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Colorado Game

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Colorado Game tells the story of Mark & Ross. Mark is a musician, hired by Ross's company to score a project of theirs. They meet during a 'Teambuilding week' and get of to somewhat of a rough start. Will they make it, the CEO and the nerd, or...

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The characters and incidents portrayed and the names used herein are fictitious, any similarity to the name, character or history of any person is entirely coincidental and unintentional. This story portrays, at times, strong erotic content. If you are a minor, or in any other way not allowed to read it, you are advised strongly to discontinue.
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andr0gene 2004-Present; All Rights Reserved

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
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  • 18. Chapter 18
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  • 19. Chapter 19
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  • 20. Chapter 20
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  • 21. Chapter 21
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  • 22. Chapter 22
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  • 23. Chapter 23
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  • 24. Chapter 24
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  • 50. Chapter 50
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I love the how you wrapped up the story... In a reply to my earlier review you mentioned something about an overdose.........WELL!!!! how about a little

CONFOUNDED II

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On 04/24/2011 09:31 AM, Swhouston44 said:
I love the how you wrapped up the story... In a reply to my earlier review you mentioned something about an overdose.........WELL!!!! how about a little

CONFOUNDED II

It's up. The first 5 went up just now. Badger me some more and I may just post more. :P
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I'm re-reviewing. :P

 

What more can I say that you haven't

already know. I love the story and it's fabulous. The only minor regret is that

it isn't longer; but then if it's longer I'll have to wait a bit longer...

 

 

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Well, that was a lotta fun! Great piece! I really enjoyed it.

 

That moment on the door handle ... sure as shit, that promised fireworks later :D

 

My tensest moment was the telephone sex. I really thought Kyle's trajectory was going to begin. I really lost heart. And I think that's one reason I didn't like the sex. Boring as buggery! ... ooops ... mebbe not lol

 

But the clock just pissed me off mightily. On the other hand, I've seen some misdirects in my time, but that was a double misdirect. Awesomely clever.

 

Sofia! I liked Sofia. I shrank into a corner and held the ipad further from my eyes when she entered a scene, but, yeah, I still liked her. These older rich women can so often be detached from reality. Not Sofia!

 

Some criticism ... oh, come on, get real! Spelling ... basis, not bases, breathe not breath. And there was one other, more common, but I canna mind it now :D

 

But those are pedantry. What was buluddy annoying, though, was the short chapters. It was very interruptive and continually broke the spell. I really would recommend taking this down and collapsing the last thirty chapters into fifteen. No edits etc, just consolidation. The writing etc is just dandy.

 

Anyway, on the whole, this was first class, and really enjoyable. Only one other suggestion ... since you felt it necessary to change pov for the last three chapters (and god alone knows why!), could you not do another chapter from Sofia's pov ... the bit where she stares down that conniving little scumbag (I'm not going to mention his name cos it's an insult to its Gàidhlig roots!) to the level of his serpentine belly.

 

Oh that would be nice. Mmmm, yes. So nice. Very nice. Very very ni...

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