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hmmm Chekhov's gun is a narrative principle that states every element introduced in a story should be necessary and have a payoff later on. This means if a detail, like a rifle, is described early in a story, it must be used later in the plot, otherwise, it should be removed to avoid creating a false promise for the audience So the file will appear later?

Someone could earn a reward for winning a chess game. Sounds like great motivation right ?

The whole mood has become so ominous with Silas seeming to be in command and acting as the grand chess master controlling all the critical pieces he surveys Who can assure things in complex matters can work out as anticipated? I am hopeful that a more positive outcome can develop for Will and Andrew as they and their friends take charge of their destiny and are better able to identify and defeat their enemies.

I understand how life can get in the way of anyone's plan. I support you taking the time you need, I am leaving for a vacation and hope to see what you decide to compose when I return.

I cannot believe this whole business operation comes down to who will win a game of exotic chess. It is classic high wire Steve. But, the various businesses work well as now configured and funded. They excel by using the talents of Lydia and others. They businesses might well get in trouble in a new form without new financing from Steve, etc.. At least, how can the charitable contributions continue? Steve is most proud of insuring people have jobs and profits are used to help good works in the community. He thinks he is making himself actually be a good man. Will this potential loss in the chess game to Blake remove his source of pride? Can Blake do it to him?

So now the threats are identified to us and Silas is the puppet master The new lead RCMP officer, Lefevre, is an undercover asset working for the Father. He has direct asset to Will. I hope he does not hear of Will's mental heath history and Jacobs mental health issues, too. But, West is suspicious of him and orders a deep background check and will be observing him. Lefevre seems too pefect to West. Silas orders his inside CSIS asset--Sarah--to pull Jane from investigating the Louisiana target that would expose a troubled past of the Father. Can Sarah do it without Andrew finding out? Silas also ordered a media blitz attacking the PM for the failure and deaths at the Alberta compound. This media assault seems predictable. Silas will be attempting to get Bob Hesson to be open to be the next PM. Will Hesson want to job? Will he want to be connected to the Father? I hope Sarah and Lefevre slip up by the mistakes they make and are caught by Andrew's and West's watchful eyes looking for problems as events evolve.

Blake thinks Steve is a joker and never willing to apply himself in his class or school. Steve seems to always to him to have an angle. Blake thinks Steve is not serious and just cannot be acting on the up and up. He thinks Steve must be taking advantage of people. He is misreading Steve and his business associates.

This shows some of what has been missing Jack knows and tells Vince they are going to be mates of Theo. Vince has trouble accepting this. Theo finds he wants Jack, the field mouse, which shocks him. Jack belongs to him and he feels it. Meanwhile Jack is worried that he cannot handle Theo's big cock or even any cock. “I’m a virgin, and I’m suddenly a slut,” Jack murmured. Things will work out. Fated mates will resolve any physical limitations.

In Victor Hugo's Les Misérables, Inspector Javert commits suicide by throwing himself into the river Seine. He is unable to reconcile his rigid, black-and-white view of the law with the fact that Jean Valjean, a criminal he had pursued for years, had shown him mercy by saving his life So sad--He was too rigid.

He looks like a young Pierce Brosnan.

At least Lyn was not nicknamed, Inspector Javert who Victor Hugo portrayed into a heartless man who sought justice without mercy at the sake of his humanity

It slowly seems someone else is in the house with him , but he does not yet realize it. Is he really going to do a naked cam performance for his premium subscribers?

BTW, you have hit a home run with this chapter and its subject of Blake trying to get the students while playing reporter You have scored the most comments of any of your chapters to date on this story. Congrats!

Blake is not aware of his own critical flaw that deluded him thinking that Steve was hurting others when Steve was not. He carefully analyzed motivations in Shakespeare plays for his students, but is blind to his own. Blake by going after the trio of students intending to hurt the has earned our very negative opinion. He is not giving them the benefit of thinking with an open mind and asking why? A classic question asked by reporters is " cui bono." Who benefits? Blake has found out the employees are pleased and well paid. He has not found any victims.

Lyn has clearly moved on while he will be Brad's friend, he no longer will be infatuated with him. Lyn is thinking of Alexander. I can see Alexander even more igniting Lyn's passion. Plus, Alexander intends to fuck Lyn and thinks by doing so will make Lyn see him as the guy for him. The present way people relate seems to be shifting. If this new arrangement come to pass, I am thinking about questions on two possible futures. Nothing is to be decided now, but maybe in the future. Are they going to be a couple? What will Brad and his wife say if they figure out Lyn and Alexander are a couple?