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The sleepy village of Crumbington is about to get a wake-up call.

When the new chairperson of the Summer Fête Committee pushes to create a naked calendar of the Crumbington football team, mouths drop open. Her further pronouncement at having snagged a celebrity host for the fête—rising television and movie star Clifton O’Keefe, and ex-resident of Crumbington—is met with indifference.

Not by Nathan Fresher, though, local baker and captain of the football team. He had been Clifton’s boyfriend in high school, until Clifton and his family disappeared into the night over ten years ago.

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  • 1. Prologue
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  • 2. January
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  • 3. Cousin
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  • 4. Star
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  • 5. Intervention
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  • 6. Dinner
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  • 7. Phone
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  • 8. February
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  • 9. Awkward
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  • 10. Together
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  • 11. Solicitor
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  • 12. Photoshoot
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  • 13. Benedetti's
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  • 14. March
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  • 15. Oxford
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Thanks to everyone for reading.

I'm going to be away for a week and am told that internet connection is troublesome. I'm submitting a chapter today and will aim to do the same every week until the story has completely unfolded.

Brian
aka Lomax61

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Chapter 11: Solicitor

Before I head back to Brexit, I wanted to point out a couple of things during the chapter and ask a few questions:-

  1. Is this actually a cliffhanger, as so many of you have stated? For starters, would Grant in Melbourne have even been shown the Fresher will? Unlikely. Flynn & Fox would have no idea about its existence (why would they?) and the UK end would be under no obligation to disclose this. Ms Cawthorn was simply giving Nathan a piece of advice (and there'll probably be an invoice on his doormat later in the week);
  2. Secondly (in the letter: ...I’m leaving most of my wealth to my son), why would Grant want a little bakery in cute but claustrophobic Crumbington, even if it turns out to be his by birthright, when it sound as though he's got more than enough money, and is already living in paradise (well, Melbourne)? I'm not saying he definitely wouldn't, I'm just saying there would have to be some serious motivation to want him to pursue something like that 😉...

I'll try to post another chapter next Tuesday before I leave for "non EU", "United (for now) Kingdom", soon to be the "51st US State".

@lomax61 Brian

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