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1940, 1970 and Today – plus other poems - 1. Nineteen he is

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Poem No. 1

 

Kei

 

Nineteen he is. And young in what it mean to be a

nineteen-year-old Japanese boy. He eats prolifically,

laughs profoundly, finds mirrors in objects that reflect.

But his eyes sparkle beyond a culture or an age. In that

immensity does this indefinite sorrow live as only we can feel it

move beneath our own eyes. That flow of passion that can

produce for nature so little, but has made for mankind

nearly all its worth.

 

I on one line, he to another, by the divide must

we part. On the steps to go did he look at me, and then

I understood a sorrow too great to ever know. That

Connection made, the parting grew ever more impossible.

Nineteen and beautiful in his youth, he said a truth to me.

 

 

 

Poem No. 2 [1]

A Valentine for Kei

 

Sonnet:

 

I think of the poverty here encrypt,

Sighing for those who could love you better,

Then I give vicious thought to bolder script,

Which though slow, still has ways to unfetter.

Last night in my arms, my eyes beheld you –

Lashed down as you were by the charms of day –

But at least my hands knew just what to do

As conniving morning sought you away.

Asleep always nearer the ground’s pyre,

I invoke the love that never is gone

With the sun of men; His phoenix-fire

Burns in the turtle’s eyes, doomlessly on.

 

Yet, as the morning bids you not to stay,

The night shall bring you back;

Then these eyes, my heart and hands won’t defray

The passions that I lack!

 

 

 

 

 

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[1] “A Valentine for Kei” This poem’s mention of a phoenix and turtle alludes to what is reputed to be Shakespeare’s final love poem for Mr. W. H. – the onlie recipient of the 154 W. H. Sonnets, published in 1609, in the poet's lifetime. Here is an extract from the conclusion of The Phoenix and Turtle:

 

Beauty, truth, and rarity,

Grace in all simplicity,

Here enclosed in cinders lie.

 

Death is now the phoenix’ nest;

And the turtle’s loyal breast

To eternity doth rest.

 

(quoted from William Shakespeare: The Complete Works [Arthur Henry Bullen, Editor] (Stratford-upon-Avon 1904), p. 1252)

 

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This is beautiful and moves me. I have experienced a divide between those I want or even need to know better, as Poem 1 suggests. Poem 2 opens for me a timeless moment in the half light of morning. Thank you for these.

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3 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

This is beautiful and moves me. I have experienced a divide between those I want or even need to know better, as Poem 1 suggests. Poem 2 opens for me a timeless moment in the half light of morning. Thank you for these.

Thank you for reading and replying, my dear friend :) These are scenes from a long time ago now, and with No. 1, I just remembered the "line" reference is about how he was on one platform in Shinjuku Station, and I on another. These were the last trains, so no one else was around, and looking at one another as we were, something clicked in both of us 

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Excellent.  It evokes images within me.  Meaningful, even though I have not had similar experiences.

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6 hours ago, ReaderPaul said:

Excellent.  It evokes images within me.  Meaningful, even though I have not had similar experiences.

Thank you, ReaderPaul. This is just the sort of feedback most poets are looking for. I'm glad the poems connected with you. That's perfect

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These two poems have great meaning to me.  I can see in them a reflection of the love I feel for my mate.  They're beautiful with all the images and emotions revealed.  Thanks AC!

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7 hours ago, raven1 said:

These two poems have great meaning to me.  I can see in them a reflection of the love I feel for my mate.  They're beautiful with all the images and emotions revealed.  Thanks AC!

Thank you, Terry. I'm still sort of amazed this old poems of mine connect with people. It just goes to show an artist is about the least competent to judge their own work. Thanks again!

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