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Changing Focus

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Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Sub-genres: Adventure, General Romance

Sean was out in the woods taking pictures alone, at least he thought he was...

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  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 0
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 0
  • World Building 0
  • Like 8
  • Love 3
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    • 8,230 Words
    • 7,665 Views
    • 27 Comments

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Carlos Hazday

Carlos Hazday 114,782

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

At a little over 8,000 words, this short story isn't so short. But it'll feel like it is. You may become so lost in the narrative, the end will creep up on you.

 

Told at a sedate pace, Changing Focus is full of reach descriptions and wonderful dialogue. Those of us with an independent streak will relate to Sean and his reluctant acceptance of help. Jason can best be described as a gentle giant. One of those good souls willing to lend a hand to anyone in need.

 

Although it's a love story, the slow build up is refreshing after being constantly bombarded by the 'love at first sight' crap so many authors sling our way. I enjoyed reading it and believe so will you.

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