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Forbidden Fantasy

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The elf Kiven find more than he ever thought possible when goblins attack his village

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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 2
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 1
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 1

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  • Love 5
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Table of Contents
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 9,295 Words
    • 4,130 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 9,744 Words
    • 2,679 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 11,575 Words
    • 2,645 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 6,201 Words
    • 2,816 Views
    • 11 Comments

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mogwhy

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

As BHopper2 said said, this is a great Fantasy story! Dragons, Elves, Good, Evil, War and Healing with a great twist at the end. If you like D&D and role-playing games this one is for you. The formatting problems in chapter four were small. This one I will read again!

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Brayon

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Elves, Dragons, Magic... what more can you ask for from a High Fantasy Love story? In my opinion, this story was very good. Well written, captivating, and painted a picture that was amazing. I saw a lot of elements that reminded me of my days playing Dungeons and Dragons, and the Pathfinder RPG, that it made me want to break out my dice and character sheets.

 

Pros: Great visuals, Great Characters, and the love story was beautiful.

 

Cons: Some formatting issues in Chapter 4, a few missing words in all four chapters.

 

Still, five stars. Love it.

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