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Sneakin

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A delinquent sneaks out of his home to go shoplifting. 

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  • Action Packed 2
  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 3
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 2
  • Feel-Good 3
  • Humor 3
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 1

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centexhairysub

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A snarky irreverent look at life as you try to figure out where you fit in and how to relate to those around you.  

Interesting characters and the writing and pacing were really well done. The two main characters were well developed for such a short story, and it was easy to care about them.

Some editing would have been useful, but the even like it is, the flow was good.  That said, some judicious editing would have helped streamline the story and most likely eliminated a few weak tangents that seem to go nowhere.  A few of the adult characters were a little too one dimensional, but that was due more to lack of their involvement with the main thrust of the story.  

A funny enjoyable read but would not mind a short follow up on a conversation with the one character's father and a little more background on a few others.  

 

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Dan South

   3 of 4 members found this review helpful 3 / 4 members

I opened this and started reading it 40 days ago when it posted. It’s taken me so long to finish it because every time I picked back up I had to start from the beginning again. Not because I’d forgotten the storyline…it’s not forgettable.

 The flow had captured me and I want to read it start-to-finish in one sitting. Such sophisticated storytelling. Following you @penguinsrgay so I won’t miss anything else you share.

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