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    Leo Lacaz
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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The Strivers - 27. Chapter 27 - A Step into the Unknown

A cryptic message for Alexei breaks the suite’s calm, thrusting him toward an urgent meeting in St. Petersburg. With Dimitri’s help, he pinpoints the spot and gears up for an unexpected mission, heart pounding with excitement and nerves. Reaching a plain fast-food joint, he wavers, torn between doubt and resolve as the unknown looms ahead.
The suite’s buzzer rang, slicing through the room’s heavy quiet. Alexei shot up fast. He didn’t even need to glance at his friends to know they’d all caught the sound. Illya and Dimitri swapped a quick look before fixing their eyes on the door, waiting for what came next.
 
The bellhop stepped in wordlessly, holding a small envelope. The three boys froze on the spot. Alexei’s brow creased as he spotted his name scrawled on it. A faint shiver ran down his spine as he reached out.
“For Monsieur Alexei,” the bellhop said in a flat tone, handing it over before slipping out as quietly as he’d come.
 
Their eyes met. A weird silence settled over the room. It was the first time a message had singled one of them out. Alexei felt a strange jolt, like he’d been shoved under a spotlight, some spy gearing up for a job. But his focus locked on the envelope.
 
Without thinking, he tore it open with an almost automatic snap. Inside, a single sheet listed an address, a 1:00 p.m. meet, and a name: Yuri.
“Well?” Dimitri leaned in, curious.
 
Alexei passed him the paper without a word. Dimitri checked the time on his phone: 11:20. His brows shot up.
“Whoa, where’s this meet at?” he asked, glancing at the address.
 
Alexei frowned, just as stumped. No one had an answer. Dimitri let out a curse.
“Damn it, are we useless or what?” he blurted, lunging for the biggest case with a wild energy. He flipped it open in one swift move.
 
In a flash, he pulled out a top-notch laptop and fired it up without a second thought.
“You think there’s internet?” he asked with a half-grin, fingers already tapping the keys.
“Gotta be,” Alexei shot back, like he needed to hear it himself.
 
The screen glowed to life. Dimitri hunched over it, zeroed in, hands flying.
“Okay, okay…” he muttered, pulling up a browser. “Where’s it at again?” He turned to Alexei.
 
Alexei read off the address from the paper, and Dimitri punched it in quick.
“Got it!” he grinned, triumphant. “
It’s a solid three-quarters of an hour from here, so you don’t have much time to waste if you want to make it on time!
 
Alexei swallowed hard. A weird pressure squeezed his chest.
“Okay… okay… What do I take?”
 
Dimitri handed him a phone.
“It’s secure. Press here to talk, and we’ll hear you.”
 
Alexei nodded.
“Stick this in your ear – you’ll hear us too. Got it?” Dimitri added, tossing him a tiny earpiece.
“Got it.”
 
He cast a last look around the suite, double-checking. Something caught his eye: a small bundle on the table. Metro tickets. Why tickets? And why folded in half?
 
He snatched them up fast.
“Here we go!” he huffed, sucking in a deep breath.
 
The elevator doors slid shut, whisking him down to the lobby. Downstairs, he took a big gulp of air before stepping into the street’s bustle. The city felt calm, almost unreal, like a frame from a spy flick.
 
He headed for the nearest metro stop. Tickets in his pocket, every tick of the clock pressed on him. The ride would be short, but he had to stay sharp. The rumble of trains, distant horns, and the crowd’s shuffle wrapped around him. Alexei wove through people with a near-overdone focus, scanning every twitch, every glance.
 
At each stop, his mind stayed locked. He checked slyly for tails, but nothing stood out. Still, he couldn’t shake the feeling of starring in some thriller, every step measured like on screen.
 
The trip felt too long and too quick all at once. Finally, he hit his stop with ten minutes to spare.
 
The metro doors parted. Alexei slipped out, heart thumping, thoughts a mess. Ahead stood a plain fast-food joint, its front nothing special. Doubt crept in: This can’t be it, can it?
 
He stood still a beat, adjusted his earpiece, and stepped toward the entrance, a mix of nerves and grit pushing him on.
 
This was the meet? Where was Yuri?
 
He breathed deep, feeling lost yet braced.
 
The mission was real. Now he had to find out what waited.
 
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Yesterday's chapter and today's chapter build further tension, and the author stays true to himself in describing subtle methods of reducing the three teen boys to pawns - initially the extreme luxury. Dimitri, who is known to be most susceptible to this, is kept in a good mood. He can't suppress his anger that the cryptic message is intended for Alexei, but he proves to be cooperative, and Alexei is put under time pressure and realizes that everything seems to be following a script. I can hardly wait to read what Yuri wants from Alexei... hopefully the next chapter will be out today.

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@benfran28  Thank you so much for your detailed and insightful comment! It means a lot to me to see how deeply you’re diving into the story and picking up on the nuances I’m trying to weave around Alexei, Dimitri, and Illya. You’ve perfectly captured the rising tension and the dynamic between the three boys – Dimitri and his susceptibility, Alexei under pressure, and that feeling that everything seems orchestrated. I love that you’re noticing these subtleties; it motivates me to keep going in this direction! As for Yuri… I won’t spoil anything, but I can promise you the next chapter will be worth the wait. Not today, unfortunately, but very soon – stay tuned, and thanks again for following The Strivers with so much enthusiasm!

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@centexhairysub  Thank you again for your always thoughtful feedback – I can always count on you to share your opinion on every chapter, no matter the story, and it’s something I truly appreciate! You’re right to say that the three boys still remain a bit guarded with each other – trust and openness might come with time, and I’m excited to see what you’ll think of it as the story progresses. The mission is only just beginning, and I’m so eager to hear your impressions of what’s to come. Thank you for following me chapter after chapter!

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@weinerdog  Thank you for your sharp insight – Dimitri as a model teammate hasn’t escaped you, and I love that! As for your hunch about this test… let’s just say the shadows sometimes hide more than we think. Alexei, alone or not, might well unveil some surprises. Keep watching for clues; your curiosity brings the story to life! The next part is coming, and I can’t wait to see where your guesses take you.

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