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Fireworks & Rain 9. My Uni-Verse

   (7 reviews)
Genres: Poetry

Five poems concerning various anniversaries.

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  • 09/15/2022 (Updated: 09/22/2022)
  • 5 Chapters
  • 434 Words
  • 9,971 Views
  • 112 Comments
  • Teen
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  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 2
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 6
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 4
  • Unique 4
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Table of Contents
  • 1. Jubilee
    • 59 Words
    • 694 Views
    • 22 Comments
  • 2. Rant
    • 106 Words
    • 735 Views
    • 21 Comments
  • 3. Legacy
    • 74 Words
    • 565 Views
    • 19 Comments
  • 4. Somewhere
    • 113 Words
    • 540 Views
    • 22 Comments
  • 5. Dates
    • 82 Words
    • 5,310 Views
    • 28 Comments

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W_L

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

These poems are best described as "Impressions" of life and moments, filled with emotions like anger and hope. It's a nice short read.

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Thank you, for taking the time to write a review, W_L. :)

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Doha

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A collection of 5 poems, Fireworks and Rain will leave you breathless and emotions churning.

Touching on the full gambit of human emotion, these poems speak to the heart and soul. 

I am so glad I read them. 

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Thank you for the great review, Doha and letting other readers what you think about my poems. :)

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Mrsgnomie

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Each of these poems is full of raw, thought provoking emotions. You will not leave empty handed.

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Thank you for this nice review, Mrs. G. :) !

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drsawzall

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A series of five thought provoking poems that will have you reflecting on their import and what it brings out in you.

Engaging, well written, and worth the time to read!

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Thank you, drsawzal for taking the time to review my poems. :)

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Mancunian

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

We are often told simple is best, well this is simplicity at its best. Five simple short poems that can help you remember or make you think, or even both depending on your own experience. I found reading this a thought provoking and enjoyable experience.

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Thank you, Mancunian for sharing your thoughts in this review, it's much appreciated.

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Gary L

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Do NOT read unless you are willing to be moved emotionally in different directions. These short verses are powerfully written by Aditus, well up to the high standard we expect.

if you have come across this review by chance and haven’t thought of trying the poetry on this site then please try. I have found it very fulfilling, stimulating and, at times, very moving. Hopefully that is what Aditus wants.

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Ha, you really shocked me with 'Do not read' until I reached unless... Thank you, for your review, Gary. (I know, I know my commas are all over the place again.)

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raven1

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Five cleverly written short poems expressing the feelings related to both large and small anniversaries in our lives.  There is sadness, joy and hope highlighted in the different poems.  Well worth the few minutes required to read these beautiful poems.  

Response from the author:

Thank you, Terry. :thankyou:

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