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Tracy lives with his brother Callen, they moved to Florida for his brothers promotion and have come into contact with Callen's best friend from high school Alex or Chewy to most people who was a jerk, but just maybe he's changed.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
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  • 17. Chapter 17
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You've got me hooked, can't wait to see how this story plays out. Hope there is some happiness for both brothers down the line. It's good to see such a close relationship between them. Hope you give us some back story on Chewy, bet it's an interesting one,

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On 11/05/2016 09:45 PM, Petey said:

You've got me hooked, can't wait to see how this story plays out. Hope there is some happiness for both brothers down the line. It's good to see such a close relationship between them. Hope you give us some back story on Chewy, bet it's an interesting one,

Hey Petey,

I hope I do it justice for you. Please stay with the story I know it's slow going at the moment, things will heat up, move along and get better as we get through the story. Thank you for your kind words and be sure to keep it up as it always gives me inspiration.

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Honestly, i started reading this and i was like, 'yes, a good read!', then it started to go south. The characters just became unbelievable in the end. Tracy, for one became the nanny for everyone's kids after they treated him like shit.
It also became too 'syrupy'. My God, everybody loved everybody and although there were toddlers about everybody behaved.

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On 02/20/2017 12:52 PM, 7letcher said:

Honestly, i started reading this and i was like, 'yes, a good read!', then it started to go south. The characters just became unbelievable in the end. Tracy, for one became the nanny for everyone's kids after they treated him like shit.

It also became too 'syrupy'. My God, everybody loved everybody and although there were toddlers about everybody behaved.

I'm sorry you're not happy with it. I'm new to this and I'll try and do better for the future. It's a slow process for me but I am definitely hearing you and I'll take it on board. Thank you for taking the time in giving me feedback. I hope the reply doesn't come across as sarcastic or rude because it is not meant that way I assure you.

 

Regards

Joh

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Hi folks,

 

Just posted a spin-off to this story, which is about Chase, please take a look.

 

Thanks

 

Joh

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