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Oil and Water

   (4 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction, Romance
Sub-genres: Drama, General Romance

How can we be sure we're making the right choice in who we love? What do we do with the doubts we feel? This is what Paul is facing, and suddenly, it all becomes too much. Walking away seems the right path to take, but, he doesn't want to hurt Chris... he really doesn't....

This story was inspired by a first line prompt, #694, that fired up my muse. "I'm tired of this, so I'm going home."

Warning: There is mention of physical and emotional abuse.

Copyright © 2018 Headstall; All Rights Reserved.
  • Signature Author
  • 08/29/2018 (Updated: 08/29/2018)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 2,568 Words
  • 7,252 Views
  • 59 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

Story Recommendations (3 members)

  • Action Packed 2
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 3
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 1
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 0
  • Like 7
  • Love 10
  • Wow 1
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raven1

raven1 37,592

  

Paul and Chris may be like oil and water, but once they learn to communicate they figure out how to make a great recipe together.  A short but fuzzy and warm story of love that definitely leaves you feeling good.

Response from the author:

I believe it's true that opposites attract, but after that attraction happens, there is real work to be done in building a solid relationship. This little story was based on a prompt, and I loved where it took me. Happy that you enjoyed it, my friend. Cheers!

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Albert1434

Albert1434 142,477

   2 of 3 members found this review helpful 2 / 3 members

Great short story filled with Gary Magic loved it :hug:

Response from the author:

Gary Magic? Love it. Thanks, Albert!! I appreciate the review very much. :hug: 

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chris191070

chris191070 55,705

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A well written strong emotional tale, it shows how important communication is in a relationship. It would be nice to see more of Paul and Chris in the future.

A great story highly recommended as a story to read.

Response from the author:

Hey, Chris. I dreamed about these guys last night, and there is a further story there. So, the likelihood of seeing them again has increased. Who knows. :)  Thanks so much for leaving this review... it means a lot. :D Cheers... Gary.... 

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jtpawlik

jtpawlik 165

   1 of 3 members found this review helpful 1 / 3 members

There better be more chapters to this, no way that this can be "complete"

Response from the author:

Hey, Buddy. I'm really glad you liked it, but for now at least, it is complete. You have me thinking, though. Maybe I will revisit Paul and Chris in the future. They were pretty strong characters in my head while I wrote this. Thanks so much for reviewing... cheers... Gary.... :) 

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