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  1. Peter G

    Chapter 5

    Hopefully not detracting from the story. Thanks Wayne, I've read this before, but I'm doing it again, and it is exciting as it was the first time. Love the story and the way it's presented
  2. Peter G

    Chapter 23

    I'd love to comment on the story but it is too fast acting for me to keep up, The plot changes as do the action scenes and they do not concluded as I think they appear should do, it's like a cliff hanger gets beaten only to be followed by another. I would dearly love to see something happen with Lane and Barghast, but I suppose it's too early in the scheme of things. Do your best, I have faith in Barghast. Long Live Barghast & Lane.. I've since been restored {COMPUTOR WISE) When I tried posting this: and i'M STILL NOT RIGHT....
  3. Peter G

    Chapter 26

    I've come back and read my review. I apologise CraftingMom, I've sounded like a spoilt child denied my sweets when I want them, my apologies. I understand depression as I am experiencing it myself. My doctor took me through several question and answer forms - NOT WORKING......Drugs prescribe - no thank you - ??? don't know the answer.... listen to you daughters, they'll help, but first and foremost THINK OF YOURSELF, YOUR DAUGHTERS & etc GRANDKIDS !! then us, we will still be here waiting and if not then new readers will be here
  4. Peter G

    Chapter 23

    I'd love to comment on the story but it is too fast acting for me to keep up, The plot changes as do the action scenes and they do not concluded as I think they appear should do, it's like a cliff hanger gets beaten only to be followed by another. I would dearly love to see something happen with Lane and Barghast, but I suppose it's too early in the scheme of things. Do your best, I have faith in Barghast. Long Live Barghast & Lane..
  5. Peter G

    Chapter 12

    Thank you for your commitment in keeping up with this story. It has griped me and I felt the absence, Welcome back, (although you never left). I wonder if Mason plays a part with Bastion & co in helping the sorting out of Trevor ( I hate the word interrogation). Look forward, stay straight (ha) focused and live your life, You FIRST, this all come's second, but we'll be here for you.
  6. Peter G

    Secrets

    Further to my comments, a question from the quote "Wolfgang can't help if he can touch someone and sense/feel their desire and emotion. You're right, he's a reflection of those he contacts. He still retains himself, but that reflection can be very strong." Dose he contract though's strong emotions ? from Larry or will they play silent in the background to a relationship with Jed? I'm asking as underlined?
  7. Peter G

    Secrets

    Wolfgang smiled and stepped forward. "Hi. I'm Wolfgang." He looked around at everyone. "You probably remember Eric Caldwell?" Faces went pale, and there were a few nods from the assembled group. Wolfgang continued, "I'm a private investigator, and I was hired by his wife to figure out what happened to him. That's my goal." also the passage: They shook, and slowly, the blood drained from Wolfgang's face. Does it mean that he knows he done it (simply put) , was he a party to it? or was he being forced to ignore it? or is he protecting someone else?, maybe Wolfgang picked up on something else entirely which does not relate to the killings but something else sinister? Love the story so far.. keep going, I'm a fan
  8. The former YEAH , the latter, AH MAYBE (don't think so)
  9. Peter G

    Chapter 26

    come on Craftingmom, 6/29 and 7/29 for episodes, chapters and now we are in 2019, what is the hold up........I'm waiting O I'm so waiting..... waiting waiting. You have a wonderful story here and I can't wait for more. and NO I do not know how to write a story, any story or a story with meaning in any shape or form. That's your job, so get with it ps. love what I've read and re read, Come on MOM.
  10. Yinx (taken again in chains) no problem (given up hope maybe?? or just morose) Laneer - must be OK (don't know how or why) must have a come back.... as the author has completed the chapter in his perspective (narrative) so he's alive... I was fooled earlier, but it was the test werewolf that was on the mountain top when things went shitty. Loving the story as all others ask... more ?...When???
  11. Peter G

    Chapter 4

    Just a hunch and a feeling that Bro (Amara) is against the bro Aria- ????
  12. Peter G

    Outcasts

    I din't love it in chapter 1, but bring in chapter 2 ... all on board. Due to up brining WHAT can he think will happen??? as WHAT does he think will happen ?? Be afraid of his uncle ?? Be afraid of Who will meet when he goes to school ?? Who Cares.. ME I want more, and you are the one to supply otherwise All hope is lost PS - Love the want more Blindsided
  13. Peter G

    Second Chances

    “Not anymore.” I rejected. “I’m making my peace with it all. If you’ll let me, I’d love to try this.” OK Loved the chapter even though crying throughout. Good Bad Ugly who knows but from that statement I get the feeling that maybe Ryder is going to lay the foundations that will help ground Oli's and his in the future of Unity. Raw Base Roots, Family first, Band 2nd Important but not equal to. Family = Unity (in the larger sense of the term) but don't heed "United we stand divided we fall" black sheep will be shorn as when required (sorry Brandon Joe etc)
  14. Been there, Read that, but I'm back for more, still dripping tears as I know what's going to happen but I want to re live it again A truly amazing story that I will relish as I re read. My Thanks Hedstall greatly and repeatedly. Thanks
  15. Peter G

    Nolan

    What a perfect Pyramid 1 Human 1 2 Vampires 1 1 3 Werewolves 1 1 1
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