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Peter G

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  1. Peter G

    Chapter 43

    Iv'e been proved wrong, as in the last 2 chapters so I will hold all. (the butler did it) Miss White ,your turn
  2. Peter G

    Chapter 43

    Oh how the f***k was I wrong on this one, but I still have faith, there is more than one in this
  3. Peter G

    Chapter 42

    “Sounds like the kitten turned into a lion,” Ceriann said when Drew joined her and Jeff at the kitchen table with a mug of hot chocolate. Slowly, as he drank coffee and chatted with his sister and oldest friend, Drew began to relax. Sorry Nephylim, this stood out for me.. The opening lines of 2 consecutive paragraphs. minor spelling or words out of context not so much I would hazard a guess that it is Drew and Jeff's Boss (could be, maybe, probably that I'm wrong) but such is life. Loving the story and the way you keep us intrigued. Can't wait for Wednesday - Thursday in my country.
  4. Peter G

    Chapter 5

    Hopefully not detracting from the story. Thanks Wayne, I've read this before, but I'm doing it again, and it is exciting as it was the first time. Love the story and the way it's presented
  5. Peter G

    Chapter 23

    I'd love to comment on the story but it is too fast acting for me to keep up, The plot changes as do the action scenes and they do not concluded as I think they appear should do, it's like a cliff hanger gets beaten only to be followed by another. I would dearly love to see something happen with Lane and Barghast, but I suppose it's too early in the scheme of things. Do your best, I have faith in Barghast. Long Live Barghast & Lane.. I've since been restored {COMPUTOR WISE) When I tried posting this: and i'M STILL NOT RIGHT....
  6. Peter G

    Chapter 26

    I've come back and read my review. I apologise CraftingMom, I've sounded like a spoilt child denied my sweets when I want them, my apologies. I understand depression as I am experiencing it myself. My doctor took me through several question and answer forms - NOT WORKING......Drugs prescribe - no thank you - ??? don't know the answer.... listen to you daughters, they'll help, but first and foremost THINK OF YOURSELF, YOUR DAUGHTERS & etc GRANDKIDS !! then us, we will still be here waiting and if not then new readers will be here
  7. Peter G

    Chapter 23

    I'd love to comment on the story but it is too fast acting for me to keep up, The plot changes as do the action scenes and they do not concluded as I think they appear should do, it's like a cliff hanger gets beaten only to be followed by another. I would dearly love to see something happen with Lane and Barghast, but I suppose it's too early in the scheme of things. Do your best, I have faith in Barghast. Long Live Barghast & Lane..
  8. Peter G

    Chapter 12

    Thank you for your commitment in keeping up with this story. It has griped me and I felt the absence, Welcome back, (although you never left). I wonder if Mason plays a part with Bastion & co in helping the sorting out of Trevor ( I hate the word interrogation). Look forward, stay straight (ha) focused and live your life, You FIRST, this all come's second, but we'll be here for you.
  9. Peter G

    Secrets

    Further to my comments, a question from the quote "Wolfgang can't help if he can touch someone and sense/feel their desire and emotion. You're right, he's a reflection of those he contacts. He still retains himself, but that reflection can be very strong." Dose he contract though's strong emotions ? from Larry or will they play silent in the background to a relationship with Jed? I'm asking as underlined?
  10. Peter G

    Secrets

    Wolfgang smiled and stepped forward. "Hi. I'm Wolfgang." He looked around at everyone. "You probably remember Eric Caldwell?" Faces went pale, and there were a few nods from the assembled group. Wolfgang continued, "I'm a private investigator, and I was hired by his wife to figure out what happened to him. That's my goal." also the passage: They shook, and slowly, the blood drained from Wolfgang's face. Does it mean that he knows he done it (simply put) , was he a party to it? or was he being forced to ignore it? or is he protecting someone else?, maybe Wolfgang picked up on something else entirely which does not relate to the killings but something else sinister? Love the story so far.. keep going, I'm a fan
  11. The former YEAH , the latter, AH MAYBE (don't think so)
  12. Peter G

    Chapter 26

    come on Craftingmom, 6/29 and 7/29 for episodes, chapters and now we are in 2019, what is the hold up........I'm waiting O I'm so waiting..... waiting waiting. You have a wonderful story here and I can't wait for more. and NO I do not know how to write a story, any story or a story with meaning in any shape or form. That's your job, so get with it ps. love what I've read and re read, Come on MOM.
  13. Yinx (taken again in chains) no problem (given up hope maybe?? or just morose) Laneer - must be OK (don't know how or why) must have a come back.... as the author has completed the chapter in his perspective (narrative) so he's alive... I was fooled earlier, but it was the test werewolf that was on the mountain top when things went shitty. Loving the story as all others ask... more ?...When???
  14. Peter G

    Chapter 4

    Just a hunch and a feeling that Bro (Amara) is against the bro Aria- ????
  15. Peter G

    Outcasts

    I din't love it in chapter 1, but bring in chapter 2 ... all on board. Due to up brining WHAT can he think will happen??? as WHAT does he think will happen ?? Be afraid of his uncle ?? Be afraid of Who will meet when he goes to school ?? Who Cares.. ME I want more, and you are the one to supply otherwise All hope is lost PS - Love the want more Blindsided
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