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The Lair

   (2 reviews)
Genres: Horror
Sub-genres: Monster

A young teen, failing to connect with his father, is forced to face his own resolve when his brother is taken by a mysterious creature.

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  • Action Packed 3
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 4
  • Chills 3
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 3
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 3
  • World Building 0
  • Like 2
  • Love 2
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  • 1. The Lair
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Mikiesboy

Mikiesboy 143,869

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

The story opens with the family dynamic and ends on a sort of supernatural note.  It didn't quite work for me. Some foreshadowing of the creature would have helped this story. I think this author should attempt another story in this genre.  The writing isn't bad; the story just needs to be rounded.

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