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Ripped

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

Declan was the epitome of strength, the top defensive back, top student in his classes, part of THE top-notch football team. But when he fails a basic challenge in front of his entire team--especially to a tiny thing like Bailey McIntyre--he's furious. So is his team captain. And Declan just can't seem let it go. And it gets worse... because he starts to think about Bailey as more than just the guy who destroyed his reputation.

This story is set at an elite private all-boys school.  The campus is very collegiate-like, and each student is expected to participate in a sport of some kind as a way of integrating mind, body, and spirit. It will be told in three parts.  Part 1 is exclusively from Declan's POV, part 2 will be Bailey's POV, and the chapters in part 3 will alternate between the two.  It is a slightly different approach I'm trying with this story, so I hope you enjoy it.
Content Warnings:  depression, bullying, self-harm (I'll add others if I think of them).
Copyright © 2017 craftingmom; All Rights Reserved.

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dughlas
1 minute ago, Drew Espinosa said:

Puh-lease! -_- I'd be the priest that'd oversee the sacrifice!

You always just want to stand around and watch ...

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Drew Espinosa
16 minutes ago, dughlas said:

You always just want to stand around and watch ...

Nuh-uh! I'd have a more hands-on approach! :P 

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dughlas
5 minutes ago, Drew Espinosa said:

Nuh-uh! I'd have a more hands-on approach! :P 

And then you bite. 

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Former Member
3 minutes ago, dughlas said:

And then you bite. 

No, then he shoves! The virgin is going into a volcano, right? Oops, someone lost their balance and fell in!  ;-)

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craftingmom
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Omg, LOL. :)

 

Okay okay, no need to sacrifice  the poor virgins!   While the muse isn't playing nice right now, I keep hoping she'll come pound down my door soon.  However, I now have my husband nudging me ( okay, shoving me) to try to get her moving, especially after I read him these comments.   I have half a chapter done, so I'm aiming for one by the end of the weekend....  little busy running kids to play practice,  gymnastics practice and Ninja competitions.   Seems like it never let's up, I thought it would be better after they went back to school...  

 

Thanks all for keeping me on my toes and motivated. ..especially since miss muse is on vacation. ..

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Hunter Thomson
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1 hour ago, craftingmom said:

Omg, LOL. :)

 

Okay okay, no need to sacrifice  the poor virgins!   While the muse isn't playing nice right now, I keep hoping she'll come pound down my door soon.  However, I now have my husband nudging me ( okay, shoving me) to try to get her moving, especially after I read him these comments.   I have half a chapter done, so I'm aiming for one by the end of the weekend....  little busy running kids to play practice,  gymnastics practice and Ninja competitions.   Seems like it never let's up, I thought it would be better after they went back to school...  

 

Thanks all for keeping me on my toes and motivated. ..especially since miss muse is on vacation. ..

Thank you so much for replying. I know we sort of went overboard in our pleas, but it's appreciated that you're still working on Ripped and I can appreciate that the muses are not playing nicely right now.

 

We shall be faithfully waiting, don't feel the need to rush.

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wildone
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Does this mean we are not sacrificing Drew anymore :(

 

;)

 

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Hunter Thomson
2 hours ago, wildone said:

Does this mean we are not sacrificing Drew anymore :(

 

;)

 

I mean, I guess we could if that’s still the consensus.

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Drew Espinosa
2 hours ago, wildone said:

Does this mean we are not sacrificing Drew anymore :(

 

I'll gladly sacrifice myself for you in LPW, Tsar Steve! :D 

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1brokNangel
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8 hours ago, craftingmom said:

Omg, LOL. :)

 

Okay okay, no need to sacrifice  the poor virgins!   While the muse isn't playing nice right now, I keep hoping she'll come pound down my door soon.  However, I now have my husband nudging me ( okay, shoving me) to try to get her moving, especially after I read him these comments.   I have half a chapter done, so I'm aiming for one by the end of the weekend....  little busy running kids to play practice,  gymnastics practice and Ninja competitions.   Seems like it never let's up, I thought it would be better after they went back to school...  

 

Thanks all for keeping me on my toes and motivated. ..especially since miss muse is on vacation. ..

 

Time to fire that muse clearly it's not doing its job....place an ad in the classified section of the paper that you are looking for a more motivated muse. 

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Former Member
1 hour ago, 1brokNangel said:

Time to fire that muse clearly it's not doing its job....place an ad in the classified section of the paper that you are looking for a more motivated muse. 

Or maybe you can trade your muse in for a different model, @craftingmom. You might check with @Timothy M.. He might be interested in a trade!  ;-)

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FormerMember4
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*sigh* Does anyone know how to control Bailey withdrawal? I need a fix desperately!!! 😰

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FormerMember4
7 minutes ago, jt15136 said:

I miss this beautiful story as well. @BlindAmbition In order to keep the withdrawal at bay You just have to re-re-re-read it again. :kiss:

Been there, done that! Maybe if you narrate, it will sound fresh and new. 💋

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Former Member
2 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Been there, done that! Maybe if you narrate, it will sound fresh and new. 💋

Does it seem like a different story if you change the narrating voice (especially if you switch the gender)?  ;-)

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FormerMember4
3 minutes ago, droughtquake said:

Does it seem like a different story if you change the narrating voice (especially if you switch the gender)?  ;-)

My screen reader is female... Samantha is her name, no joke. Daniel is drab and boring. Reminds me of a really awful first date.

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