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Infinity

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Genres: General Fiction, Romance
Sub-genres: Drama, General Romance

It's Christmas Eve and Jack sits by his comatose best friend's hospital bed, he reflects on their years of friendship and prays for a miracle.

Copyright © 2012 Andrew Todd; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 1
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 0
  • World Building 0
  • Like 10
  • Love 1
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ChillFire

ChillFire 61

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

 

It’s Christmas Eve. Finn is in a coma, and his prognosis isn’t great. Jack, his boyfriend, has been sitting at his side every day, hoping Finn will wake up and come back to him.

Will there be a miracle this Christmas?

What I Loved

Jack and Finn are a really cute couple. Great usage of flashbacks to show their love for each other and how it came to be.

I really liked this quote: “He wasn’t turned on by Finn because he was a boy; he was turned on by Finn because he was Finn.” Ah, the vast spectrum of sexuality.

Spoiler

Finn gradually working his way to being able to stand his ground (first having to be saved by Jack, then Jack teaching him what to do, and finally being able to use his skills against Simon) was excellent.

What Could’ve Been Better

Honestly, I don’t really have anything that I’d like to criticize. Yes, really.

Miscellaneous Thoughts

Spoiler

I really hope Simon got his comeuppance. Assaulting someone badly enough that they end up in a coma? He needs to be locked away for a long time to get some help, jeez.

Verdict

A heartwarming short story. I have to admit, the first time I sat down to read this I teared up a bit at the end.

Definitely give this a read.

5 stars.

 

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