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The Return to Benden 3. Ninth Pass Pern

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The Southern project is coming to an end. Riders and dragons prepare for the return to Benden Weyr to fight Thread.

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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 2
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 0
  • World Building 2

  • Like 3
  • Love 1

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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Cadude145

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

I am now beginning to understand the line of the story now.  I'm a Pern fan so I get all the references and I do remember Ruth going back in time and saying "I always know When I am" or something like that.

GOOD or continuing character development.

 

Now, Mawgrim, please get some adminstrative assistance to put your story in order and as unfinished.  Your posting a new chapter every few days, so that's kudos plus and you have a great story. 

    It is however more difficult to follow the storyline.  I finally figured out to follow the post date.

 

Thanks again for a good story.

 

Response from the author:

Thanks for your comments. I'm still learning how to use this site to post stories, but I think I've now managed to compile them together into a series so that they can be read in the correct order.

I will be posting a longer story set in the same timeline shortly.

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