pure humility on behalf of Felix and Agatha. But nope, you give us a new enemy, Agatha's...expert(?) driving, and Felix...surprisingly a little too okay with the poop hitting the fan. 

    Personally, I'm a fan of hypothetical conspiracies. Felix is hiding something, and for it to be hidden from Hunter for so long, it's gotta be juicy! When Hunter took out the restaurant wall, no real questions was raised by Felix, which was my first strike. If I was in an SUV and a phone floated in front of my face with Morgana singing while semi trucks and cars were flying all over the road, I'd be squealing bloody murder. Nope, not Felix! #striketwo There's gotta be a strike three coming up, leading to a big reveal!

    I'm glued to this story, and my expectations are high! Is Hunter going to get dragged back into the Borisov family? Is Felix gonna flip out and say, "Aw hell nah," to Hunter's real self? And (I'm forking calling this, by the way!) when is Hunter gonna end up with the Devil in a bedroom?!? Guess I need to be patient and wait for the next chapter...Excellent storytelling, by the way! I'm hearing Hunter's thoughts as I read it, which is hard to have me do. Keep it up!

     

    I swear I love the genuine hype I feel off of this comment. 

    I like how you're digging into the story and really thinking about it! Those are really good questions to ask, and I'm interested to see how you react to the answers. Stay tuned! 

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    Chapter 8

    I remembered this video I saw AGES ago on youtube and honestly I couldn't NOT draw some inspiration off of it. 
    1 minute ago, drpaladin said:

    Mary Poppins as psycho killer witch. :rofl:  Just a Spoonful of Sugar will never be the same.

    I remembered this video I saw AGES ago on youtube and honestly I couldn't NOT draw some inspiration off of it. 

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  2. 8 minutes ago, Forevermotion said:

    Wow. You know at first I wasnt really sure about this story until this chapter. This whole chapter was excellent and I cant wait to read more. Awesome!!

     

    Chapter 28

    Daw shucks thank you! This chapter took a lot of work to get right so I'm glad you enjoyed it!    Also that is a good point, we do need to find out what is going on with that! Stay tuned~ 
    12 hours ago, centexhairysub said:

    So well done, we always need a chapter ever so often that gives us a lot of information without making us to emotional, this chapter does that masterfully.  Can't wait to see what happens next, although we need to find out why that duplicate is going off on his own on this...

    Daw shucks thank you! This chapter took a lot of work to get right so I'm glad you enjoyed it! 
     

    Also that is a good point, we do need to find out what is going on with that! Stay tuned~ 

    Chapter 28

    I hope you understand that I am now going to steal the phrase "Zeus's Balls" and use it liberally for now on. 
    1 minute ago, Yeoldebard said:

    Zeus's balls! An entire building designed to focus arcane energies?! These two are incredible!

    I hope you understand that I am now going to steal the phrase "Zeus's Balls" and use it liberally for now on. 

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  3. 1 minute ago, Solus Magus said:

    It’s great that the magic system is slowly being revealed in progression alongside with the plot. And as a fan of magic myself, it’s a great way to lead me on. LOL.

    But Kotik is terrifyingly cute. I’m scared on his behalf on how Baldric would tease him.

     

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    Chapter 27

    I do love it when I can get the gears in someones head turning. Very good questions!  I've always enjoyed stories that reward people for paying attention, so I've tried to emulate that in this. 
    3 hours ago, centexhairysub said:

    Do the seven realize how powerful Kotik will become and can they see the outcome of the current situation?  This chapter was really interesting and touched on several truly important issues...

    I do love it when I can get the gears in someones head turning. Very good questions! 

    I've always enjoyed stories that reward people for paying attention, so I've tried to emulate that in this. 

    Chapter 27

    good questions!
    9 minutes ago, Yeoldebard said:

    Well well, if it isnt the Insane Ones. What are they playing at? Or are they suddenly so starved for contact that they are pushing their way toward Kotik?

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    good questions!

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  4. 34 minutes ago, Yeoldebard said:

    Sometimes you have to get things off your chest. I am downright terrified of the seven and what they might mean in the scheme of things. With luck, they will eventually be dealt with. An artificial immortality is still immortality nonetheless, and unnatural. Any same person would not let themselves fall into insanity in my opinion.

     

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    interlude: Acolyte of Belenus

    I said it before and I'll say it again, I take that as a huge compliment. Love me some Kandric Saga! 
    Just now, Yeoldebard said:

    This reminds me of the Kandric Saga. All these little players being dragged into the mess these two heroes have caused.

    I said it before and I'll say it again, I take that as a huge compliment. Love me some Kandric Saga! 

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    Nikki: Mismatched Eyes

    Trust me my shits drenched in weeb as well, I get you lol. I mean my biggest story on this site stars a goddamn Neko boy, I think my anime influence speaks for itself.  ain't nothing wrong with that. They're modern day teenagers, it'd be weird if there WASN'T someone who shopped at Hot Topic. 
    9 minutes ago, Solus Magus said:

    Though I do admit, anime was a huge influence on my imagination. When fight scenes play in my head, they’re often like anime. LOL. 
     

    And yeah, Nikki looks like an edgy/emo character. Just as how I imagined him to be. 😅

    Trust me my shits drenched in weeb as well, I get you lol. I mean my biggest story on this site stars a goddamn Neko boy, I think my anime influence speaks for itself. 

    ain't nothing wrong with that. They're modern day teenagers, it'd be weird if there WASN'T someone who shopped at Hot Topic. 

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    Chapter 14

    Praise me more! Uahahahaha!   Glad you enjoyed the lil plot twist 
    1 hour ago, Yeoldebard said:

    Dude! THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING!!!

    tenor.gif Praise me more! Uahahahaha!
     

    Glad you enjoyed the lil plot twist 

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    Nikki: Mismatched Eyes

    "The only thing hetero about me is my Chromia"  -Nikki probably  Nikki caught anime main character disease. Heterochromia, the harry potter/Goku/My hair is perpetually messy no matter what look, sees dead people, ect. I'm going to have to prescribe him to sit at the back window seat so he can wistfully look out of it while contemplating life.  Cain sure seems like a totally not suspicious person at all. No sir. Not suspicious at all. Not one bit.  Also "Bro could you

    "The only thing hetero about me is my Chromia" 
    -Nikki probably 

    Nikki caught anime main character disease. Heterochromia, the harry potter/Goku/My hair is perpetually messy no matter what look, sees dead people, ect. I'm going to have to prescribe him to sit at the back window seat so he can wistfully look out of it while contemplating life. 

    Cain sure seems like a totally not suspicious person at all. No sir. Not suspicious at all. Not one bit. 

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    Suddenly, a man appeared beside me. My heart took a lunge to my throat from the initial shock. It drummed in my chest as I stared at the man before me. He spoke, "It is called the Nyxian Blade. I must say, I covet what you have. We'll see if I can take it away from you right now."

    "Bro could you like give me like 30 seconds with the fuckin thing before you try and steal it from me?! I literally just found the damn thing on my bed. Fuckin chill!"  

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    Chapter 6

    As any good performer would say: "Know your audience."  Making that kitty blush was exactly the goal lol  
    44 minutes ago, Yeoldebard said:

    Lord Baldric had me a captive audience. I can only imagine how Kotik must have felt being in the middle of all this.

    By the way, breaking in a virgin while the estate listens... not the way I would have liked to be broken, but damn if that didnt make the kitty blush...

    As any good performer would say: "Know your audience." 

    Making that kitty blush was exactly the goal lol

     

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