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  1. John c

    Chapter 12

    I thought Chris was Killians lookout. So how is this person now holding him at Gun Point?
  2. John c

    Chapter 33

    Well I'm glad to see the boys have put down the Silent Scorn. It seems the reason is once again they re facing an outside force against them. I hope that a pattern of unity doesn't only stay strong when they have to fight against negative forces.
  3. John c

    Entry 23

    I like that the story is moving forward, but why such short chapters?
  4. John c

    Entry 26

    It's just a shame that reading about Brandon's in decisions are so few n far between .
  5. John c

    Chapter 1

    Oh yeah. Are there going to be any details on that?
  6. John c

    Chapter 1

    Should be Very Interesting once Seth shows up
  7. John c

    Chapter 19

    Oh Man, here we go again. Here's to hoping Novak got the text.
  8. John c

    Chapter 11

    Uh oh. Don't much like that last comment. That 3 counties wasn't far enough. With him being a runner in all. Hopefully the Horse Back Riding goes well.
  9. John c

    Chapter 5

    It would be cool to see where it goes from here.
  10. John c

    Chapter 11

    Hopefully dear old Dad sees where the bigotry already almost Killed His Son.
  11. John c

    Chapter 11

    Somewhere in the chapter did I read that the park, school, n authorities were going to look it the reason the log used for a crossing ended up in the water? Eell if I remember correctly, wasn't Timmy the one jumping on it?
  12. John c

    Chapter 11

    Somewhere in the chapter did I read that the park, school, n authorities were going to look it the reason the log used for a crossing ended up in the water? Eell if I remember correctly, wasn't Timmy the one jumping on it?
  13. John c

    Chapter 9

    Pretty Much. His dad made a promise to Joel
  14. John c

    Chapter 9

    I agree with someone else's comment, that Colt may very well get introuble with the parental s for not keeping Jole drama free. Colts will probably fire back with why is Jole living with them n demand some kinda of explanation.
  15. Great piece kept me coming back for more. Just wish there had been a lil more. Thanks 👍
  16. Oh Man I Saw this Coming. Should always know all the facts before reacting. Conner still hasn't stopped to think what consequences his actions are going to set in motion. Mainly kicking the door off the hinges. Maggie may reconsider letting him live there being that violent. Strike 2 batter up. In Conners defense though. If someone treated me like Ryan did for months,I probably would have moved on sooner than Conner did. Since Ryan broke things off with no time or reason with no explanation. Both Wrong but who more so.
  17. John c

    Entry 18

    I read Billy's side of things. So yeah that is going to be hard. In Billy's defense, not that he was right for doing it but he had good intentions. Then was being black mailed. Aww teenagers n their drama, lol.
  18. Man I sure wish we could get back to hearing from Brandon regularly instead of months apart.
  19. John c

    Chapter 11

    Very True,but I feel a Tornado coming.
  20. John c

    Chapter 11

    I can see this is going to get emotionally Messy,lol.
  21. John c

    Chapter 5

    If this was a printed book which I could continue reading,I would have a hard time putting it down.
  22. John c

    Chapter 4

    Great ,can't wait.
  23. John c

    Chapter 7

    Damn Shame that ended there. Great Story though. 2 ND time reading it.
  24. John c

    Chapter 4

    Uh oh he we go again. I wonder if the murder that Asher is referring is Calob.
  25. John c

    Chapter 5

    If this story is really to end here. You ended this to be satisfying I guess. Although it would be so much better to see how Grady handled his coming of Age.
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