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Goldilocks and the Three Lumberjacks

   (3 reviews)
Genres: Fantasy
Sub-genres: General Fantasy, Fairy Tales

2007 Fairy Tale Anthology -- needs tags

© 2007 Bondwriter -- This story is a work of fiction, all characters and plot lines are fictional. Any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental. Goldilocks and the Three Lumberjacks remains the property of the author. The story or characters may not be reproduced or republished elsewhere without the expressed written consent of the author.

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Carlos Hazday

Carlos Hazday 115,818

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

This reinterpretation of the traditional story has a blonde boy as Goldilocks and three lumberjacks replacing the bears. Aren't most lumberjacks bears in real life? I digress. It's an interesting take on the tale we all grew up with. The ending is cute as Goldilocks is told why the punishment inflicted for breaking into the cabin was what it was.

 

Although well written from a technical point of view, I felt the story faltered in its tone. At times it felt slow, at other times it flew by. The emotional content wasn't there most of the time. Overall it felt rushed and inconsistent.

 

All in all, it's not the best I've read but it's far from the worst. If you have a free thirty minutes, it's worth the read.

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