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Twist of Fate

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Sub-genres: Adventure, General Romance

Aiden, 16 year old. Wandering through school. Over coming obstacles and relationship(s).

Aiden 16 year old boy. Wandering through high school. Over coming obstacles and relationship(s) problems. He loves football and is good at. But will having Jason around be the Kryptonite that brings him down? 
Jason, Aiden's ex childhood friend. Tall, tan, and handsome. Unsure if he's gay, bi, or straight.
Here's the discussion forum; http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/42294-twist-of-fate/
This story belongs to the Author. Any characters or places said in the stories is coincidences. (2016) (Remijay) All Rights Reserved

Story Recommendations (3 members)

  • Action Packed 2
  • Addictive/Pacing 3
  • Characters 3
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 3
  • Feel-Good 3
  • Humor 3
  • Smoldering 3
  • Tearjerker 3
  • Unique 3
  • World Building 2

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JayBear41

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

The author has a great sense of teenage personalities and emotions. The parents presented seem to be withdrawn from their children, but this adds to the feeling of teenage angst.  I was a bit confused about the chronology.   Sometimes a lot happens and five or six chapters later it is the next day after what seems like a much earlier major incident. I pushed myself to read the entire story and found that the ending was not what I expected even though it was well developed.  Try not to give up on the read if the chronology confuses you.

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Cane23

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is coming of age story resisting some cliches and already seen plots. Aiden, the main character is fighting his insecurities, love pains, sexuality, betrayal, molesting. His decisions are not always the smartest one, but as naive teenager with wild hormones, he is doing the best he can. As old saying says what doesn't kill you make you stronger.             Aiden finds the love he deserves, and it will be interesting to see his personal (physical and psychological) growth in Book 2. It would be nice to see tied up some loose ends from Book 1 also.  @Remijay has made a good basis to continue this interesting story, hope we will hear more of Aiden and Xavier in the future. 

Response from the author:

Thank you for the review :) it means the world to me. AS for some of the loose ends, can't really say for sure. But book 2 will most likely be in Xavier's POV. I have to give my other main character a chance in the spotlight. However, there will be times that Aiden does make an appearance with his own thoughts. Stay tuned for some epic adventures. What awaits, is to be seen. Thanks again for the book review. XOXO 

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